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❝ 𝖶𝖾𝗅𝖼𝗈𝗆𝖾 𝗍𝗈 𝗍𝗁𝖾 𝗕𝗲𝘀𝘁 𝗣𝗿𝗼𝗹𝗼𝗴𝘂𝗲 𝖱𝖾𝗏𝗂𝖾𝗐 𝖠𝗋𝖾𝖺 𝖺 𝗉𝗋𝗈𝗅𝗈𝗀𝗎𝖾 𝗂𝗌 𝗍𝗁𝖾 𝖿𝗂𝗋𝗌𝗍 𝗐𝗁𝗂𝗌𝗉𝖾𝗋 𝗈𝖿 𝖺 𝗌𝗍𝗈𝗋𝗒, 𝗍𝗁𝖾 𝗌𝗉𝖺𝗋𝗄 𝗍𝗁𝖺𝗍 𝗱𝗿𝗮𝘄𝘀 𝗿𝗲𝗮𝗱𝗲𝗿𝘀 𝗶𝗻𝘁𝗼 𝗮 𝘄𝗼𝗿𝗹𝗱  𝗒𝖾𝗍 𝗍𝗈 𝗎𝗇𝖿𝗈𝗅𝖽. 𝖳𝗈𝖽𝖺𝗒, 𝗐𝖾 𝗁𝗈𝗇𝗈𝗋 𝗍𝗁𝖾 𝗉𝗋𝗈𝗅𝗈𝗀𝗎𝖾𝗌 𝗍𝗁𝖺𝗍 𝖼𝖺𝗉𝗍𝗂𝗏𝖺𝗍𝖾𝖽, 𝗶𝗻𝘁𝗿𝗶𝗴𝘂𝗲𝗱 𝗮𝗻𝗱 𝘀𝗲𝘁 𝘁𝗵𝗲 𝘀𝘁𝗮𝗴𝗲 𝖿𝗈𝗋 𝗎𝗇𝖿𝗈𝗋𝗀𝖾𝗍𝗍𝖺𝖻𝗅𝖾 𝗃𝗈𝗎𝗋𝗇𝖾𝗒𝗌.  

𝖳𝗈 𝗼𝘂𝗿 𝘄𝗶𝗻𝗻𝗲𝗿𝘀 𝗰𝗼𝗻𝗴𝗿𝗮𝘁𝘂𝗹𝗮𝘁𝗶𝗼𝗻𝘀 𝗈𝗇 𝖼𝗋𝖺𝖿𝗍𝗂𝗇𝗀 𝗈𝗉𝖾𝗇𝗂𝗇𝗀𝗌 𝗍𝗁𝖺𝗍 𝗅𝖾𝖺𝗏𝖾 𝖺 𝗅𝖺𝗌𝗍𝗂𝗇𝗀 𝗂𝗆𝗉𝖺𝖼𝗍! 𝖠𝗇𝖽 𝗍𝗈 𝗍𝗁𝗈𝗌𝖾 𝗐𝗁𝗈 𝖽𝗂𝖽𝗇’𝗍 𝗐𝗂𝗇 𝖾𝗏𝖾𝗋𝗒 𝗀𝗋𝖾𝖺𝗍 𝘀𝘁𝗼𝗿𝘆 𝗯𝗲𝗴𝗶𝗻𝘀 𝘄𝗶𝘁𝗵 𝗮 𝘀𝗶𝗻𝗴𝗹𝗲 𝗽𝗮𝗴𝗲 . 𝖪𝖾𝖾𝗉 𝗐𝗋𝗂𝗍𝗂𝗇𝗀, 𝗄𝖾𝖾𝗉 𝗋𝖾𝖿𝗂𝗇𝗂𝗇𝗀 𝗒𝗈𝗎𝗋 𝗆𝗈𝗆𝖾𝗇𝗍 𝗂𝗌 𝗈𝗇 𝗍𝗁𝖾 𝗁𝗈𝗋𝗂𝗓𝗈𝗇 . ❞

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╰┈➤ My Date from Hell by urLuv_rin

𖹭 Captivating hook  - ❪ 20/20 ❫

Manages to grasp the reader’s attention at the very first sentence. Explains the situation and encourages to read further.

