𝖠 𝗁𝖾𝖺𝗋𝗍𝖿𝖾𝗅𝗍 𝗍𝗁𝖺𝗇𝗄 𝗒𝗈𝗎 𝗍𝗈 𝗈𝗎𝗋 𝖾𝗇𝖼𝗁𝖺𝗇𝗍𝗂𝗇𝗀 𝗃𝗎𝖽𝗀𝖾, Funasticks & sugararmy07, 𝖿𝗈𝗋 𝗍𝗁𝖾𝗂𝗋 𝗆𝖺𝗀𝗂𝖼𝖺𝗅 𝖽𝖾𝖽𝗂𝖼𝖺𝗍𝗂𝗈𝗇 𝖺𝗇𝖽 𝗐𝗂𝗌𝖽𝗈𝗆. 𝖢𝗈𝗇𝗀𝗋𝖺𝗍𝗎𝗅𝖺𝗍𝗂𝗈𝗇𝗌 𝗍𝗈 𝖺𝗅𝗅 𝗍𝗁𝖾 𝗌𝗉𝖾𝗅𝗅𝖻𝗂𝗇𝖽𝗂𝗇𝗀 𝗐𝗂𝗇𝗇𝖾𝗋𝗌-𝗒𝗈𝗎𝗋 𝖻𝗋𝗂𝗅𝗅𝗂𝖺𝗇𝖼𝖾 𝗍𝗋𝗎𝗅𝗒 𝗌𝗁𝗂𝗇𝖾𝗌!

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𐔌 . ⋮ 1𝗦𝗧 𝗣𝗟𝗔𝗖𝗘 𝗪𝗜𝗡𝗡𝗘𝗥 .ᐟ ֹ ₊ ꒱

sondermelle » In Memoriam
(Mallory × Reid)

Chemistry : 20/20

Development : 20/20

Emotional Depth : 20/20

Overall Theme : 19/20

Dynamic Balance : 19.5/20

➦ Total : 98.5/100

Recommendation for Improvement:
The chemistry was so good. The ups and downs were beautifully expressed. The bond was beautiful and had almost perfect balance. Nothing specific to improve here.

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𐔌 . ⋮ 2𝗡𝗗 𝗣𝗟𝗔𝗖𝗘 𝗪𝗜𝗡𝗡𝗘𝗥 .ᐟ ֹ ₊ ꒱

SeraDrake » Ancilla
(Magister × Ancilla)

Chemistry : 20/20

Development : 19/20

Emotional Depth : 20/20

Overall Theme : 19/20

Dynamic Balance : 18/20

➦ Total : 96/100

Recommendation for Improvement:
The characters are complex, but that's what makes them interesting. I loved the personalities of both of the main protagonists. Their chemistry and the way their emotions are portrayed is definitely some praise worthy work. The characters were well introduced, well established, and well developed. They were relatable and artistically beautiful. I basically loved them but would give a few reasons about the marks I deducted:

The first and main problem was the excessive info-dumping. A lot of details were provided more than necessary, which made me wonder how they are impacting the characters or the plot.

The second thing I would suggest is pace tightening. I found the pace a little uneven throughout the story. The chapters were quite long, including a lot of scenes in one chapter itself, making it difficult to absorb everything at times.

However, I can't deny the chemistry between the characters. They were intriguing. Their emotions were truly impactful.

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𐔌 . ⋮ 3𝗥𝗗 𝗣𝗟𝗔𝗖𝗘 𝗪𝗜𝗡𝗡𝗘𝗥𝗦 .ᐟ ֹ ₊ ꒱

Thewbs » Hero - Journey to the East
(Hero × Emily)

Chemistry : 20/20

Development : 19/20

Emotional Depth : 19/20

Overall Theme : 18/20

Dynamic Balance : 18/20

➦ Total : 94/100

Recommendation for Improvement:
I definitely saw the chemistry between them. The bond between them was so beautiful and deep. The characters balance each other evenly. I don't think I need to suggest you something.

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Nutukaa » Courtesans
(Zevran × Dina)

Chemistry : 19.5/20

Development : 18/20

Emotional Depth : 19.5/20

Overall Theme : 18.5/20

Dynamic Balance : 18.5/20

➦ Total : 94/100

Recommendation for Improvement:
There was amazing chemistry between them. There was quite a good development and they balanced each other well.

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𐔌 . ⋮ 𝗡𝗢𝗕𝗟𝗘 𝗣𝗔𝗥𝗧𝗜𝗖𝗜𝗣𝗔𝗡𝗧𝗦 .ᐟ ֹ ₊ ꒱

Sahityasikharghosh » My Beloved
(Shekhar × Madhuri)

Chemistry : 17/20

Development : 14/20

Emotional Depth : 17/20

Overall Theme : 17/20

Dynamic Balance : 18/20

➦ Total : 83/100

Recommendation for Improvement:
1. The pace of the story was great but after the bar scene their reconciliation could be slower, giving a more dramatic effect and giving time to the readers to process.

