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Liam is a heavy sleeper, or so what Louis thinks as he traces his index finger over the skin of Liam's face, over a stress mark on his forehead and smile marks around his mouth. Louis is careful as he lets his eyes roam and finger trail over inches of Liam's skin in wonder and confusion when he notices the different marks that litter Liam's skin.

Liam frowns in his sleep, he always frowns in his sleep and his eyebrows are threaded. His shoulders are tense in slumber Which Louis notes and he realises how Liam's hands are always clenched closed. Louis' smaller hands slide down to grab ahold of Liam's, slowly and carefully uncurling the mans fingers from the fist in curiosity, pressing the palm of his own hand to Liam's.

Louis feels so small compared to Liam, he has never felt small compared to anymore because maybe his personality was huge and it made him feel bigger than what he was. Around Liam, he felt like a Bunny Rabbit compared to a bear, the way he could curl up on Liam's lap or how Liam was able to carry him easily proved of his small stature.

Louis frowns, his eyes moving away from the two hands pressed up against one another and letting his eyes roam to the marks on Liam's arms. Louis is scooting closer to have a better look, rubbing his thumb over an old mark that runs down Liam's arm from above his wrist up.

"I'm not going to remain asleep if you keep poking at me,"Liam grumbles, shifting so that he lays on his back now and instead of his side. They were both still naked from the sex just hours before, A White thin duvet just falling under Liam's navel and his left arm coming up to rest over his eyes.

"I'm sorry Daddy, y-you're just so fascinating to look at whenever you're sleeping."Louis whispers, shuffling over so that he can throw his leg over Liam and burry his face into Liam's side."You're a fascinating man,"He giggles.

"Hmm. Am I really?"Liam mumbles into Louis' feathery hair whenever the submissive rests his head on his chest."Tell me, why am I so Fascinating to look at whenever I'm sleeping?"The corner of his mouth twitches into a small smile.

"Just, you frown in your sleep, did you know that? And the way your body tenses, from your shoulders down to your hands."Louis rubs his thumb over the knuckles of Liam's right hand as he talks."And just other little things, like you snore but not all of the time, only when you're in deep sleep, or your eyes flutter every so often when you have a good dream, and the way that your nose twitches whenever it's bad."

"You're very observant, my little Sherlock."Liam comments, stiffening a yawn behind his right hand. Louis nods his head because it was true, he was just that type of person.

"You always sleep the way that you fall asleep, you never shift."Louis adds.

"Unlike you, you're a little wiggler. You fell asleep on the sofa one time and I came to wake you up and you were in such a weird Angle and was missing your t-shirt."Liam chuckles because he remembers carrying the submissive back to bed, it was back when Louis just moved in and wondered the halls late at night.

"I've never been a good sleeper,"Louis shrugs his shoulders, rubbing his nose against Liam's chest."I couldn't afford to be, I had little sisters running circles around me and a Mother that wouldn't leave me alone until I proved my manliness."He shudders at the memory, how he was constantly pushed to do things that he didn't want to do, how he got second degree burn up his arm when he was forced to be in control of the barbecue that one summer or how he was dragged on a hunting trip to kill a deer.

He had nightmares for a week after that

He honestly thought he was the reason why Bambi didn't have a mother anymore

"Prove your manliness? What kind of mother does that?"Liam growls, squeezing the flesh of Louis' arm."The way that you are is fantastic,"He treads carefully on what he says, kissing Louis' hair."From your tummy to your nose, your laugh and your voice. You have an amazing personality and you're so smart, princess. One of the smartest in the United Kingdom and you won't believe how proud I am that you're my submissive."

Louis' whole body flushes pink at Liam's words, pulling the covers up to cover his face as he blushes. Louis is giggling under the covers,"You're lying, Daddy."Louis feels the bed shift and soon enough, Liam is hovering over the younger male, arms on either side of Louis' head as he pulls the duvet away.

"Are you accusing me of lying?"Liam narrows his eyes down at the submissive below him, Louis squirming underneath him at the intense stare."Because I'm not, and I dislike the way that you think."Liam is leaning down, pressing his lips softly to Louis' own in a soft and chaste kiss.

Louis brings his arms up to wrap around Liam's neck, bringing the kiss in deeper much to Liam's sunrise but pleasure. The kiss changes, things get more heated as Liam starts to grind down onto Louis' Body, the only thing stopping their bodies touching skin on skin the thin fabric cover that Louis pulled over himself.

"Wanna go for round two, Princess?"Liam mumbles against kiss bitten lips,"You could ride my cøck, hmm? Watch you bounce on my cøck, the pleasure written all over your face as you bounce and I slam into you. I bet you're still open from the first time round, yeah?"Louis whimpers whenever Liam is gripping Louis' cøck through the covers."My princess is all hard for Daddy."

"Daddy,"Louis gasps as he feels Liam move his hand, the friction of the covers rubbing against Louis' hard member making his head swirl. Liam is smirking once again, leaning down to press his lips to Louis' as he continues to stroke Louis' length through the sheets, slow and stead, working up a Pace Which makes the submissive moan into his dominates mouth.

