Username: merp_and_me

Poem Selected: Picture of You

Title Selected: Hope

Type: Free Verse

No. of Lines: 20 Lines

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Her Poem:

Title: Hope

hope is when there's nothing left,

to love,

to fight for,

to live for.

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hope is when you need someone,

to tell you it's ok to cry,

to help you stand up,

and fight.

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hope is when you lost it all,

and need to find someone,

who can give it all back,

and never walks away.

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but hope also is,

the only thing left,

when everyone is gone,

and when everything is broken,

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hope is what we all need to get up,

and walk away from this life,

and start a new one,

somewhere else.

Please rate on the scale of 1 - 5 as a comment on this page.

Total Ratings.

Awwthentic: 2

Miss_Popular_97: 1

Lonely_Glider: 2.5

Owain Glyn: 2

Ratings from Reader's: 12

Average of Readers Ratings: 4

Sum Total: 11.5

Verdict: Your poem was nice but the structure was confusing to most of us. You joined in late and tried, that is so applaudable. 

Please publish your poem so that we can give our reviews there.

Thank you for participating. 

Awwthentic~

Dated: 15/09/2014