review 6- Man in Black

cover- 10/10

you did an absolutely fantastic job with the cover!🥂

also, adding a sub-heading is very clever, especially since it complements the title of the book so beautifully✨

(min yoongi tear era was sUperior)

title- 10/10

i was skeptical of the title at first, since it seems like, too cliché(?). 

but reading the story totally changed my perspective!

it fits well with the storyline, and is just perfect the way it is *chef's kiss*.

description/short summary- 10/10

the sexual tension in the dialogue stated above is making me some typa way, mia🥵

the way you describe their characters/thoughts is refreshing, and i totally dig it.

also, i first thought that they were highschool students lmao🤠(iykyk)

plot- 10/10

original masterpiece. that's all i can say.

your story has got me h00ked. 

you have so much talent, and you translate that talent into your work perfectly!

i'm particularly appalled by how you manage to tick every single detailing in your story.

for instance, soomi had already seen yoongi's back in the coffee house and that's why she had a hunch that it was him when she saw him in a suit. 

i hate it when people just name it simple intuition.

your work is a literary piece of art, well done!❣

grammar- 20/20

1) 10/10- i think my english teacher would so jealous of your expansive knowledge of words.

truly a commendable work.

and i think it's safe to say that you pick your words wisely, and that you actually know them.

i see people use fancy words just for the heck of it, even if it's out of context.

2) 10/10- the line distribution is also perfect.

one thing that i would add here is how much work and effort you put into your banners.

i read the comments and got to know exactly how much time and struggle goes into making one, and that just shows your dedication towards this book of yours🤗

total- 60/60

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to @minXXshuga,

i truly couldn't find even a single flaw in your work, and i think it's safe to say that your book is highly underrated.

in fact, you got me so whipped that i even forgot to vote for the chapters at times! i had to then go back and check if i had actually voted or not lol😅

anyways, you book is an art, and i hope this review helps you gain more confidence as you proceed with its making🥂

thankyou, and all the best!🌸

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