Hi there!!!<3

Username- @Deepshikha2006

Cover, Title and Blurb- 7/ 10

Grammar and Spelling-6/ 10

Detail-9/ 10

Plot-5/ 5

Originality-4/ 5

Flow of the story-3/ 5

Overall enjoyment-3/ 5

Total-37/ 50

Review- Firstly I loved the idea of the story, its something which can happens with anyone this age and so its very relatable. Although I'll say the grammar could have been improved as some parts you have to re-read to understand. also I would suggest you to update the blurb, i read you wrote your positions in different contests, it would be even better if you write the date in front of them and then write your position! 

Overall, author with a little improvement, your story will be on fire!!!

sorry if i offend you in any ways

With best wishes,

Azmi<3