Username : Niivah

Theme : SnowFlakes

Title Chosen : SnowFlakes of Rememberance

No. of Lines : 24

 Snowflake of remembrance

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The cuts, the edges

The bruises and scars

All laying open

And suffering the dark

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The cold, the past

The blood and the fate

This little red drop

Is to be a snowflake

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It falls down, so slow

So slow and so soft

A memory for all

Who ever have lost

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The crystals, the shape

The story and the part

Everyone is unique

Respect 'em by heart

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The colour, the ember

The spark at the centre

Feelings will arise

For 'tis a cold December

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The power of love

With the miracle of life

Let's remember together

And pass on the light!

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Date: 01/12/14