Short-Story Royalties✓
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Judge: ENCHANTEDmajor.
Participant: thelazylemon.
From: Asia.
Book: Heartstrings.
Score: 92/100
Reviews:
Title - The title is itself unique and very rare. I was amused first reading the title but as soon I peeped in the book, it started having a positive effect on me. Each time I read it, I came to know what really it signifies.
Opening - The first story, was itself inspiring. When I came across half of the chapter, I could feel the pain and an instant longing to know how that woman must be feeling. After knowing that you have to get your left breast surgically removed or in the second chapter where the people who were pointing out the man to be a dirty minded guy and how the crowds mislead him. All these were just awesome, it forced me to read further. Great job for the opening.
Character - Most of the times, I really could feel them, their pain and emotions. The dialogues however didn't seem that real but overall it was very nice.
Plot - the plot of each story was great. It was interesting, it was subtle and most importantly developed an eagerness to read further. Each and every story had a different beginning but ended with a moral that triggered my mindset. It was like I could feel the story. Little points from our daily life that none of us actually seemed to notice have been brought up so beautifully. Each and every paragraph had a sense of truth and a trail of emotion.
Grammar - This was quite astonishing for me. I never thought I would read a perfect grammar book. I looked for errors but I didn't find any. No grammatical errors.
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Participant: Words_Do_Matter
From: Asia
Book: You Are My World - OS
Score: 64
Reviews:
Title- the title seemed a bit cliche. Almost every fanfiction book or OS has one such named title. However it was relevant to what the book was about. It was significant to the bond that the book talked about.
Opening - the opening was also kind of cliche and resembled the real story. Tough, written beautifully the dialogues and I felt the cute bond of their relationship. I still thought it to be a little less interesting.
Character- the character seemed real. Their dialogues, their thoughts seemed to have an impact. The way the little kid was speaking the way the mother's thoughts were portrayed, all was very nice.
Grammar - the grammar was overall nice, just a little "if" and "but" at places.
Plot - the plot was one of the cliche stories, I haven't seen the serial but it resembled like it. It wasn't different. I didn't feel a sense of uniqueness. However the environment was well expressed and so were the thoughts of the character.
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Participant: ethanchovies
From: Asia
Book: Unprecedented
Score: 93/100
Reviews:
Title - This was interesting, quite unique, never heard that before.
Opening- the opening was quite interesting, it was giving a teenage movie vibe. I was intrigued to know more about Alicia and what she would face. After she sneaking in and she met Ethan, it was very interesting and a sudden urge to know more about their chemistry ignited within me.
Characters - the characters seemed pretty real. I mean they gave a real teenage vibe. Be it the language, that was really like street and college language. They were really giving me a vibe specially the dialogue.
Plot - the plot was so interesting. I loved it. The way Alicia and Ethan met. How they fell for each other. The way his popularity was expressed. All just amazing. It was brilliant. I loved it.
Grammar - It was nice. Overall great, a little problems in midst. But the story was nice.
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Participant: SketchyReaderWriter
From: Africa.
Book: The Boy And The Wall.
Score: 77/100.
Reviews:
Title- The title is quite straightforward. Quite obvious, sense of creativity cannot be seen. However, totally matches with the environment.
Opening- the opening was quite interesting. The way the story dealt with emotions, trying to convey its points. It was quite intriguing. The story conveyed and expressed itself in a single chapter. I was really intrigued.
Characters- the characters seemed fictional. I could not feel their sense of emotion properly. It was however different from other cliche characters.
Plot- the plot was very different. Not a cliche one. I was quite surprised to see how the story turned. It was quite motivating and surprising how all the trust and emotions came place to place and how the boy learnt his lessons at last.
Grammar- the grammar was nice. Overall good.
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Participant: Heart_of_God.
From: South America.
Book: Planning Her Escape.
Score: 96/100.
Reviews:
Title- the title is relevant to the story. I personally haven't heard anything like that. It was a little unique and unexpected how the book relates it.
