Hi there!!!<3

Username- @ VarunzHaights

Cover, Title and Blurb- 9/ 10

Grammar and Spelling-6/ 10

Detail-9/ 10

Plot-5/ 5

Originality-3/ 5

Flow of the story-5/ 5

Overall enjoyment-4/ 5

Total-41/ 50

Review- The story-line is amazing, I loved the idea of the story, the flow is smooth which interests the reader to read more! But, the punctuations, commas, and full stops are at wrong place at many times, which makes it kind of irritating for the reader. Your grammar could be improved a little, try writing on apps like Grammarly it will tell you your mistakes and will help you improve!

Author you rock!

Sorry if I offend you in any ways

With best wishes

Azmi<3