Mini-Awards WINNERS - Best Heartbreaking Chapter
🥇 1st place winner 🥇
Ancilla by SeraDrake
Emotional impact - 10/10
Character development: 10/10
Tension - 10/10
Resonance - 10/10
Narrative Significance - 10/10
Overall score: 50/50
This category is not called Best Heartbreaking Chapter for nothing, but I was not expecting to be in tears.
The author skillfully depicted what it is like to be heartbroken and to wake up on your own after a long period of time in the company of your partner.
It is not always about crying and not wanting to get out of bed; it is also about emotional pain, which can become physical.
While breakups are unique to each individual, this one hit close to home. I liked how the various stages of breakup were written; they made you feel Ancilla's pain and anguish.
The author managed to capture every single detail, such as the feelings one has after a breakup when one is suddenly alone and not waking up next to the loved one, the feelings one has when returning to places one used to go while in a relationship with said person, and so on.
🥇 1st place winner 🥇
Always Faithful by MDjarin17
Emotional impact - 10/10
Character development: 10/10
Tension - 10/10
Resonance - 10/10
Narrative Significance - 10/10
Overall score: 50/50
When I saw the Evanescence lyrics, I knew this chapter was going to be an emotional roller coaster. I initially assumed that the characters had broken up, but it was more than that.
This chapter had a huge impact on me because I am constantly thinking about what I would do if my husband died.
I believe this chapter is heartbreaking from three perspectives:
⋆ Firstly, the main character experiences the loss of a loved one.
⋆ Secondly, Lyla was suffering from being cheated on.
⋆ Thirdly, I believe Carter may have also suffered.
Back to Brian, I truly believed he was going to commit suicide. I am happy he didn't.
The remaining prizes will be awarded after both the main awards and mini awards have concluded.
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🥈2nd place winner🥈
Love at Dawn by LiebeKlara
Emotional impact - 10/10
Character development: 10/10
Tension - 10/10
Resonance - 9/10
Narrative Significance - 10/10
Overall score: 49/50
This chapter was extremely dark and heartbreaking. There are few things more painful than knowing that a loved one will die the next day.
What made this chapter even sadder was that the characters had no way of preventing the inevitable.
Their intimate scene felt even more heartbreaking; imagine living knowing you will not be able to feel, talk to, or even see your loved one.
I tried to imagine it, but everything overwhelmed me, so I can only guess how Edith felt.
The remaining prizes will be awarded after both the main awards and mini awards have concluded.
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🥉3rd place winner🥉
Stay Mine by lostlovefairy
Emotional impact - 7/10
Character development: 7/10
Tension - 6/10
Resonance - 4/10
Narrative Significance - 8/10
Overall score: 32/50
I did not enjoy this chapter, and I will explain why in the following paragraphs. Because it did not like it, it did not have much of an impact on me.
The chapter was not bad at all; it simply needed some polishing. I believe the chapter would have been better if the author had focused more on Fiza's emotions rather than Alan's.
Alan's feelings are also important, but given that he is the one who separated from Fiza, I believe her feelings should have been explored more than his.
The remaining prizes will be awarded after both the main awards and mini awards have concluded.
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