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[22] The Triumph of a queen || @the_Galdur

Hi there!!!<3


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Cover, Title and Blurb- 10/ 10

Grammar and Spelling-7/ 10

Detail-10/ 10

Plot-5/ 5

Originality-3/ 5

Flow of the story-4/ 5

Overall enjoyment-4/ 5

Total-43/ 50

Review- it's a smooth enjoyable historical INDIAN fiction, and I loved how the explanation of luxuries of a Indian royal is not lacking anything, I love the character of the , as in some stories I read that if a princess is into fighting and all, she is serious all the time, she is the MOST CAPABLE. But for a change, this story expresses the protagonist as, rebellious, tomboy, yet a gossip box, clumsy. Although, I'll say that you should edit the chapters, and the language sometimes becomes really difficult to understand, but the reader gets the point reading 3-4 lines, but still you can improve that!

Sorry if I offended you in any ways

Author you rock!

With best wishes

Azmi<3

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