𝖠 𝗁𝖾𝖺𝗋𝗍𝖿𝖾𝗅𝗍 𝗍𝗁𝖺𝗇𝗄 𝗒𝗈𝗎 𝗍𝗈 𝗈𝗎𝗋 𝖾𝗇𝖼𝗁𝖺𝗇𝗍𝗂𝗇𝗀 𝗃𝗎𝖽𝗀𝖾, Kanye_Ariel, 𝖿𝗈𝗋 𝗍𝗁𝖾𝗂𝗋 𝗆𝖺𝗀𝗂𝖼𝖺𝗅 𝖽𝖾𝖽𝗂𝖼𝖺𝗍𝗂𝗈𝗇 𝖺𝗇𝖽 𝗐𝗂𝗌𝖽𝗈𝗆. 𝖢𝗈𝗇𝗀𝗋𝖺𝗍𝗎𝗅𝖺𝗍𝗂𝗈𝗇𝗌 𝗍𝗈 𝖺𝗅𝗅 𝗍𝗁𝖾 𝗌𝗉𝖾𝗅𝗅𝖻𝗂𝗇𝖽𝗂𝗇𝗀 𝗐𝗂𝗇𝗇𝖾𝗋𝗌—𝗒𝗈𝗎𝗋 𝖻𝗋𝗂𝗅𝗅𝗂𝖺𝗇𝖼𝖾 𝗍𝗋𝗎𝗅𝗒 𝗌𝗁𝗂𝗇𝖾𝗌!

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𐔌 . ⋮ 1𝗦𝗧 𝗣𝗟𝗔𝗖𝗘 𝗪𝗜𝗡𝗡𝗘𝗥 .ᐟ ֹ ₊ ꒱

Thewbs » Hero Book 1: Journey to the East

Character Depth: 20/20

Elemental Connection: 19/20

Growth Arc: 19/20

Relatability: 17/20

Unique Traits: 20/20

➦ Total: 95/100

Recommendations for improvement: This is a well-written book and I love the pacing of the story.

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𐔌 . ⋮ 2𝗡𝗗 𝗣𝗟𝗔𝗖𝗘 𝗪𝗜𝗡𝗡𝗘𝗥 .ᐟ ֹ ₊ ꒱

SeraDrake » Ancilla

Character Depth: 19/20

Elemental Connection: 18/20

Growth Arc: 18/20

Relatability: 15/20

Unique Traits: 20/20

➦ Total: 94/100

Recommendations for improvement: I would only recommend paragraph spacing, just for easier reading.

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Thundercloud_E » Malora

Character Depth: 18/20

Elemental Connection: 19/20

Growth Arc: 18/20

Relatability: 19/20

Unique Traits: 20/20

➦ Total: 94/100

Recommendations for Improvement: This is an excellent book. The plot is unique and the characters are well written.

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𐔌 . ⋮ 3𝗥𝗗 𝗣𝗟𝗔𝗖𝗘 𝗪𝗜𝗡𝗡𝗘𝗥 .ᐟ ֹ ₊ ꒱

Nutukaa » Courtesans

Character Depth: 19/20

Elemental Connection: 19/20

Growth Arc: 16/20

Relatability: 19/20

Unique Traits: 18/20

➦ Total : 91/100

Recommendations For Improvement: I have nothing to recommend. It is a very excellent book to read and appeals to the imagination very well.

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𐔌 . ⋮ 𝗡𝗢𝗕𝗟𝗘 𝗣𝗔𝗥𝗧𝗜𝗖𝗜𝗣𝗔𝗡𝗧𝗦 .ᐟ ֹ ₊ ꒱

emilypoole977 » I Wish For Another Life

Character Depth: 18/20

Elemental Connection: 18/20

Growth Arc: 19/20

Relatability: 17/20

Unique Traits: 18/20

➦ Total: 90/100

Recommendations for Improvement: This is the most unique story I have ever read on Wattpad. Kudos to you for bringing this idea into writing. I don't have anything to comment on. Just do some proofreading for spelling and sentence structuring.

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FHLevin » Shadow and Steel

Character Depth: 15/20

Elemental Connection: 15/20

Growth Arc: 15/20

Relatability: 12/20

Unique Traits: 18/20

➦ Total: 75/100

Recommendations for Improvement: I would recommend spacing and breaking down paragraphs into smaller sections.

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mochi711 » Jamais Vu

Character Depth: 15/20

Elemental Connection: 16/20

Growth Arc: 16/20

Relatability: 13/20

Unique Traits: 12/20

➦ Total: 72/100

Recommendations for Improvement: This kind of plot is perfect for a short book. I love that just one chapter is full of enough details for the readers to understand the past, present and future of the plot. I am also glad that you showed who was talking before writing in the first person point of view. I would advice you to break down the paragraphs into smaller sections. 

