Reader's Point 🗻 Reviewer's Mind 🗻 Judge's Choice 🗻 Achievements
R E A D E R ' S
P O I N T
• Aesthetics •
"They are AMAZINGGGGGINGLYYY Supercalifragilisticexpialidocious... I did not have another word for it."
• Prologue •
"Fact- No matter how much you smile and laugh through the whole day but at night you do know- you're all alone to grieve for something that wasn't even your fault at all."
"Akele insaan ka dard bheed mein rehne wale kya janenge😔😔😔😔"
"No matter how much you pretend that you are strong, but in night the pillows know how much you are alone."
"It feels weird, when we feels alone after standing in the crowd with a lots of people."
"As much as someone hides their feelings, all that sadness and frustration comes out in the form of tears at night🙂🙂🙂"
• Chapter 1 •
"it's not easy to move on but at least try toh karna hi chahiye🙂 and all girls/boys are not the same🙂"
"#AnuPreForever #Kriya'sUpdatesAreBest"
(Can't help, I'm a shameless person!)
"Its not easy to move on. But personally I believe if your trust is broken then you think everyone is same"
"I like this meeting, this is something unusual. Otherwise in all stories they bumped with each other, and the girl about the fall and boy saved her from fall and they had eyelock"
"Bahut realistic.. Thank god.. If I get another book having eyelock, girl falling on the boy and all that idiotic things, mein chappal leke kisi ko marungii!!"
"He is not wrong.
When we get betrayed.
We assume that this whole world is fake, everything is a lie"
• Chapter 2 •
"Try not to be fake in this fake world. Be real,Be rare.🖤"
"It isn't bad doing flings. And about society why they don't say anything to boys. The society says "Ladka hai Karega hi" but when this thing a girl done they call her playgirl, bad girl , shameless."
"I also feel you should wear the clothes in which you are comfortable. Of you are comfortable in western you should wear and of you are comfortable with Indian then you should wear it indian.
Don't change yourself for society"
• Chapter 3 •
"If he lost interest then that means he never had!"
"There is no one forever in your life. People are like seasons they come and go"
"I like prerna's answer. She is straightforward. I feel if we answer true maybe at that time it will hurt the person little but it is good for his life after that"
"You can never forget someone, but after a while it stops creating an impact on your heart and mind. Hence give time yourself to heal you"
• Chapter 4 •
"There's one quote which I love, 'To live is the rarest thing in the world as most of the people just exist'."
"Short friendships are very good because isme koi expectations nahi hoti bas ek achhi memory rehti hai puri life ke liye....🙂"
"Yes don't let your past affect your future.
Do not ever ruin your friendship for a person who entered your life recently. Friends are really important, they will support you and guide you. Keep your love life and friendships separate. The day you mix them, you'll end up losing one or the other."
"He is right. Just because of the girl you can't ignore everyone and your health. Time can heal everything but you should also try to forget her. They are your true friend. The girl who is selfish because of her going you are still struck. But when your true friend go away from you, because of your own mistake how can you forgive yourself"
"Because he find prerna here. Not because he love her because he can see his own.reflection because of betrayal. She also betrayed by her bf and he also betrayed by mishka"
"Pleasure of love lasts for a moment but pain of love lasts for lifetime"
"Because he finds peace here. I have read in one of the books ~ Home is not the place where you live it's the place you find peace and sense of belonging."
"Sometimes small meetings and small friend ships give a new meaning to life"
"Well Love is like rose, it's beautiful and dangerous."
• Chapter 5 •
"sometimes silent conversation have more words..."
"This chapter made my day....this short story took my heart.... This is what i wanted to read for so long.... There was no love in this story but still i love their relationship...
From my POV perfect description....I don't know how to express my feelings....i have no words.... It's amazing.... I'm in love with your this book...."
"Aww...you totally deserve it kriya.
The books totally win my heart. This type of story I wanted to read from long time. There is no love in anurag and prerna relationship but something is here in their relationship which have no name. All relationship don't need love. I have no words to describe how much I love the book."
"Do not fall in love with someone blindly, nor trust anyone blindly. The more you put your trust in someone, the more are the chances of being hurt immensely.
The quote is perfect matching with anurag and prerna"
"Friendship.. One word and thousand feelings"
"I can understand prerna. He did left her but the type of person he was before leaving, the one whom prerna gave her heart. It's difficult to move on. Because first love can never be forgotten."
"PRERNA... Awesomeee
Gods... What a wonderful ending yaar..
Aise non cliched endings kabhi hote nahi hai.
But I am still a sucker for happy endings😅😅"
• Epilogue •
"Awww...Thank you so much kriyu❤
I feel very connected to your stories that's why I love to read read them. This short story is amazing. I like it very much."
"chapter 5 : Broken souls
Move on karna easy nahi...I know how it feels... But I'm glad ki unhone kr liya move on....
Me toh dono se equally Connect hu... Aisa laga jaise me 2 years peeche chali gayi hu apni life mein..."