𖹭 Set-up and Context  - ❪ 20/20 ❫

Tone and atmosphere are established, both through action and dialogue. We get context, background and explanation of what the story and the main conflict will be about.

𖹭 Foreshadowing  - ❪ 15/20 ❫

We get an explanation as to what the main character’s problem and goal will be, but the scene was mostly action and dialogue. There wasn’t much room for foreshadowing or hinting at any key events, but we do get some subtle clues without giving too much away.

𖹭 Connection to the main story - ❪ 19/20 ❫

Everything that happens in the prologue has a clear connection to the main story. With a literal portal, the transition from prologue to main story couldn’t be any smoother.

𖹭 Brevity and Impact  - ❪ 20/20 ❫

Good length, concise, yet we already get a lot of useful information. We get a clear and intriguing introduction to the world and the main conflict.

𖹭 Total  - ❪ 94/100 ❫

❪ Recommendations for improvement ❫

The prologue of My Date from Hell delivers an electrifying start, immediately pulling the reader in with its gripping opening sentence. Action and dialogue seamlessly set the tone, while also providing essential context and background, making it clear what the story and its central conflict will be about.

Although foreshadowing takes a backseat to the fast-paced action, there are subtle hints that build intrigue without revealing too much too soon. The transition into the main story is handled exceptionally well, ensuring a smooth narrative flow. With its perfect balance of brevity and impact, this prologue offers a strong, engaging introduction that leaves the reader eager for more

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╰┈➤ Scarlet Red by pxrpleberryjxmin

𖹭 Captivating hook  - ❪ 18/20 ❫

Although not clear what the character’s motivations are, the threat already feels very real, grasping the reader’s attention immediately from the first paragraph.

𖹭 Set-up and Context  - ❪ 15/20 ❫

Sets the tone and atmosphere. Not much context yet, so it is not very clear why the events are happening.

𖹭 Foreshadowing  - ❪ 15/20 ❫

I couldn’t find many hints or clues yet. The prologue doesn’t give much away, but doesn’t build any anticipation towards some key event either.

𖹭 Connection to the main story  - ❪ 19/20 ❫

The prologue instantly shows that a character is in trouble with some bad people and is being forced to spill the secrets, which is a smooth transition to the rest of  the story.

𖹭 Brevity and Impact  - ❪ 19/20 ❫

Good length for a prologue, concise yet powerful. Good introduction to the story, whatever it may be about.

𖹭 Total  - ❪ 86/100 ❫

❪ Recommendations for improvement ❫

The prologue of Scarlet Red wastes no time in pulling the reader into a tense and dangerous situation. The immediate sense of threat makes for a gripping opening, ensuring that the audience is hooked from the first paragraph. While the motivations behind the events remain unclear, the atmosphere and tone are set effectively, immersing the reader in the unfolding drama.

The transition into the main story is handled smoothly, with the protagonist’s predicament providing a strong foundation for what’s to come. Though foreshadowing is minimal, the prologue maintains a perfect balance between brevity and impact, offering just enough to intrigue the reader while leaving plenty to discover. Scarlet Red starts with intensity and promise, making it an engaging introduction to the book.

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╰┈➤ No Machigai with Revenge Wife by Mea_tristis_books

𖹭 Captivating hook - ❪ 15/20 ❫

What happens in the first chapter is intriguing enough, but it doesn’t necessarily grab the reader’s attention to a point where you absolutely want to continue reading.

𖹭 Set-up and Context  - ❪ 15/20 ❫

Sets the tone and atmosphere splendidly. Doesn’t give a lot of context or background yet, so as a reader you’re still a bit in the dark. Writing style adds to the atmosphere though.

𖹭 Foreshadowing - ❪ 15/20 ❫

After reading the first chapter, the reader has absolutely no clue what is going to happen next. It was written well, but you don’t have the feeling that there was any foreshadowing or hidden clues.

𖹭 Connection to the main story  - ❪ 19/20 ❫

Whatever happens next, this first chapter has set the stage for the main events to start unfolding.

