Book: Through The Dark by witzy901

Judge: Alex

For: Mystic Awards 2018

The title of this book was already taken by many other books. Cover art was okay and summary was light, but I noticed the introduction had a summary of the book that was much better. Pace was executed perfectly, and each chapter ended in a cliffhanger, which drew me in. There are many, many grammar mistakes and awkward scene transitions.This is a bit cliched. Characters are great. Overall, this book is fairly good. Its downfall lies in the grammatical errors. I noticed that British spellings were used so I did not take off for that, but there are other issues present. I would recommend getting this looked over for grammar issues. Other than that, keep on writing. With grammar corrected, I believe this book will flourish.