At first everything was a mess, things just went on and on forever it seemed, I mean you just had to include every mind blowing, light-up-my-life, beautiful sparkling detail. But it  was wrong, so wrong. Nobody has time for that, except grandma, so you had to fix it. 

And things got better, sharper. Words felt tight.  Thoughts came into focus. Ideas flowed. 

But then subtly things went off the rails, a period here a comma there. things became less exact 

t o o  s p a r s e

Still OK, I got it. I try to LOL.

but it became abstruse

IMHO

IDK

WYD