● Before anything else, I would just like to say that we aren't being biased with anything here. As far as we can, we score everyone's entries fairly. Friends are friends, but they're not business partners.

● Scores are cumulative. By next Task, your score there, along with your past score, deaths, and extra points will be added. Scores are out of twelve and we'll grade your entries according to its creativity, spelling/grammar, relevance to the Task, and if we've liked it.

● These are from our point-of-views. If you want to have any questions regarding anything, kindly let us know.

SCORES, NOTES AND BONUS POINTS

D1 Female - AURELIA SAPPHYRE - 0

No entry, no note.

D1 Male - TERENCE BUHR - 9.5

This entry seems to focus more with Terence's characterization. The scenes seem to go fast, though. I'd rather you have them more detailed, as this Reaping seems to be one of the usual ones we see. Overall, we are quite impressed.

D2 Female - THEA LUTHAIS - 0

No entry, no note.

D2 Male - ALEXANDER LE MONTE - 10.5

Oooh, how we love determined Tributes! Alexander's character is shown well in the entry, and his thoughts and emotions are displayed with precision, too. I (Aedrienne) have one concern that's holding me back in giving you a higher score, though.

"Did not entered." "Did not enter." See the difference between them? You've made phrases like the former more than once, and that one's grammatically incorrect. A tip for everyone, perhaps.

D3 Female - ANASTASIA JUERLIA - 8.5 {+1 for FIRST ENTRY}

Emotional and well-flowed, it's actually a great entry for a fast one. There were some punctuation mistakes but they're easy to overlook. Th entry itself doesn't seem to affect us hard, though, but we are impressed.

D3 Male - DAVID ELECTRO - 6.5

Although I do appreciate your effort, we've noticed a lot of spelling and grammatical mistakes. You'd also changed tense more often, and it just makes us confused. Try making entries longer next time, too...

D4 Female - CALYPSO ADRIENNE - 10

We absolutely love your entry (particularly Rosamira), and as far as mistakes go, we can't see any. Calypso's attitude and thoughts about volunteering are displayed clearly throughout it, and so we can't wait for future entries!

D4 Male - CAINE AFLIVA - 9.5

We like Caine's thoughts in the entry, and it reflected well on his character. His internal arguments are pretty amusing to read, and we can't see any mistakes, whatsoever. Good work!

D5 Female - COSIMA POTTS - 10.5

No concerns whatsoever regarding your spelling and grammar, and we've enjoyed reading the entry, too. Quaint and delicate, it was a different entry amongst others, and Cosima's voice was distinct. I may have been confused with the time setting (Aedrienne), and didn't realize that it's the scene where the Tributes meet their loved ones in the Hall... but I think that's just a me problem.

D5 Male - CHANCE HUNTERS - 6

I'm sorry, but the entry's just so short and full of spelling formatting, and grammatical mistakes that we it's only right to give this score. I felt that one mood you possibly wanted us to feel in your entry - the part where the girl helps Chance - but that's about it. We also would like longer entries...

D6 Female - RIN SCARLETT - 8.5

You've changed tenses frequently, and it gets kind of confusing when that happens. There are a few mistakes, grammar- and spelling-wise. However though, you've portrayed Rin's attitude well, and her reaction to being Reaped was pretty surprising.

D6 Male - DAKOTA RHODES - 10 {+1 for CLEARWATER}

A gripping entry, with great flow and choice of words. We liked Dakota's characterization, too. Your reason for volunteering was realistic enough that it seems fit to give out a bonus point. We've noticed a few mistakes, although they are easy to miss because your entry just transports the reader into District Six. Good job!

D7 Female - KASSANDRA BROWN - 7.5

We've seen many mistakes regarding the grammar, but it was a nice read. Too much use of the word "smirked," Rosamira notes. I have no problem (Aedrienne) with that, but there are obvious things pulling me and Rosamira back from giving a higher score.

D7 Male - NAIRN CEDARA - 10

Emotional and well-paced, with good balance of description and characterization. We think we noticed one spelling mistake with his name - being Narin - but pfft. It has a home-y sense to it that we both liked, too, and we have a feel with how you described District Seven.

D8 Female - TY LEE BRUIN - 0

No entry, no note.

D8 Male - BARRETT WROSS - 10 {+2 for BEST ENTRY}

You didn't choose to make an extravagantly-detailed entry, but with this one, we felt like we really were inside Barrett's mind. It also was out-of-the-frame, having no further details whatsoever, but your reason for volunteering was so heart-felt and the entry itself is beautiful that we decide to give away a bonus point. Future entries are much-awaited.

D9 Female - ANALISE RAMIREZ - 0

No entry, no note.

D9 Male - JASPER TITUS - 9.5

It was a good entry, but we were kind of confused with why he volunteered. I don't know; it was just so hollow and didn't have much depth to it... However, it was well-paced and -detailed, and we didn't notice any mistakes.

Props to the song, too. I sang it in my head with my self-made country tune.

D10 Female - CARISSA PECUS - 0

No entry, no note.

D10 Male - ISAAC BELL - 8

It hurt the eyes that it was all just cramped inside one big paragraph, but you didn't lack details and it was actually a good read - we're impressed. Mind dividing them into shorter ones, perhaps?

D11 Female - WILLOW BARNE - 7.5

It's an okay entry. Not too shabby, not that great in a sense, but we enjoyed it nonetheless. There were a few typos and punctuation mistakes, but otherwise it's fine.

D11 Male - BRAE CALONE - 0

No entry, no note.

D12 Female - KALYN - [DROPPED OUT]

D12 Male - AYDEN HAWTHORN - 9.5 {+1 for EMBLEM OF FIRE}

That second paragraph got us hooked.

Now, grammar- and spelling-wise, we didn't see any mistakes. The entry itself is well-paced and we got a firm hold with Ayden's character... That one part where you fought with Peacekeepers was so sudden and amazingly-detailed that we granted you a bonus point for having the best reaction - well, reaction of sorts.

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Thank you guys, for handing in and waiting. :D

D'you want some tips for your works? PM us and that's that. We'll try and give our best in doing so.

Sponsorships and Rankings may be posted tomorrow and Task Two for the next day. Just a reminder: We Gamemakers are humans, too, and Gamemaking made us realize that we also have lives. (Wow, shocking.) But we'll try our best to be on time and catch up with everything.

May the odds be ever in your favour...