Note: if the chapters titles are messed up its not my fault. I'm doing exactly what the author put and she messed up on the chapters.

Chapter Ate The Serimmony 1
STOP REVOFIGN BAD! but than u JASZpAW for tehh godo revewis uve ben levving
I'm pretty sure it pains JASZpAW to make those reviews

StarPaw skided into de Camp. "FIRSTAR" SHE YOWLED "I ha to tel; uo somesting?"

"nut ow StarOaw" he sadi "yuve gut to become WARRIOR!'
Already? DIDNT SHE JUST BECOME A APPRENTICE LIKE YESTERDAY?!?!!

"MOGOSH REALLY creamed StarPaw.
Creamed Starpaw!

YEAH SAID firestar "Youv been a war for onll 3.14 dayss butt u are the best apent ice in the cAlan. Ur perfect. We ndd you to help dfeat BlackStar and ShadowclaN. And all teh other calns. Tehy are tyring 2 attack us were in the meddle of a warr. "
How did she not know their in the middle of a war? That would make no sense because Blackstar was so nice to her like 1.5 chapters ago.

"omgosh WE ARE?" scremmed StarPal she sus so surpissed!

"Ya DustPelt did while U were away in your walk Rivrclan attacked us." Said SandTrom. She locked sortaf sad she New FireStart lovved Stargleam. But it wass ok she newt wht wus best.
If she knows what's best than fight Starpaw for Firestar! Starpaw is not for him!

"OMGoht" sid StarPaw. "Quickk mack me a warrror!"
Firestar: By the power invested in me blah blah blah YOUR A WARRIOR!!!!

"Oak" said Firestar. He wlaked up to StarPaw. "aLL Cats Gather Round Who Are Older To Cach There One Prey!"

"Tday we are making a new Warrior."

The calnn GASPED!
Like a new warrior is a surprise

"SarkPaw! StarPaw!: shouted the clan. They all new infancy it was she whom was beng mad a warrior.
How'd they know it was Starpaw?

Starpaw was so exited! She'd never bin so hap inner life!

"StarPaw....." said FirePaw. He was simile like shed never sent him simle behfore. "Are you ready to become a Warrior in the Name of Starcaln?:"

"Yes!" she shock3d.

"oak." Eh sad. "Then by the powers of Starclan, I gave you this narme. From now on, you will be none as StarPaw for your pel which sings like the starss and ur conectin 2 StarClann. We onner you'r bravvery and" " kindness."
She's still a apprentice

"SarkPaw! StarPaw!: shouted the clan. They
They are calling her apprentice name...

StarGleam girned. She wass a Warrior! At least!"
There we go! And I hate it...

"FireScar," she said, cuming over 2 him. "I wanna tell u somesing." They locked sirously at him.

"yeah wat is it?" he sad, hop shinning in his eayres.

Dos he knew? StarGlema think.

"Firestar...." She brethed. She cullednt she was actually dong this after so lung.
After so long? It's been about 3 hours.

"I....."

WINDCLAN ATTAK! Shioted a voise from obove the Camp.

It was....

HOLYLEAF!
Ok so Hollyleaf called that WindClan was attacking. Why is that surprising?

I workd reall' herd on dis chapter n tired 2 spell good so plzz review NICE!
Wall yo soold have tired herder. (Misspellings were on purpose)