2. I also recommend making the paragraphs shorter.

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Dark_Ghostie » The Council of God's (Pisces × Scorpio)

Chemistry : 16/20

Development : 5/20

Emotional Depth : 7/20

Overall Theme : 17/20

Dynamic Balance : 18/20

➦ Total : 63/100

Recommendation for Improvement:
There was a lack of scenes regarding their relationship, leading to less character development and little emotional impact. They do compliment each other's personality. The story wasn't about them, so it's fine.

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dwarkaratna » Hard to Love, Hard to Lose (Arjun × Subhanwita)

Chemistry : 18/20

Development : 19/20

Emotional Depth : 16/20

Overall Theme : 18/20

Dynamic Balance : 17/20

➦ Total : 88/100

Recommendation for Improvement:
I liked the chemistry between them. Their bond was so cute and refreshing. They compliment each other well. It is a good book but the story was a bit fast in the first few chapters.

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IrenicJ_stories » Love's First Whisper (Abhik × Aashvi)

Chemistry : 19.5/20

Development : 15/20

Emotional Depth : 18/20

Overall Theme : 17.5/20

Dynamic Balance : 17/20

➦ Total : 87/100

Recommendation for Improvement:
The bond between them was amazing, deep and beautiful. The way he respects the boundaries is so beautiful. I loved the bond between them. The recommendations:

1. I do see their relationship group throughout the chapters but it wasn't much.

2. You can use their real names in some scenes to avoid confusion.

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KimSoojin1112 » Entangled
(Jungkook × Yn)

Chemistry : 17/20

Development : 13/20

Emotional Depth : 15/20

Overall Theme : 18/20

Dynamic Balance : 15/20

➦ Total : 78/100

Recommendation for Improvement:
Their bond is nice and I see the potential in the story. Here are the recommendations:

1. The plot is good but add more details and dialogues.

2. Until now, there is less development.

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Gise_lliana » One the Land, In the Sea

Chemistry : 12/20

Development : 9/20

Emotional Depth : 8/20

Overall Theme : 17/20

Dynamic Balance : 13/20

➦ Total : 59/100

Recommendation for Improvement:
1. There is very slight development until now.

2. The relationship is still in the starting stage and therefore, it can't be judged early.

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𝖠 𝗋𝗈𝗎𝗇𝖽 𝗈𝖿 𝖾𝗇𝖼𝗁𝖺𝗇𝗍𝖾𝖽 𝖺𝗉𝗉𝗅𝖺𝗎𝗌𝖾 𝗍𝗈 𝖺𝗅𝗅 𝗈𝗎𝗋 𝗐𝗂𝗇𝗇𝖾𝗋𝗌! 𝖳𝗈 𝖾𝗏𝖾𝗋𝗒 𝗉𝖺𝗋𝗍𝗂𝖼𝗂𝗉𝖺𝗇𝗍, 𝗍𝗁𝖺𝗇𝗄 𝗒𝗈𝗎 𝖿𝗈𝗋 𝗃𝗈𝗂𝗇𝗂𝗇𝗀 𝗈𝗎𝗋 𝗆𝖺𝗀𝗂𝖼𝖺𝗅 𝖺𝗐𝖺𝗋𝖽𝗌 𝗃𝗈𝗎𝗋𝗇𝖾𝗒. 𝖱𝖾𝗆𝖾𝗆𝖻𝖾𝗋, 𝖾𝗏𝖾𝗇 𝗂𝖿 𝗏𝗂𝖼𝗍𝗈𝗋𝗒 𝖽𝗂𝖽𝗇'𝗍 𝖿𝗂𝗇𝖽 𝗒𝗈𝗎 𝗍𝗁𝗂𝗌 𝗍𝗂𝗆𝖾, 𝗒𝗈𝗎𝗋 𝗌𝗍𝗈𝗋𝗒 𝗌𝗁𝗂𝗇𝖾𝗌 𝗐𝗂𝗍𝗁 𝗂𝗍𝗌 𝗈𝗐𝗇 𝗎𝗇𝗂𝗊𝗎𝖾 𝗌𝗉𝖾𝗅𝗅𝖻𝗂𝗇𝖽𝗂𝗇𝗀 𝖼𝗁𝖺𝗋𝗆.

𝖯𝗋𝖾𝗉𝖺𝗋𝖾 𝗒𝗈𝗎𝗋𝗌𝖾𝗅𝗏𝖾𝗌, 𝖿𝗈𝗋 𝗌𝗈𝗈𝗇 𝗍𝗁𝖾 𝗍𝗋𝖾𝖺𝗌𝗎𝗋𝖾𝗌 𝗈𝖿 𝗌𝗍𝗂𝖼𝗄𝖾𝗋𝗌, 𝖼𝖾𝗋𝗍𝗂𝖿𝗂𝖼𝖺𝗍𝖾𝗌, 𝖺𝗇𝖽 𝗈𝗍𝗁𝖾𝗋 𝗉𝗋𝗂𝗓𝖾𝗌 𝗐𝗂𝗅𝗅 𝖻𝖾 𝗎𝗇𝗏𝖾𝗂𝗅𝖾𝖽 𝗂𝗇 𝗍𝗁𝖾 𝖼𝗁𝖺𝗉𝗍𝖾𝗋𝗌 𝖺𝗁𝖾𝖺𝖽!