𖹭 Brevity and Impact  - ❪ 20/20 ❫

Perfect length for a prologue. Concise and powerful. Although not clear yet what the main conflict will be about, you get the feeling that you are properly introduced to the world and the story.

𖹭 Total  - ❪ 85/100 ❫

❪ Recommendations for improvement ❫

The prologue of No Machigai with Revenge Wife establishes a compelling tone and atmosphere, drawing the reader into its world with a strong sense of style. While the opening is intriguing, it doesn’t immediately demand the reader’s full attention, leaving some mystery about where the story is headed.

Despite the lack of foreshadowing, the prologue does a great job of setting the stage for the events to unfold, providing a solid foundation for the narrative. The writing style enhances the immersive quality of the introduction, and while the exact nature of the main conflict remains unclear, the concise yet impactful structure ensures the reader is well-prepared for what’s to come. A strong, atmospheric start that invites curiosity.

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╰┈➤ December 4 by dyingfrominside

𖹭 Captivating hook  - ❪ 15/20 ❫

What happens in the prologue is quite intriguing, but it doesn’t necessarily grab the reader’s attention to a point where you absolutely want to continue reading.

𖹭 Set-up and Context  - ❪ 15/20 ❫

The tone and atmosphere for the prologue is set, yet it stays unclear if this properly represents the tone that will appear in the whole story. We’re being offered little context or background, which makes it rather difficult to follow the story.

𖹭 Foreshadowing  - ❪ 16/20 ❫

Although not clear what or where, the way in which the prologue is written give you the idea that there are already some hidden clues as to what the main story will be about.

𖹭 Connection to the main story  - ❪ 19/20 ❫

The descriptions and actions feel integral to the main story. The stage is being set, and the transition into the rest of the narrative is done nicely.

𖹭 Brevity and Impact  - ❪ 18/20 ❫

Not too long, but some information was not concise enough. Yet, it was a very strong prologue, giving a powerful introduction to the main story.

𖹭 Total  - ❪ 83/20 ❫

❪ Recommendations for improvement ❫

The prologue of December 4 presents an intriguing premise with strong descriptions and a seamless transition into the main narrative. While it doesn’t immediately demand the reader’s attention, it does create subtle hints that build curiosity. The tone and atmosphere are well-established, though it remains unclear if they fully represent the entire story. Some details could have been more concise, but overall, the prologue delivers a compelling introduction with hidden clues that encourage speculation. Its connection to the main story feels natural, making it a strong starting point.

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╰┈➤ Forever be my Always by IrenicJ_stories

𖹭 Captivating hook  - ❪ 15/20 ❫

Quite interesting chapter, but so far it doesn’t necessarily grab the reader’s attention to the fullest.

𖹭 Set-up and Context - ❪ 15/20 ❫

Sets the tone and atmosphere of the story. We already get some context and background (or at least the notice that we will get background later), but so far, it is not yet clear what the main narrative will be.

𖹭 Foreshadowing  - ❪ 13/20 ❫

The prologue builds some anticipation, but there aren’t any hints or clues at what the main story will be about. Additionally, there is a lot given away already, which enriches the emotional bond with the characters, but that is not necessarily something a prologue should do already.

𖹭 Connection to the main story  - ❪ 17/20 ❫

The events in the prologue set the stage for the main plot, but much of it doesn’t feel integral to the story. I feel like only the last few paragraphs are of actual importance, which doesn’t mean that the former events in the chapter weren’t pleasant to read.

𖹭 Brevity and Impact  - ❪ 15/20 ❫

A prologue is commonly a bit shorter, hence the information given in this one wasn’t concise enough, but it was still okay. It gives a nice introduction to the story’s world and the main conflict that will appear.

