Glow No More: by ellie_the_author

Remember, these are just my opinions, and feel free to argue with or agree with me on any points I make. 

Alright, so, this is a poetry book. And, I don't know that much about poetry in terms of formatting and whatever. Overall, I'd say everything looks pretty good. It's got a lot of variety and fun poems, poems for any type of mood. It's cool that you post submissions, and have that q/a. Add's to the mood.  

My one thing is that you don't seem to capitalize I's after the first. I don't know if this is a personal choice, but I feel like those should be capitalize. 

Another thing I noticed was just that some of the poems just felt a little simple for me. More personal opinion here. Kinda just, 'let's rhyme words' type of poetry. I'm only saying that because I've read a lot of books, many with some hardcore words. Maybe wouldn't hurt to try some other forms of poetry. Experiment. Surprise us. 

But I did really like the poem Unmasked Reality. That one was pretty damn good. 

Summary

Pros:

Uh, basically everything about your book

Cons:

The capitalizing of the I's

The simplicity of it (again, more personal opinion)

So, if anyone down for a good poetry book, check out Glow No More. You won't be disappointed.