REWRITE
What if Rosie was a baddie with pink hair? What if Emily was a sassy queen?
Hi guys! I've been doing a lot of thinking, and I think some aspects of Saving Emily could be improved.
Our two main girls are not the people I want them to be. Rosie and Emily both seem like, dare I say it, *whispers* Mary Sues.
But I don't know, I like the story itself, I just think we could do so much better. And, hey, what are second drafts for?
As you may have noticed, I am in the process of posting a Saving Emily rewrite. The working title right now is I guess I'm Famous. Here is the summary:
The last thing Rosie ever wanted was to be a Hollywood actress. That seriously complicates her thieving career. To make matters worse, she is given the most obnoxious mentor in history. Emily doesn't understand anything about her, does she? At least Rosie's boyfriend is there for her...
Oh, by the way, Emily is no longer British.
I could really use a favor from you all. Could you check out the rewrite and then tell me which version of the story you like better? This will be a COMPLETE rewrite. Pretty much everything will be different.
Thank you! and comment saying you came from Saving Emily and I will give you a shout out in my upcoming chapters!!!!
Thank you all so much for reading my original book! And thank you in advance for reading the rewrite!!!!!
Love,
Tais
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