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_patches . . . LILY . . . A CHRISTMAS BALLAD
katiegoesmew . . . KATIE . . . WHEN GOOGLE FAILS
Prizes: Your story will be added to the "Short Story Winners" reading list ;; Permanent follow from both of my accounts ;; One free book cover + bio made by me (ask) ;; A shoutout on my message board ;; All votes on two books of your choice
|๐ฅ| SECOND PLACE |๐ฅ|
AprilJester . . . APRIL . . . THE SANE ASYLUM
BookLover3062 . . . AVA . . . FROST AND FATES
Prizes: Your story will be added to the "Short Story Winners" reading list ;; Permanent follow from this account ;; One free book cover OR bio made by me (ask) ;; A shoutout on my message board ;; All votes on one book of your choice
|๐ฅ| THIRD PLACE |๐ฅ|
LillianaBerry2003 . . . LILLIANA . . . CHRISTMAS SURPRISE
Stone_fire . . . STONEFIRE . . . OUR CHRISTMAS WEDDING
Prizes: Your story will be added to the "Short Story Winners" reading list ;; Permanent follow from this account ;; One free bio made by me (ask) ;; A shoutout on my message board ;; 5 votes on one book of your choice
|๐| RUNNER-UPS |๐|
@SilverStar2021 . . . SILVER . . . THE TASTE OF OPEN AIR
@FullMoonMichaels . . . LUNA . . . THE STAR OF SEASONS
Prizes: 3 votes on a book of your choice
@_patches
TITLE. โบโบ 10/10
DESCRIPTIONS. โบโบ 10/10
PLOT UNIQUENESS. โบโบ 9/10
CREATIVITY. โบโบ 8/10
GRAMMAR/SPELLING. โบโบ 10/10
TOTAL. โบโบ 47/50
I knew I was going to love this when I saw it was a THG fanfic. As always, your writing is amazing, your grammar is perfect, and the story is wonderful! I will say it was little slow and I've seen plots like that, but other than that this was perfection!
@katiegoesmew
TITLE. โบโบ 7/10
DESCRIPTIONS. โบโบ 10/10
PLOT UNIQUENESS. โบโบ 10/10
CREATIVITY. โบโบ 8/10
GRAMMAR/SPELLING. โบโบ 10/10
TOTAL. โบโบ 47/50
The title was off; it didn't match the story that much. But the creativity and plot uniqueness was wonderful! Your grammar was spectacular! Amazing job!
@AprilJester
TITLE. โบโบ 9/10
DESCRIPTIONS. โบโบ 9/10
PLOT UNIQUENESS. โบโบ 8/10
CREATIVITY. โบโบ 10/10
GRAMMAR/SPELLING. โบโบ 10/10
TOTAL. โบโบ 46/50
This was certainly the darkest of the entries. It was very creative though! I loved the descriptions, though I feel like there could be more. I loved the ending, and I felt genuinely sad for the main character. (I can't lie, I've seen similar plot lines.)
@BookLover3062
TITLE. โบโบ 10/10
DESCRIPTIONS. โบโบ 8/10
PLOT UNIQUENESS. โบโบ 10/10
CREATIVITY. โบโบ 9/10
GRAMMAR/SPELLING. โบโบ 9/10
TOTAL. โบโบ 46/50
I'll start off with saying that the title was very fitting! I was hooked by the beginning, and the creativity of the story was phenomenal! I will say I caught a few grammar mistakes, and the descriptions lacked just a little bit, but other than that it was flawless!
@LillianaBerry2003
TITLE. โบโบ 9/10
DESCRIPTIONS. โบโบ 8/10
PLOT UNIQUENESS. โบโบ 10/10
CREATIVITY. โบโบ 8/10
GRAMMAR/SPELLING. โบโบ 10/10
TOTAL. โบโบ 45/50
I think this is very cute and festive, especially with the addition of a character who doesn't enjoy Christmas much! I will say the title could have a bit more originality, and the descriptions were sort of lacking. Keep up the great work!
@Stone_fire
TITLE. โบโบ 10/10
DESCRIPTIONS. โบโบ 8/10
PLOT UNIQUENESS. โบโบ 9/10
CREATIVITY. โบโบ 8/10
GRAMMAR/SPELLING. โบโบ 10/10
TOTAL. โบโบ 45/50
Although I know nothing about this fandom, I can still say that it's a wonderful story with great descriptions and a cute and fitting title! I love the LBGTQ+ representation and the very well-written characters and dialogue! Amazing job!
@SilverStar2021
TITLE. โบโบ 8/10
DESCRIPTIONS. โบโบ 10/10
PLOT UNIQUENESS. โบโบ 9/10
CREATIVITY. โบโบ 8/10
GRAMMAR/SPELLING. โบโบ 9/10
TOTAL. โบโบ 44/50
I was so impressed by this story! The first sentence got me hooked, and the descriptions were outstanding! I love the main idea of the story. It isn't your common royalty-based approach to the story, which makes it all the more compelling!
@FullMoonMichaels
TITLE. โบโบ 8/10
DESCRIPTIONS. โบโบ 10/10
PLOT UNIQUENESS. โบโบ 8/10
CREATIVITY. โบโบ 9/10
GRAMMAR/SPELLING. โบโบ 9/10
TOTAL. โบโบ 46/50
I think this idea is very unique and interesting! I was just confused with the fact that Santa is here, but how could this community of people believe in the same red-suited man who delivers presents to children on Christmas Eve? That's just something for you to think about. Your grammar was near perfection, but your dialogue grammar was slightly flawed. Amazing work!
@FrostingSmoothie
TITLE. โบโบ 8/10
DESCRIPTIONS. โบโบ 9/10
PLOT UNIQUENESS. โบโบ 9/10
CREATIVITY. โบโบ 8/10
GRAMMAR/SPELLING. โบโบ 7/10
TOTAL. โบโบ 43/50
The title was very creative, first of all! Your descriptions were very detailed and good. Your grammar, especially your dialogue grammar, could use some work, though. Otherwise, this was an amazing entry! Great job!
@PersonalPersonally
TITLE. โบโบ 7/10
DESCRIPTIONS. โบโบ 9/10
PLOT UNIQUENESS. โบโบ 8/10
CREATIVITY. โบโบ 9/10
GRAMMAR/SPELLING. โบโบ 10/10
TOTAL. โบโบ 43/50
I love the idea for the story! The descriptions were so amazing, it was like I was really seeing it; the grammar was flawless! I do think the title could use some working on, but that's okay! Titles are hard! Keep up the great work!
@Sigmareads
TITLE. โบโบ 10/10
DESCRIPTIONS. โบโบ 8/10
PLOT UNIQUENESS. โบโบ 9/10
CREATIVITY. โบโบ 9/10
GRAMMAR/SPELLING. โบโบ 6/10
TOTAL. โบโบ 42/50
First off, the title with alliteration was absolutely perfect!! I like that this is set in England; and yes, I read it in an accent ha. There were quite a few grammar errors, which docked a few points. Great work!
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