Username : luv2writeandread

Poem chosen : How Free Are we?

Title Selected : Are we really free?

Type : Deep/Dark

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Her Poem.

Title: Are We Really Free?

I sit there

Thinking of what life would be

If I where free

From the comments

And the pain

Skipping doesn't help

Moving does nothing

Fear follows

And never leaves you

I'm out of options

So I jump the only price

My life.

Please rate on the scale of 1 - 5 as a comment on this page.

Total Ratings.

Awwthentic: 3

Miss_Popular_97: 4

Lonely_Glider: 2.5 

Owain Glyn: 3

Ratings from Reader's: 11 

Average of Readers Ratings: 3.6

Sum Total: 16.16

Verdict: A failry good attempt so I had to take you up as a runner up. Though, I suggest you edit and make necesarry changes. Maybe add a few lines more. Completely upto you. :)

Thank you for participating. 

Awwthentic~

Dated: 15/09/2014