[22] The Triumph of a queen || @the_Galdur
Hi there!!!<3
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Cover, Title and Blurb- 10/ 10
Grammar and Spelling-7/ 10
Detail-10/ 10
Plot-5/ 5
Originality-3/ 5
Flow of the story-4/ 5
Overall enjoyment-4/ 5
Total-43/ 50
Review- it's a smooth enjoyable historical INDIAN fiction, and I loved how the explanation of luxuries of a Indian royal is not lacking anything, I love the character of the , as in some stories I read that if a princess is into fighting and all, she is serious all the time, she is the MOST CAPABLE. But for a change, this story expresses the protagonist as, rebellious, tomboy, yet a gossip box, clumsy. Although, I'll say that you should edit the chapters, and the language sometimes becomes really difficult to understand, but the reader gets the point reading 3-4 lines, but still you can improve that!
Sorry if I offended you in any ways
Author you rock!
With best wishes
Azmi<3
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