"Good? What are you talking about. It has become one of my favorite short stories❤❤"
"My favourite chapter would be the 5th chapter, Broken souls last scene jab Prerna woh bracelet Anurag ko deti hai and that is very iconic. Mujhe bahut accha laga..
I could relate to both of them, Society expectations and everything is a true something that happens..
I am so glad I could read such a non cliched perfect book.
It really touched my heart and this book is always gonna be one of my favorite books on Wattpad!!
Kudos Author ji!!"
"Kriyuuu this has become my favorite short story for sure! How beautifully you have written it!! Late padhne ke liye sholly...last few weeks of the semester have been crazy. It was so realistic and it's true that some bonds are beyond any label...it's the comfort zone and the ease of sharing your feelings with the other person that matters. There's no need to explain when two people have that special connection, however it may be. I could relate to both Anurag and Prerna throughout the story...some people come into our lives as part of destiny and here both of them embraced that bond and valued it for years. And in their thoughts of each other, they healed each other even though they weren't in the same place for long. I'm definitely going to be rereading this one❤️❤️"
"I just love the whole story, everything was realistic, I was feeling every emotion of the characters at the time of reading the story, the prologue made me hook at it, every chapter gave a moral, a true definition of life, prerna was my favorite character till last, as everything is not easy for a girl, I admired her a lot, she was so me. I can say it is perfect book with everything. Sometimes strangers plays an important role in our life, which known people didn't. Broken souls chapter is so close to my heart. As they started a new chapter of their life after moving on from past, which is not so easy.
All stories are not meant to be completed with happy or sad ending, they looks perfect being incompleted.
This story is beyond everything, it was the first ever anuPre ff which I ever read, although it's a general fiction. And I worth reading it. Kudos to you for writing this. Waiting for more like this from you."
R E V I E W E R ' S
M I N D
"The plot is common as I have read many stories where the male and female lead are betrayed by their love interests but what made this story different from others is not falling in love between the male and female."
~ chocoholic_201 from TheSapphirecommunity
"Sometimes in life we meet people who are not meant to stay in our life, but they leave a big impact. That to me was Anurag and Prerna in this story. Two peas in a pod. So similar with their pains but so different with their ways of handling it. Every scene was beautifully crafted. Each one of them had a soul of their own. The little-est of the things had the greatest importance. Chapter-5: Broken Souls is my favorite. When they exchanged that pen and bracelet, I loved that scene. Chef's kiss. Also Anurag made a portrait of Prerna and she wrote a book on him. Beautifully etched and portrayed. The plot deals with an intense topic in a very light hearted way. Each chapter is a lesson in itself. A heartwarming feeling arises in you once you read it. And I love the ending. I can go on till lengths about it. The ending is not sad, nor is it happy. It leaves us with questions and a forever memory of the characters. Something which only an author who writes from heart can do. It is rough and unedited, no doubt, but that does not hinder what you are trying to deliver to the readers.
One of the most beautiful character arcs ever. From two beautifully broken souls to two people who moved on, by themselves. It was a battle they hadn't asked for. But it became a battle they won. Excuse my philosophical self. I love their development. From Prerna being a girl finding a Vikrant in every guy to finding the right guy for herself, she had come a long way. And Anurag. A guy who thought that each girl was Mishka developed into someone who couldn't look at anyone except Prerna. I really like how flawed and relatable each character is. Prerna not believing in the institution of marriage is a very 20th century thinking with which a lot of people connect with. And Anurag finally following his dream of becoming a portraitist was a very heart warming change. Can I take this as a moment to say that I really like Mishka and Vikrant's characters? They weren't completely wrong. They aimed for their happiness. And it takes guts to be selfish for our own happiness. They weren't perfect. No one is. And that is why their character is really relatable. All in all you have a great ensemble of characters. One which you should be really proud of."
~ _starflies_ from BrownHousehold
~ starunicorn23 from IndianLegion
J U D G E ' S
C H O I C E
"Coming to the story, it's a simple sweet story and justified the title."
~ Pooja1412 from Melange Awards 2020
"I really enjoyed the first chapter where both the breakups were described. The scene where Prerna and Vikrant broke up was especially heartwrenching."
~ Eveleft13 from The Rising Stars Awards 2020
A C H I E V E M E N T S
🥇 1st position in The Melange Awards by Pooja1412 (Short Story)
🥈 2nd position in The Rising Stars Awards 2020 by _miss_idealist_ (Short Story)
🥈 2nd position in The Hin-glish Awards 2020 by Hin-glishAwards2020 (Short Story)
🥇 Best Blurb in Floret Year End Awards 2020 by thefloretcommunity (Short Story)
🥇 Best Title in The Floret Year End Awards by thefloretcommunity (Short Story)
🥇 Best Title in The Maybe Awards by 9ice_for_what (Short Story)
🥈 2nd Place in Best Title in The Hidden Gems Awards by Demiwitch_Fangirl (Overall)
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