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Judge: azrihisyam [Malay Language]

Participant: ShaDhia

Book: De vote

Score: 31/100

Review : The score is low as this is the book to voted all the works listed. Then no character is involved. However the name of the title is quite unique and unique. Grammar errors or spelling mistakes are not very clear so the marks for grammar are quite high.

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Participant: ShaDhia

Book: De Promote

Score : 48/100

Review: Writers are creative in naming titles. The title is unique and rare. This book is intended to promote the work of other authors. It's really good to increase the readership and vote count of other authors. Characters are not specific because each chapter has a different character. Grammar errors are less

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Participant: IkaSyafiqah1

Book: Review and promote Book

score: 50/100

Review: Same like De Promote, this book is intended to promote the works of other authors but the writer reviews it and promote it. Its good but the character are not specific cause each chapter has a different characters. Grammar error are less. The writer honest in review and help to find a mistake and give advice on writing.

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Participant: Mandypiebo

Book: Visions

Status: DISQUALIFIED

This participant changed his/her Username

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Participant: PieDieLie

Book: The mistakes mistaken

Status: DISQUALIFIED

This participant changed his/her Username

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Judge: -Navyah-

Participant: VinyaAmby

From: Asia

Book: In 9 Hours

Title: 10/10

Opening: 9/10

Characters: 17/20

Plot: 36/40

Grammar: 17/20

Total: 89/100

Review: The title gives you a mysterious vibe while the cover emits positive radiations. As the title suggests, the story takes you to the places within a few hours. I like how all the characters are realistically presented. The opening tells a lot about the protagonist, her giving nature touches the reader's heart. Storyline is creatively executed thus the hard work of the author reflects well. I'll recommend the book to those who wish to read something light.

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Participant: VisualTragedy

Book: The Dump: A collection of pieces

Title: 7/10

Opening: 8/10

Characters: 16/20

Plot: 38.5/40

Grammar: 19/20

Total: 88.5/100

Review: The book is a collection of various short stories travelling through the gates of the author's creativity. The only complaint I have is regarding the title of the book. Each and every story reflects imagination and leaves the reader in awe, then why is the title called dump. The title can be something more beautiful like the contents. Plots are nicely executed. A suggested book. Well done, good luck.

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Participant: Samira_Star18

Book: No Home Away From Home

Title: 8/10

Opening: 9/10

Characters: 18/20

Plot: 35/40

Grammar: 17/20

Total: 87/100

Review: Although the story seems unrealistic at some parts yet it is touching. I'd suggest a few things to attract readers to your story. You should work on the cover, and try to change the age of the protagonist as the story may lead to some instances which Wattpad doesn't allow to be put. I really appreciate the effort you have put to make the plot intriguing but try avoiding mentioning time every now and then, also add some cliffhangers at each chapter's end. Overall, I enjoyed the book. Good luck, keep writing.

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Participant:  DharmaPriyaa

Book: DharmaPriyaa

Title: 9/10

Opening: 8/10

Characters: 15/20

Plot: 34/40

Grammar: 16/20

Total: 82/100

Review: The title is special. Opening of the book creates a spark to read more. The chapters are short yet grasping. I think if there was more detailing in the chapters, it'd have been easy for all the readers to know the characters of 'Mahabharata' well. Although the characters are the same yet the author has presented the plot creatively and precisely thus making the book interesting. Overall, I enjoyed the book and I'm looking forward to reading ahead.

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Participant:  Libranian1010

Book: A Writer's Life

Title: 8/10

Opening: 6/10

Characters: 14/20

Plot: 30/40

Grammar: 10/20

Total: 68/100

Review: The title is simple yet says a lot, but try to work on the cover. I liked the plot but not the way it is executed, it could have been way better as this is a short story. There are so many errors in tenses due to which everything seems jumbled up, even characters don't display much of their personalities. I'd also suggest separating the Author's note from the main description, don't mix it with narration. High editing is suggested. Good luck, keep writing

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Judge: Potterswift013

Participant: annatola16

Book: SHORT STORIES 

Status: DISQUALIFIED

The participant changed his/her username

Score: 90/100

Reviews: 

 Title: 10/10 (i mean they are short stories after all.

 Opening: 6/10.( a good start but it sounds simple) 

Characters: 20/20 (they do feel real especially in the last chapter of 1 of the short stories). 

Plot: 35/40 (nice thought.....unique....but i feel like it could be made better.)

 Grammar: 19/20 (grammar is really good except for the fact that a little mistake here and a little there....you get it....but it was nice)

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Participant: devilsupro

Book: Sternutaphobia

From: Asia

Score: 95/100 

Title: 10/10.......(resembles the story a lot....so yeah.)

 Opening:7/10 (good start but doesn't really develop curiosity)

 Characters:20/20 (it felt like i was in that whole thing) 

Plot: 40/40 (unique)

 Grammar: 18/20 (unnecessary words.....and 1 or 2 punctuations were either placed in the wrong place or were missing.....the rest was fine)

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Participant: arhana12

From: Asia

Book: Poles Apart?

