Book Title: "my baby my luna"

Author: Chelsea428

REVIEW:

Title

The title is okay, but it is too cliche and the general audience may be put off by it. Additionally, I see no use for the title being enclosed in double quotes, so I would probably just title it as 'My Baby My Luna'

Cover

The cover is good, and it fits well with the book and genre. The text is a bit off centered which makes it look a bit disorganized but that can be easily fixed with a bit of editing.

Description

The description was well representative of the story. However, it would be better with some simple changes like removing the unnecessary quotations and fixing capitalization, etc.

Plot

Books with a heavy romantic plot or sub plot tend to be quite slow in their progress, and since I have read only the first few chapters, I cannot decisively say much about the plot. What I can say I enjoyed was the quick paced nature of the story. It could be make even better with the inclusion of some context to the premise and setting of the story (at least in the first two chapters) and making the story more concise it the way that it's told. For example, the first 2 chapters combined into 1 chapter with a little more description and effort would be a lot stronger of a start than making them into 2 parts.

Characters

The character's voice was enjoyable but she did appear to be a 'Mary Sue' at times. Also since the chapters are quite short, it doesn't allow for much character development or display of character relationships. The dialog is engaging but at times it does not flow very well in sense of the conversation as a whole.

Grammar

The writing style was engaging and well executed with good grammar. I would recommend some editing to fix small problems like capitalization, and punctuation.

Rating: 2.75/5

Book star: 3