𖹭 Total  - ❪ 77/100 ❫

❪ Recommendations for improvement ❫

The prologue of Forever be my Always offers an intriguing introduction to the story, setting the tone and atmosphere well. While it doesn’t immediately grip the reader, it does establish a solid foundation with hints of background and context. The emotional depth of the characters is a nice touch, even if it might come a bit early. Some parts feel less integral to the main story, but the last paragraphs provide a strong connection. The length could be more concise, but overall, it presents a compelling setup for what’s to come

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╰┈➤ Ancilla by SeraDrake

𖹭 Captivating hook  - ❪ 17/20 ❫

The prologue manages to grab the reader’s attention. Although some parts within the long prologues tend to make you lose that attention, many other parts create intrigue and encourage the reader to keep reading.

𖹭 Set-up and Context  - ❪ 16/20 ❫

The tone and atmosphere are set, but with so much information it is difficult to decide what was absolutely essential context and what could be overlooked at some points.

𖹭 Foreshadowing  - ❪ 14/20 ❫

While the prologue contains a lot of pleasant parts to read, it isn’t very clear what the author wants us to learn before starting the full story. It feels like a story on its own, rather than a puzzle filled with foreshadowing and clues.

𖹭 Connection to the main story  - ❪ 19/20 ❫

The prologue sets the stage for the main plot, and there is a fairly nice transition towards the next chapters.

𖹭 Brevity and Impact  - ❪ 12/20 ❫

The prologue is way too long, either for Wattpad or no-Wattpad standards. You lose yourself in the abundance of information, forgetting that the main story actually hasn’t begun yet. While the writing style is complex and original, the prologue should be much more concise.

𖹭 Total  - ❪ 78/100 ❫

❪ Recommendations for improvement ❫

Ancilla opens with a strong and engaging prologue that captures the reader’s attention through intriguing moments and well-crafted writing. The tone and atmosphere are established effectively, though the sheer amount of information makes it difficult to determine what is truly essential for the main narrative.

While the prologue stands well on its own, it lacks clear foreshadowing, making it feel more like a separate story rather than a teaser for what’s to come. The transition into the main plot is smooth, but the length of the prologue is its biggest drawback, as it risks losing the reader’s focus. Despite this, the writing style is complex and original, offering a promising introduction to the story.

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╰┈➤ As the day Dawns by Everberriii

𖹭 Captivating hook  - ❪ 14/20 ❫

Doesn’t immediately grab the reader’s attention, but the ending paragraphs of the chapter do create the desire to continue reading.

𖹭 Set-up and Context  - ❪ 14/20 ❫

The tone and atmosphere are mildly set, but after reading the first chapter, I feel like it can still go many ways. The chapter is more a snapshot from a larger scene, rather than a prologue.

𖹭 Foreshadowing  - ❪ 15/20 ❫

The foreshadowing appears right at the end, when we get a darker twist in the middle of what is supposed to be a joyful happening. That builds anticipation and the desire to know more about the protagonist’s past and goals.

𖹭 Connection to the main story  - ❪ 13/20 ❫

So far, the first chapter doesn’t necessarily feel integral to the main story. Probably mostly because it is a first chapter and not a prologue. Those two should not be taken lightly, there is a big difference and in this story I didn’t feel like it was an actual prologue.

𖹭 Brevity and Impact  - ❪ 18/20 ❫

Length was good. Not too long, yet the information is sometimes too much. A prologue should be more concise and to the point. Strong introduction to the story though, especially the last paragraphs.

𖹭 Total  - ❪ 74/100 ❫

❪ Recommendations for improvement ❫

The opening chapter of As the day Dawns offers an intriguing setup, with a gradual build-up that culminates in a compelling twist. While it doesn’t immediately captivate, the ending successfully sparks curiosity about the protagonist’s past and future. The atmosphere is present but leaves room for different interpretations, making the direction of the prologue feel open-ended.

Though the foreshadowing is subtle and mostly appears toward the end, it adds a layer of anticipation. However, this chapter feels more like a first chapter than a true prologue, which affects its connection to the main narrative. Despite this, the length is appropriate, and the final paragraphs leave a strong impression.

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❝ ʚ🩷ɞ 𝗧𝗛𝗘 𝗪𝗜𝗡𝗡𝗘𝗥𝗦 ❞

𖹭 The First Place ~ urLuv_rin

𖹭 The First Runner up ~ pxrpleberryjxmin

𖹭 The Second Runner ~ Mea_tristis_books

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