In Your Heart by oh_my_yoongi

Title: The title is nice. I think it's related to the heart soulmate ability(?).

Cover: I like the cover. It's simple yet attractive.

Description/summary: The description is relevant. It makes it clear what the story is and I'm very excited as I love soul-mate AUs. It doesn't have any mistakes, but I feel it is short in length. I think you didn't put much effort in it, and honestly, I can relate as I'm super lazy when it comes to writing descriptions.

Plot: The plot is interesting. We have a boss and a secretary, who turn out to be each other's soulmates. They both are practical people who don't care about having a love life, so there will obviously be some kind of conflict later on, to make it more interesting. I'm looking forward to how the soulmate skills will play out later in the book.

Grammar and Punctuation: There are very few mistakes. And the ones I saw I've dismissed as typos. Your grammar is good and I have nothing to point out in that matter.

Overall feel and flow of book: The story flows smoothly and is easy to read. While there is nothing wrong with the way you've written this story, I felt it needed to be a bit more descriptive. Your way of storytelling is quite straight forward and to the point. But, remember to have fun with the scenes. Add small details about a place or a thing to make it seem more real. Don't be afraid to give a specific backstory, instead of a generalized one, because it makes the readers emotionally connect with the characters. Also, to avoid so many POV changes, you can write in third person (I'm not suggesting you change your entire book. Only saying this for future reference). You need to learn how to add mystery elements to your story. For example, it was obvious the main leads are soul-mates from the description, but soul-mate abilities were something you could've revealed slowly instead of giving it away in your note, it was something we as readers and the main characters could've figured out together. Overall, it is a nice and fun read. I had finished eleven chapters in no time without worrying about grammatical mistakes.

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oh_my_yoongi Please don't be offended or discouraged. You and your story have a lot of potential. Hope you take this review positively. Feel free to reach me if you have any queries or need to talk about this review. Keep Writing! 💜💜💜

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