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✨Action/Adventure Results✨

The wait is over, here are the results!

First of all, thanks to the amazing Judge!

rubyroseveare

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Third place with a tie score of 70/100 goes to...

In no specific order:

1) How My Family Saves The World: As Told by A Drowned Angel by  _Kadoc_

Review:

The title of this story is straightforward but somewhat creative and the cover is also appropriate to the plot. Personally, I found the 'Before You Read' chapter quite tedious and I feel like you could benefit by including some of that information into the actual story. The humor throughout was a welcomed and enjoyable aspect and I applaud you for writing it so well. The flow, along with the grammar and spelling are all to an above satisfactory standard. I was quite confused in the beginning but I do think you did a good job to clear up most discrepancies as the story progressed. Originality wise, I've never read or even heard of anything remotely similar to this, so kudos for creativity. The whole storyline wasn't my cup of tea but I can see how it would be appealing to others.

2) Shattered Kingdoms by Calagtic

Review:

The cover is simple, but intriguing and fits nicely with the title. I don't mind dialogue in the blurb, however, I would have liked to have seen it balanced out with plot descriptions and more of a hook. Regarding the flow of the work, some paragraphs I found too long and some information was presented quite abruptly, especially in the dialogue. I felt as though some scenes were rushed into and that some parts in the first few chapters were a bit muddy - it took a while to wrap my head around what was going on. I would have liked to have seen a little bit more depth and backstory; some context and techniques to really immerse the audience into the story. Nonetheless, I can see the effort that has been put into this story and I really liked the ideas and concepts of it.

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Second place with a score of 74/100 goes to...

The Way I Lie by boressa

Review:

There were a few parts with a few minor grammatical or spelling errors, however, I also picked up on some sentences that weren't as well as they could've been. There were also some paragraphs that had very short, repetitive sentences that interrupted the flow of the story. I really enjoyed the way the relationship between Kayline and Christina was written and I liked how they interacted with each other; the sister aspect brought originality to the assassin storyline. Sometimes I found the transitions between scenes a bit abrupt, such as the first chapter to the second chapter and I would have liked to see a more in-depth dive into the context earlier on in the story. The plot was clear and set out well.Overall, I quite enjoyed the story and aside from the few areas for improvement above you have a solid novel on your hands.

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And

First place with a score of 76/100 goes to...

*drum rolls*

🎊The Last Guardians by KeiraKnox1🎊

Review:

I found the title a little bit cliche or overused, however, it does fit well with the main concepts of the book. The cover is good - clear title and author's names and shows elements of the story. The description is well laid out and contains just the right amount of information. I loved the idea of ​​the plot and thought it was quite creative and not to take away from that but I encountered a few discrepancies regarding how some information (ie how Lily found out she was a shifter) was presented. Spelling and grammar, including punctuation, dialogue and the syntax of the sentences were essentially perfect. Originality wise, you took a somewhat overdone fantasy concept and made it your own I commend. I really liked the idea of ​​the dragon shifters and in my opinion, you conveyed these ideas well. The flow of the sentences, paragraphs and storyline were great, however, I did think sometimes there were scenes that were a bit rushed. Overall, an excellent project so far and congratulations on doing so well.

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Congratulations to these three amazing people, you obviously deserve it!✨

 And to the people who didn't win, don't be discouraged and carry on writing, and don't forget to ask for your review so you can improve!

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