Louis looks so pretty, the after glow of sweat shining his skin, his hair a mess from the sex and his lips sucked and bitten a cherry red. He was Putty in Liam's eyes as he fluttered his eye lids closed until thick eyelashes were fanning over well crafted cheekbones, just letting Liam do anything that he wanted to the smallers body.

Louis is about to cûm, he's there, just about to- then Liam's phone rings. He hopes Liam ignores it, brushes it off because Louis should be more important, right? Louis is Liam's submissive after all and Liam is in the middle of pleasuring Louis so why is he pulling away from their kiss and moving his hand away from Louis' dick?

"Daddy?"There's a pathetic whimper escaping Louis' lips as he peels open his eyes, watching as Liam sits away from Louis so he is no longer hovering over the boy so that he can now reach for his mobile that sits on the bedside table.

"Hello? What are you calling me for- I couldn't care less! What? Are you talking back to me?"Liam growls, shifting off of the bed so that he's standing up. Louis watches with mist filled eyes as Liam walks away from the bed butt naked, back tensing as he talks and he spots sight of the pairing tattoos on the back of Liam's legs. One leg had the bird cage Which was originally there but now, there were birds on the other since the arrival of Louis.

"This isn't funny, come back and finish what you started."Louis is grumbling, feeling incredibly confident all of sudden. He kicks the overs off of the body, hard member lying on his Stomach with pre-cûm leaking from his tip. He wants to finish what he started himself, but he can't, it's a rule and what he can tell Liam is now pissed off.

"Look, wait a fucking second-"Liam growls down the phone, tearing it away from his ear so he can talk to Louis."Princess, get a cold shower."

"But Daddy!"

"Louis, Don't make me tell you again."Liam snaps, watching how Louis doesn't move from where he lays on his back in the middle of the king sized bed. The dominate in eye room breathes in deeply through his nose, rolling his shoulders backs."Now. Louis."

Louis says nothing, crossing his arms over his chest and whines at the painful feeling in his lower region. He can feel Liams death stare continue, Angry that Louis was disobeying orders and instead remained laying on the bed. Knowing fully well that Liam was still watching, Louis reaches his hand down to start stroking at his length.

Liam growls, Louis blocking him out as he moans at his own pleasure, shifting to get comfortable. He runs his thumb over his own tip, an arm coming up to cover his eyes as he continues to finish what Liam failed to finish."You have five seconds to stop what you're doing, apologise for disobeying and hop into that shower unless you're going in the isolation room."

"Make me,"Louis moans, shoulders shaking as he continues to jack off. Liam sees red, hanging up the call and slamming his mobile onto the bed side table just as Louis is cûmming into his own hand and on his soft stomach, paining his stomach and chest white. Louis' body flops with vulnerability, coming down from his high just in time for Liam to be grabbing him by his arm.

Louis squeaks whenever he's lifted over Liam's shoulder, kicking his legs in protest only for Liam to hook his arm over the back of them which makes it impossible for Louis do move them."Let me go! I do not care for being manhandled like this!"Louis is screaming, small hands beating off the tense back of Liam.

Liam is landing a rather hard spank to Louis' bum with his hand alone, making the submissive hiss at the Liam but refuse to go limp. He continues his shouting and swearing, listening as Liam is unlocking a door and before he knows it, he's being thrown onto a bed in a room he has never been in before.

"You,"Liam points at him, brown eyes swear to be red in anger,"Are staying in here until you learn to obey to what your dominate tells you to do. The way you spoke to me, let alone treated me was down right disrespectful, especially after how good you were after I pleasured you."Louis rolls his eyes at him.

"Whatever,"He mumbles, still naked as he turns into his side on the bed, wrapping his arms around himself."I fucking hate you anyway."His voice is barely a whisper and Liam catches it, body tense and jaw clenched as he grabs at Louis' arm. Louis winces at the grip, Liam's hand firmly holding his arm.

"What did you just say?"Liam demands, grip getting tighter and in pain, tears are brimming Louis' blue eyes because he's sure that this grip is going to leave marks, leave bruises.

"I said I hate you! I fucking hate you!"Louis is shouting, loudly as Liam is throwing him back on the bed in anger, turning a blind eye to the submissive whose arm is pulsing in pain at the death grip Liam has on it.

"You hate me, yeah? After I pay for everything that you want, shower you in affection, yeah? Do you want to really hate me? Because I can make you hate me, I could make you run laps for hours on end, beat your arse black and blue until you can't bare to even sit down, burn hot wax on your skin. Is that what you want?"Liam growls.

Louis shakes his head, gripping onto his arm where Liam once held and watches as Liam looks at him in disgrace, slamming the isolation room door closed and locking it behind him with the key that he has. Louis' body is sticky with cûm as he lets out a shuddery breath, glassy blue eyes still looking in the direction of the door that Liam just left through, leaving Louis on his own in a room he didn't know.

"I-I don't hate you."Louis gulps, wiping under his eyes because he wasn't going to cry."I kinda really like you though..."

This didn't go where I expected it to go, I had like second smut planned but I didn't feel in the mood to write it therefore; this happened! A trip to the isolation room for a naughty Louis.

Kinda pulled at my heart strings a bit at this last line

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