After reading through everything more than once, I've finally ranked the top 5 standouts.

The main criteria your stories were judged on are:
1)Vocabulary
2) Description of the protagonist's feelings [way too many of you descriebed the protagonist as heartbroken for a mere 1 second, shifting into hate in the next. That was honestly way too soon! Heart break takes quite a while before shifting into actual hate/revenge!]
3) Progression of the story
4) Character developments
5) Paragraphing!
6) Punctuation

Now, for the two consolation prizes!

SPUR-OF-THE-MOMENT HONOURARY MENTION
BirdieLittleWinx [your story was really different and sad, so I thought you deserved a mention] // Just_Jerome [very scary and different, so I decided to mention you too, but PLEASE DON'T COPY AND PASTE NEXT TIME! I noticed that]

PRIZE #1
AshaGanesh14 [really good vocabulary! I got slightly confused with the choice of names, but I liked it all the same]

CONSOLATION PRIZE #2
spread_da_love [I like your idea of revenge; how your protagonist got love]

THIRD PLACE
AmongMillions [very, VERY short, but your English and vocabulary was good! I liked that she got her revenge without having to get her hands dirty]

SECOND PLACE
grumpypancakes [your story was pretty good, and I liked the fact that she so happened to call the perfect wrong number]

FIRST PLACE
milomieneres [I love that you included many other characters with lives and problems of their own. I really enjoyed your story, and your ending was perfect, heart wrenching in all the right ways a book should be]

Congratulations! Comment/DM me for your prizes!

And thank you to the other participants! I really enjoyed reading every single one of your entries! I hope you'll join my next contest :)

xx
octaves