Shreya_VA

Ratings : 9/10

Cover : Font used for the title is wonderful. Just a glance and it's clear that fair amount of effort has been invested in editing but the background could have been better.

Title : Wonderful! That's all I have to say. Title is fabulous and matches perfectly with the story. Good job there!

Plot : let's keep this important point as detailed and brief as needed.

First comes the summary which I personally loved. It has got intricate details yet giving a shroud of mystery tingling the sensation of readers to watch out for more. Kudos to you!

Then comes the little quotes at the start of each chapter. That's one of the best perks in the book and I found the one in Ch-6 so closely relatable the most out of all.

Now comes the story. Description is short yet so wonderful giving the vivid imagery which was best shown at Ch-3. From the read, it is clearly visible just how much you're into Indian Mythology and so is your knowledge about it. And the description of dresses on Fates were just amazing.

But I would like to point out one thing. Some of your inferences and metaphors seemed quite out of place. For example~

Ch-6 ~ "I'm Death. Chaos and confusion are my life" (Using Life in the same description of Death doesn't suit at all. Maybe you can decipher deep on that).

Ch-8 ~"I adore those chocolate eyes..." (Yes, I can see that your set is modern with touch of medieval or say mythology but using something in between words instead of Chocolate would have beautified it better.)

Other than some of such references, everything is marvelous and my mind was intrigued as I went on page by page with my read.

Character : I love how the story started with all the small talks of Death bantering with Tora. The start was hilarious yet amazing. (Tora's character was okay but at times, she sounded over-fearless which seemed unnatural at the moment. But yeah! Maybe that's just my opinion so I won't comment much on that).

Grammar & Syntax : All okay and great. Perfect paragraph length and so are the sentences. Grammar is good too so I find no faults to comment here. Good job!

Overall : A good romance read with perfect story length each chapter. The story perfectly fits the concept of Coleridge's theory of poetry and I'm okay with it. I would surely recommend it to anyone who would happily go for fun yet informative romance story. A great book to read indeed. Keep it up. May be I'll continue my read more than 10 chapters if time permits.👍

And here is my token as promised.

Hope you liked this cover?
You can just pm me and get the clearer version of the cover if you want to. Thank you:)