Score: 92/100

 Title: 8/10 (not really relevant...but i like it) 

Opening:10/10 (I loved it!!!) btw...does prologue countas an opening? YES! and it was really awesome.

 Characters:18/20 (NOT ALL CHARACTERS FEEL REAL...MOST OF THEM DO.....emotions??? YES.) 

PLOT: 39/40 (not unique....but a nice one)

 Grammar: 17/20 (unnecessary puntuations...and a few sentences have been framed in a wrong way....but it was great)

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Participant:  sinhapratyancha

From: Asia

Book: A Mathematical Mishap

Score: 62.5/100 

Title: 7/10 (doesn't really relate...i mean i expected something else and the story ended up being something else.)

 Opening: 5/10 (good...but doesn't develop curiosity) 

Characters: 15/20 (They don't really feel real.....and they don't really evoke emotions that much...especially towards the end).

 Plot: 25/40 (Doesn't have a solid story.....it uses figure of speech....Situations and environment don't bring the emotions out entirely.)

 Grammar: 10.5/20 (a lot of grammatical errors.....sentences could've been framed in a better way.)

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Participant: HermioneBc3

From: USA

Book: Weekly Reader

Score: 74/100

 Title: 8/10 (since it's a book of short stories and is posted weekly...i think the name's relatable..but could be more attractive...it did sound like a magazine to me. 

Opening: 9/10 (i liked it...could've been better)

 Characters: 18/20 (introduced very well...doesn't evoke emotions....but they do feel real)

 Plot: 20/20 (nice...VERY UNIQUE...i enjoyed reading the book!) 

Grammar: 19/20 (sentences could be framed better)

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Judge:  I_LOVE_THAT_TMI_TID

Participant: KeshavaNandini

From: Asia

Book:  PANDAVA NANDINI

Score: 63/100 

TITLE: 8/10 POINTS
It's relevant but not at all rare. You can try something that hides the story behind the title.

OPENING: 5/10 POINTS
Honestly, the opening made me yawn. Throw something on readers face through words so that at every turn it keeps the reader awake.

 CHARACTERS: 10/20 POINTS
It could have been better.

 PLOT: 27/40 POINTS 
I like the plot on how it was set and all. But the story never evoke a sense of Curiosity and thrust to read any further.

GRAMMER: 13/20 POINTS  
Few tense error.

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Participant:  Jade_S4M

Book:  THE RIGHTER

Score: 66/100

 TITLE: 7/10 POINTS
Relevant and rare but doesn't create a meaningful title

 OPENING: 7/10 POINTS
I liked it, but work on it. Need to be far better.

 CHARACTERS: 12/20 POINTS - *THERE ARE NO SPECIFIC CHARACTERS, BUT MORE OF A 2ND PERSON VIEW*

 PLOT: 23/40 POINTS - *NO SPECIFIC PLOT, MORE OF A MOSAIC* 

GRAMMER: 17/20 POINTS 
Few spelling error.

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Participant:  SinnerBeKiller

Book: SPIRITED AWAY 

Score: 71/100

TITLE: 8/10 POINTS
I liked the title, it attracted me. It was relevant too but not rare.

 OPENING: 7/10 POINTS
Good start but faded away too soon.

 CHARACTERS: 14/20 POINTS
Work on your characters, need polishing.

 PLOT: 26/40 POINTS
Doesn't go with the ending.

 GRAMMER: 16/20 POINTS 
Tense error. Keep writing.

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Particiapant:  cynthiahaddix2

From: Africa

Book: DEAR CRUSH

Score: 69/100

 TITLE: 7/10 POINTS 
Relevant! Good. Attracts readers! Good. But not rare. Keep a title that hides your story behind but also relevant at the same time.

OPENING: 5/10 POINTS
Very poor starting. I was not expecting to start like that. Need to work on it.

 CHARACTERS: 16/20 POINTS
Yeah it was good.

 PLOT: 26/40 POINTS
No doubt, it was very poor plot. You can try something else on this. Re-edit it.

 GRAMMER: 15/20 POINTS 
Few spelling mistakes were there.

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Participant:  TobyWoryi

Book: DON'T ASK WHY 

Score: 86/100

TITLE: 10/10 POINTS
Love the title, it does attracts readers to know what we shouldn't ask you. Rare and relevant.

 OPENING: 7/10 POINTS 
Need a little improvement

CHARACTERS: 19/20 POINTS
I loved all of them.

 PLOT: 32/40 POINTS
Good but Re-edit your opening and strengthen your plot

 GRAMMER: 18/20 POINTS 
Watch out on tense.

Well Done everyone!
A little improvement is needed by each of you, our Judges judged your book with Full honesty, So their reviews does matter to you.

Thank you.