✧ achievements + reviews✧
here we shall celebrate!!
the elayne mini awards - best character aesthetics 🥈
the cavillista mini awards - best prologue 🥈
the lilac awards - fanfiction (4th place) 🏆
maltese falcon awards - best prologue 🥉
our wishing sock awards - best aesthetics/banner 🥈
our wishing sock awards - fanfiction 🥈
reviews:
The characters are distinct and well-defined, with clear personalities and dynamics between them. The chapter hooks the reader with lively dialogue and a sense of anticipation as the characters prepare for a journey. There's a mix of excitement and tension, especially with the encounter with Draco Malfoy, which keeps the reader engaged. The writing style is clear and engaging, with a good balance of dialogue and narrative description. Grim bewitched us with its enchanting atmosphere, engaging dialogue, and tantalizing plot threads. Kudos to ShortyWolf20 and Agc1019 for delivering a spellbinding introduction to their story!
- Harshywrites05.
Zenith and Cressida have so much depth and realism to them, and they just get better and deeper as the story progresses. These two characters are the reason your fanfiction stands out, and even though you're following the original book's storyline, it feels like your characters have hijacked it and are driving it themselves. The first chapter was the perfect length, and I honestly didn't notice the chapters were getting longer until you pointed that out at the end of a chapter because the story's just that good.
- katiegoesmew.
I like how although this is a book about the wizarding world of Harry Potter (I love Harry Potter) a big theme of this book is family. It also shows a different side of Sirius Black as a father. It held my interest because you conveyed emotions so well that I felt like I was really in the story. Like I was Zenith. The story is organized well. It's easy to visualize every scene because you do a great job of developing your chapters. I like your writing style. It's easy to follow and flows well, and I like that you space out description vs internal thoughts vs dialogue which makes it easy to tell what is going on.
- SSears90.
The real Harry Potter story running along with the twins' story was really impressive. The story and the whole plot were amazing. All the characters had their unique essence which was very refreshing to read, the small banters and humor of the twins made me laugh a lot. Overall, it is a really good fanfic, and I would love to read more of it!
- Siinn_zoneee.
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