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Teen Fiction Royalties ✓

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Judge: sinhapratyancha

Participant: LeiAndre

Place: Philippines

Book: Ditch

Title: 5/10

Opening: 9/10

Characters: 17/20

Plot: 21/40 (I found it pretty confusing)

Grammar: 20/20

Total Score: 72/100

Review: Ditch was a pretty good book and not gonna lie, it was pretty non cliche but I think the story was made a bit too complicated and confusing. Anyways, this is what I think...maybe someone else might find it more appealing but for me, it is that. But, the characters though were very interesting

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Participant: blue_host

Book: That Girl

Title: 3/10

Opening: 7/10

Characters: 18/20

Plot: 28/40

Grammar: 18/20

Total Score: 74/100

Review: For me, the reason why this book is in the third position is because of its narration. The narration of the story could have more powerful and more organised. However, the plot of the story is very, very good. This book also told from a teenager's perspective shares some of the experiences of the protagonist and I think, it is actually quite realistic. So, a third place for this book. However, this story would be so much better if the narration is more powerful and creative.

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Participant: oxwallflowerxo

Place: England

Book: Winni and You

Title: 4/10

Opening: 10/10

Characters: 18/20

Plot: 36/40

Grammar: 20/20

Total Score: 88/100

Review: This story has been written perfectly in the language of a teenager. We all know teenage is a very confusing and frustrating time which is accompanied by a lot of other problems. This book completely grabs the attention of a teenager. The story and it's plot is also very interesting and basically, this is what a teenager would love to read.

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Participant: TAandPens

Place: Africa

Book: Logan Loves Nic

(DISQUALIFIED!)

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Participant: booklored

Place: Asia

Book: Getting Wilder

Title: 6/10

Opening: 8/10

Characters: 19/20

Plot: 32/40

Grammar: 20/20

Total Score: 85/100

Review: This story also has been written in a perfect teenage language. During teenage, a person discovers many things about himself. In this book, the two main characters being gay and teenagers deal with a lot of problems, including peer pressure and their problems are perfectly described here. I choose this book for the second position as the plot of this story could have been more powerful.

*****

Judge: Haleoseba

Participant: whereisellie

Place: Asia

Book: R A W

1) Title- 5

2) Opening- 5

3) Characters- 16

4) Plot- 34

5) Grammer- 18

Total= 78marks

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Participant: arhana12

Book: We are a Match

1) Title- 7

2) Opening- 4

3) Characters-18

4) Plot- 31

5) Grammer- 17

Total= 77marks

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Participant: dannicipriani

Book: The Underground Circus

1) Title- 8

2) Opening- 8

3) Characters-13

4) Plot- 35

5) Grammer- 17

Total= 81marks

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Participant: XX_Flying_Pandas_XX

Book: The Hoodie Girl

1) Title - 6

2) Opening - 7

3) Characters - 11

4) Plot - 30

5) Grammer - 18

Total= 72marks

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Participant: Call_me_Dragoness

Book: Sky Kingdom

(DISQUALIFIED!)

*****

Judge: Flowersofwinter

Participant: Shvaeyx210905

Book: Started with Coffee - White Sneakers

Title = 10/10

Opening = 9/10

Characters = 19/20

Plot = 39/40

Grammar = 20/20

Total = 97/100

Review = Excellent story, very captivating and interesting. I fell in love with it from the cover all the way to the first chapter, very well written and grammar almost to the T. The title is what grabbed my attention first then the cover just gave me that excitement of reading this story. Its one of those stories that you just know will be off the hook, the story with unique characters that you can't help but fall head over heels in love with them. Absolutely loved it and will be reading it again just for the heck of it.

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Participant: maanvibhagat

Book: His Life Changer

Title = 9/10

Opening = 7/10

Characters = 17/20

Plot = 35/40

Grammar = 18/20

Total = 86/100

Review = Not a bad read, really interesting and the plot is clear, not really confusing but it could use a little wow factor here and there. The author could add a little humour, a suprise or at least a cliff hanger or two to keep the reader interested. But overall it was a nice read and I enjoyed reading it.

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Participant: _messywriter_

Book: Suddenly in Love

Title = 9/10

Opening = 8/10

Characters = 18/20

Plot = 37/40

Grammar = 18/20

Total = 90/100

Review = Great story, really loved it! Its so captivating and so interesting. I love title and how its the first attraction to the story, from the title yoy just want to know how suddenly in love the characters were. Fun and really interesting to read, every chapter leaves you with that satisfying feeling and never disappoints. Great job.

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Participant: writesthetic

Book: I'm a model because of my wig

Title = 8/10

Opening = 7/10

Characters = 17/20

Plot = 35/40

Grammar = 17/20

Total = 84/100

Review = Not an overall bad read, a good story build up and a good use of the English language. Grammar not too bad, could use a little bit if editing but not all bad. Enjoyable and interesting enough.

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Participant: TAndPens

Place: Africa

Book: My Name is Reo

Title = 9/10

Opening = 8/10

Characters = 18/20

Plot = 38/40

Grammar = 18/20

Total = 91/100

Review = Good Story, very captivating and interesting. It grabs your attention from the description and keeps it. Grammar too is nearly almost perfect and not many mistaken words can be detected (or missing commas for those with keen eyes). Overall very good story and very interesting characters.

*****

Judge: adorabella2018

Participant: stormwhitaker

Place: USA

Book: Empty

Title -8

Opening -7

Characters -8

Plot-38

Grammar-17

Total-78/100

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Participant: gurlcynical

Place: Asia

Book: Lost in Havoc

Title: 9

Opening: 8

Characters: 8

Plot: 38

Grammar: 16

Total: 79/100

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Participant: ethanchovies

Place: Asia

Book: Turn On // G.D

Title- 6/10

Opening - 8/10

Characters- 7/10

Plot- 29/40

Grammer- 15/ 20

Total- 65/100

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Participant: Fa1thFlower

Place: Korea, Asia

Book: Pity Me

Title - 9/10

Opening - 9/10

Characters - 9/10

Plot- 37/40

Grammar- 18/20

Total- 82/100

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Participant: Lalene_Bliss

Book: 2015 Breaks my 2056

(WITHDRAWN) DISQUALIFIED








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