Entry #15 - Second Runner-Up
Username : GeminiGirll
Theme : Snowflakes
Title Selected : Snowflakes
No. of Lines : 24
Snowflakes
As I stand on the ground,
Watching you walk away.
Wind nudges me and say-
Oh! Thou damsel,
Why are you standing
In distress?
Answers-
I have none.
What should I say?
He just walked away.
No notification or explanation
He gave.
Boisterous wind guffaws;
Nonplussed I feel it.
Playing with my hair,
It shows me the reason:
White pearls fall on the ground
From the arsenal of clouds.
Different are these from one another,
Same journey,
But different path.
Either collide to be one or to destroy.
We, too, are like Snowflakes, and
We collided to fall apart.
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Ratings.
Owain Glyn : 3
Lonely Rider : 4.5
Ratings : 27 = 13.5
Total : 21
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Date: 05/12/14
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