Opening- the opening of the book was very intriguing. I was so blown off reading it. The way the first chapter ended created a swarm of thoughts within me, mostly like, 'wait, what?', 'what's gonna happen next?'. I shall say the author was successful in making the opening grand.
Character- I could feel each and every emotion of the character. The way the dialogues were portrayed, I was astound. I clearly appreciate for such a remarkable description, where each and every emotion was mentioned, none left behind.
Plot- the plot was itself interesting. I was so impressed reading it. It was just amazing. The way the story started, continued with emotion and how her husband treated her, all left a deep effect in my mind. I could feel the pain of the characters. I was so impressed how smoothly the story went.
Grammar- the grammar was awesome. No grammatical errors. Very well edited, I must say.
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Judge: azrihisyam Malay Language Participants
Participant: Mecxira.
Book: Hak Milik Tuan Aiden.
Score: 89/100
Reviews:
Interesting story. I was entertained while reading. Less grammatical errors. Interesting storyline. I did not stop reading it until chapter 7.
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Participant: Mecxira.
Book: Bukan Aku Tapi Dia.
Score: 76/100
Reviews:
This story is not bad. Action, romance, revenge... there are few spelling errors.
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Participant: Mecxira
Book: You Are Mine.
Score: 82/100
Review : a very interesting start. I started liking it from the beginning of this chapter. The character shown is very nice. There are some spelling mistakes. Interesting storyline.
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Participant: ikasyafiqah1.
Book: Suka Dalam Diam
Score: 77/100.
Reviews:
Interesting introduction. The characters are alive and gave me deep emotions. I felt sad, laughed, and wondered what would happen in the next chapter. There were only few mistakes.
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Participant: ShaDhia
Book: Du Cuento
Score: 72/100.
Reviews:
The title is quite unique and rare. There are some punctuation and spelling mistakes. The plot is solid and interesting and contains interesting facts. I feel like the characters are alive.
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Judge: xvpizzalov
Participant: blue_host
Book: One fine day, one fine date
Score: 93/100
Title: 10/1
Opening: 8/10
Characters: 19/20
Plot: 37/40
Grammar: 19/20
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Participant: devilsupro
From: Asia
Book: Evil Corona
Scores: 89/100
Title: 9/10
Opening: 8/10
Characters: 18/20
Plot: 36/40
Grammar: 18/20
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Participant: Iris-hope
From: Asia
Book: Everything is not lost
Scores: 83/100
Title: 8/10
Opening: 7/10
Characters: 18/20
Plot: 32/40
Grammar: 18/20
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Participant: Ouryoaie
From: Africa
Book: Ennead
Score: 91/100
Title: 8/10
Opening:9/10
Characters: 18/20
Plot: 37/40
Grammar: 19/20
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Participant: JessieTheMikaelson
From: North America
Book: Greed
Score: 88/100
Title: 9/10
Opening: 8/10
Characters: 17/20
Plot: 36/40
Grammar: 18/20
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Judge: SeyWalia
Participant: Bunnybeebooo
From: Asia
Book: The Princess and The Princess
Score: 80/100
Title: 7/10
opening: 8/10
character:15/20
Plot: 35/40
Grammar: 15/20
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Participant: Shruti23p06
From: Asia
Book: Don't judge in 2 mins
Score: 43/100
Title: 4/100
opening: 4/10
character: 10/20
Plot: 15/40
Grammar: 10/20
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Participant: MichaelHoliday
Book: Once in a Blue Moon
Score: 78/100
Title: 8/10
opening: 8/10
character: 10/20
Plot: 35/40
Grammar: 17/20
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Participant: Harrylmarteee
From: Asia
Book: Perfect almost
Score: 75/100
Title: 10/10
opening: 10/10
character: 10/20
Plot: 35/40
Grammar: 10/20
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Participant: Saramitra_
From: Asia
Book: Illusions- A world invisible to your eyes
Score: 69/100
Title: 7/10
opening: 8/10
character: 15/20
Plot: 20/40
Grammar: 19/20
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