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account rate twenty two!

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@SILK-TEARS

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❝ 𝘪 𝘭𝘦𝘧𝘵 𝘮𝘺 𝘴𝘩𝘢𝘮𝘱𝘰𝘰 𝘪𝘯 𝘺𝘰𝘶𝘳
𝘴𝘩𝘰𝘸𝘦𝘳. 𝘪 𝘭𝘦𝘧𝘵 𝘮𝘺 𝘴𝘮𝘪𝘭𝘦 𝘪𝘯𝘴𝘪𝘥𝘦
𝘺𝘰𝘶𝘳 𝘩𝘦𝘢𝘥. 𝘮𝘺 𝘴𝘰𝘯𝘨 𝘰𝘯 𝘳𝘦𝘱𝘭𝘢𝘺
𝘪𝘯 𝘺𝘰𝘶𝘳 𝘴𝘱𝘦𝘢𝘬𝘦𝘳. 𝘪 𝘭𝘦𝘧𝘵 𝘮𝘺
𝘵-𝘴𝘩𝘪𝘳𝘵 𝘰𝘯 𝘵𝘩𝘦 𝘦𝘥𝘨𝘦 𝘰𝘧 𝘺𝘰𝘶𝘳
𝘬𝘪𝘯𝘨 𝘣𝘦𝘥 ❞










user | ummm i love it! the upper case looks great and it's an aesthetic ass name points for you sis!
.・。nine / ten

name | cute cute kinda edgy. i like the dashes either side and the name is cute. it's not my favourite but matches your theme!
.・。seven / ten

profile pic | oof yes. the blood on the diamond looks mad and matches your " edgy " theme. i like the colouring and it's pretty cool.
.・。seven / ten

banner | simple n cute matches everything really well.
.・。nine / ten


















bio | pretty cool structure. i like the symbols in the header. your name is super cool btw! the quote's cool but could be done in a different font.
.・。eight / ten

location | oof okay sis loving it. goes with your whole theme.
.・。eight / ten


book covers | aesthetic photos but i'd like to see the titles on the actual cover you get me? the red is nice n they look alright together could use some updating tho.
.・。eight / ten

reading lists | kinda basic could use some emojis or symbols in the names. the names are cool themselves and i like how you've done them.
.・。eight / ten







overall! — overall your account is really cool. the theme is great and everything matches which i love!
.・。 sixty four / eighty








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book title | umm amazing??? it sounds really cool n it has a nice ring to it.
.・。nine / ten

book cover | pretty cool. the reds nice but the filters kinda off tbh. i like the roses but the fonts not great.
.・。seven / ten



story description | okay so it's like really long. i recommend having a smaller description for the book itself and then having an extended summary inside with the rest of the chapters n stuff you know? things like the inspiration and warnings should definitely be inside.
.・。seven / ten

first impression | okay i don't mean this to sound offensive but you're way better than i thought! your writing was so intriguing and beautiful. i love the descriptive language especially between the main characters towards the end. the peter pan reference was adorable and the bit about the sister singing you & i was so gorgeous. i love what you've done and think it's such a beautifully written piece despite  dragging on a bit. it's so stunning and i love it.
.・。 nine / ten

overall! — overall i absolutely love the book. the descriptions too long but the chapters are so amazing. i love your writing it's so well done and intriguing keep up the good work!
.・。thirty two / forty

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