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strawberry1d » Starstruck Secrets

Character Depth (14/20)

Elemental Connection (12/20)

Growth Arc (16/20)

Relatability (12/20)

Unique Traits (11/20)

➦ Total: 65/100

Recommendations for Improvement: This story has a good plot but the spelling and vocabulary structure need to be worked on. The word "you" is often used and placed in inappropriate places. Since the book is written in a third-person perspective, I suggest using the character's name or pronouns like "she" or "her." I also advise against over-explaining. You don't have to list all the physical features of a person, instead, try to wrap it around the storylines.

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7Bibliophile3 » Champagne Life

Character Depth: 10/20

Elemental Connection: 10/20

Growth Arc: 16/20

Relatability: 12/20

Unique Traits: 15/20

➦ Total: 63/100

Recommendations for Improvement: The plot is a fascinating twist to the normal damsel in distress/Prince Charming story. However, there are a lot of information dumps, so try to ease the details slowly throughout the story. I recommend keeping the planned meeting a secret from both the characters and readers for as long as possible. Also, do a bit of editing and go through the entire story, working on the grammar structures, spelling, and paragraph spacing.

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KimSoojin1112 » Entangled

Character Depth: 15/20

Elemental Connection: 12/20

Growth Arc: 12/20

Relatability: 13/20

Unique Traits: 10/20

➦ Total: 62/100

Recommendations for Improvement: I would advise reviewing the book and correcting the paragraph spacing and spelling errors.  Also, you can have a chapter just for the introduction of character's faces to name instead of inserting it in the middle of the story.

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𝖠 𝗋𝗈𝗎𝗇𝖽 𝗈𝖿 𝖾𝗇𝖼𝗁𝖺𝗇𝗍𝖾𝖽 𝖺𝗉𝗉𝗅𝖺𝗎𝗌𝖾 𝗍𝗈 𝖺𝗅𝗅 𝗈𝗎𝗋 𝗐𝗂𝗇𝗇𝖾𝗋𝗌! 𝖳𝗈 𝖾𝗏𝖾𝗋𝗒 𝗉𝖺𝗋𝗍𝗂𝖼𝗂𝗉𝖺𝗇𝗍, 𝗍𝗁𝖺𝗇𝗄 𝗒𝗈𝗎 𝖿𝗈𝗋 𝗃𝗈𝗂𝗇𝗂𝗇𝗀 𝗈𝗎𝗋 𝗆𝖺𝗀𝗂𝖼𝖺𝗅 𝖺𝗐𝖺𝗋𝖽𝗌 𝗃𝗈𝗎𝗋𝗇𝖾𝗒. 𝖱𝖾𝗆𝖾𝗆𝖻𝖾𝗋, 𝖾𝗏𝖾𝗇 𝗂𝖿 𝗏𝗂𝖼𝗍𝗈𝗋𝗒 𝖽𝗂𝖽𝗇'𝗍 𝖿𝗂𝗇𝖽 𝗒𝗈𝗎 𝗍𝗁𝗂𝗌 𝗍𝗂𝗆𝖾, 𝗒𝗈𝗎𝗋 𝗌𝗍𝗈𝗋𝗒 𝗌𝗁𝗂𝗇𝖾𝗌 𝗐𝗂𝗍𝗁 𝗂𝗍𝗌 𝗈𝗐𝗇 𝗎𝗇𝗂𝗊𝗎𝖾 𝗌𝗉𝖾𝗅𝗅𝖻𝗂𝗇𝖽𝗂𝗇𝗀 𝖼𝗁𝖺𝗋𝗆.

𝖯𝗋𝖾𝗉𝖺𝗋𝖾 𝗒𝗈𝗎𝗋𝗌𝖾𝗅𝗏𝖾𝗌, 𝖿𝗈𝗋 𝗌𝗈𝗈𝗇 𝗍𝗁𝖾 𝗍𝗋𝖾𝖺𝗌𝗎𝗋𝖾𝗌 𝗈𝖿 𝗌𝗍𝗂𝖼𝗄𝖾𝗋𝗌, 𝖼𝖾𝗋𝗍𝗂𝖿𝗂𝖼𝖺𝗍𝖾𝗌, 𝖺𝗇𝖽 𝗈𝗍𝗁𝖾𝗋 𝗉𝗋𝗂𝗓𝖾𝗌 𝗐𝗂𝗅𝗅 𝖻𝖾 𝗎𝗇𝗏𝖾𝗂𝗅𝖾𝖽 𝗂𝗇 𝗍𝗁𝖾 𝖼𝗁𝖺𝗉𝗍𝖾𝗋𝗌 𝖺𝗁𝖾𝖺𝖽!