Hello welcome to your eyes' death.

Here it is, get ready to cringe to death at this ugly thing:

Yeah, I just went on to practice and experiment and this ugly piece of rubbish came tumbling out of the toilet. I know, this is really trashy and horrid and you have burned your eyes out and you're wondering why I posted this in the first place.

Well, I wanted some opinions, like what I shouldn't have done and what I could have done better. And yes, I know this is garbage so you can include that in your criticism.