Book by bookwormrp

Cover 7/10
It does depict the demon vs angel thing, but not super well, as it doesn't have either of the main characters or signify that it is truly angels vs demons. The circle in the middle also isn't clarified very well what it is, so maybe change that? Other than that it's pretty good.

Title 9/10
It's pretty good, and definitely symbolizes the fact that the Angel (the Grace) has fallen. The only thing that I see wrong with it is if it's necessary to add ": A Short Story" at the end of it. Other than that, it's pretty good.

Characters 8/10
Since it was a short story, the characters couldn't have much development, but they were fairly well thought out. The only problem I have with them are their names. They're both quite unnatural, which is fine, but I'm not quite sure how to pronounce them.

Plot/storyline 10/10
There were no big gaps or holes in the plot, and it was definitely quite original. It's definitely unique to have the demons being the overpowering race instead of angels, and I really liked that.

Description 9/10
It's really short, so I feel it doesn't have a huge amount of opportunity to pull people in. That being said, it does describe the story well without giving too much away, so good job on that.

Enjoyment 10/10
I definitely enjoyed the story, especially the end! I won't spoil the end for any of you who have yet to read it, but I liked it. The story as a while, though short, was fairly captivating.

Overall 53/60
Overall it was a pretty good book, I just advise you go through and maybe change the characters names or cover. I recommend it to anyone who likes short stories with emotion.