Username: MadBooks

Poem Selected: One Step More

Title chose: Keep Driving

Type: Free Verse

No. of Lines: 24

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Title: Keep Driving

After we broke up,

Oh oh, woah oh,

I started my car but hit a bump,

Oh oh, woah oh,

My cell phone went out the window,

Oh oh, woah oh.

I just gotta keep driving,

Oh oh, woah oh,

I just gotta stop lying,

Oh oh, woah oh,

Leave you on the road behind me,

Oh oh, woah oh,

Learn how to finally be free.

Oh oh, woah oh,

I finally smiled a couple miles away,

Oh oh, woah oh,

Even a small distance makes me feel okay,

Oh oh, woah oh,

The radio's turned up all the way,

Oh oh, woah oh,

And to think it's only been a day,

Oh oh, woah oh.

I just gotta keep driving,

Keep driving.

Please rate on the scale of 1 - 5 as a comment on this page.

Total Ratings.

Awwthentic: 4.5

Miss_Popular_97: 5

Lonely_Glider: 4.3

Owain Glyn: 4

Ratings from Reader's: 8

Average of Readers Ratings: 2.66

Sum Total: 16.4

Verdict: It was nearly a perfect poem and we were hoping it get good ratings but i guess our readers didn't think that way. I am happy to announce you as a runner-up though. Your poem has potential and sooner or later, it will reached to readers. :)

Thank you for participating. 

Awwthentic~

Dated: 15/09/2014