review 1- Project: Ares

cover- 9/10

i think that the cover is really aesthetic.

BUT!

idk, i liked the previous cover better😢

i mean, i was genuinely shocked when i saw that you had changed the cover because i really honestly liked it very very much.

but because it's your book and your decision, and i have no say in it, 🤐

i would just like to say that even though i like this cover as well, i can't help but compare it to the previous one lol😂💖

title- 10/10

it's unique and short, and i totally love it!

description/short summary- 10/10

i don't know why but i personally think that the description is cute🤪

is that justified??😂

i also really like the way you've given a sort of a whole background of the story in just a few lines, luring in the readers even more as you progress through it.

plot- 10/10

to be honest?

i NEVER thought reading something related to the greek mythology could be this fun!

(judge me all you want but i have never watched/read percy jackson y'all talk so much about, or anything else even loosely related to greek mythology👁👄👁)

the entire plot is new and interesting for me, and i think that the story is perfectly paced for me: not too fast and not too slow either!

grammar- 19.5/20

1) 10/10- awesome. there were no hiccups in the grammar, and that made me even more inclined to reading more of your story! great work🥂

2) 9.5/10- i would really really like it if you would divide your paragraphs into smaller segments, like, starting anew after every dialogue. 

i hate stuffed in paragraphs, and you have all the liberty to use as much space you want in your chapters, so why not exploit it!?

total- 58.5/60

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to @MyOwnARMY16 , 

i had to cut a mark for the cover, and i intentionally cut only half a mark in the last category as i already felt guilty enough not giving you a perfect score for this absolute masterpiece that you have managed to so beautifully craft🥺

the way your mind works is beyond me, and i can only appreciate your work, not criticize it!

i'm so sorry if this review doesn't satisfy you, but i did try my best😅❤

thankyou, and all the best!🌸

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