account rate nineteen!

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@DawnFlower23

.・。.・゜✭・.・✫・゜・。.

❝ 𝘪 𝘴𝘢𝘪𝘥, 𝘪'𝘥 𝘤𝘢𝘵𝘤𝘩 𝘺𝘰𝘶 𝘪𝘧
𝘺𝘰𝘶 𝘧𝘢𝘭𝘭. 𝘢𝘯𝘥 𝘪𝘧 𝘵𝘩𝘦𝘺 𝘭𝘢𝘶𝘨𝘩
𝘵𝘩𝘦𝘯 𝘧𝘶𝘤𝘬 𝘦𝘮 𝘢𝘭𝘭. 𝘵𝘩𝘦𝘯 𝘪
𝘨𝘰𝘵 𝘺𝘰𝘶 𝘰𝘧𝘧 𝘺𝘰𝘶𝘳 𝘬𝘯𝘦𝘦𝘴,
𝘱𝘶𝘵 𝘺𝘰𝘶 𝘳𝘪𝘨𝘩𝘵 𝘣𝘢𝘤𝘬 𝘰𝘯 𝘺𝘰𝘶𝘳
𝘧𝘦𝘦𝘵, 𝘫𝘶𝘴𝘵 𝘴𝘰 𝘺𝘰𝘶 𝘤𝘰𝘶𝘭𝘥
𝘵𝘢𝘬𝘦 𝘢𝘥𝘷𝘢𝘯𝘵𝘢𝘨𝘦 𝘰𝘧 𝘮𝘦. ❞

user | ooh cute, i like the words dawn && flower although i do wish they didn't begin with capitals and simply remained lower case for the whole word. im also not a huge fan of the numbers, i find that numbers in wattpad names always look out of place.
.・。five / ten

name | cute cute, autumn is a beautiful name. i would like to see it written in a different font tho and all lower case or upper case. it's beautiful but needs fixing.
.・。six / ten

profile pic | pretty! i'm assuming it's you which is nice, it has a nice colouring and the red is nice however i wished you made your whole account match to the red because it kinda looks out of place.
.・。five / ten

banner | if im being honest it's not that great. it's a cute quote but it's not very aesthetic and the black border doesn't look great. i often find that borders that aren't a solid colour don't always look very good. it's messy and i feel like it needs cleaning.
.・。three / ten

bio | ummm way too long sis. i had to take three screenshots to put it in here which is an issue it's so long and definitely needs shortening. there are cute things in there but they need much better structure and a neater layout. there's also a few grammar mistakes and the responses from the characters you're talking about ( minho, peter, jughead etc. ) just feels kinda weird. it needs a lot of cleaning.
.・。four / ten

location | a bit long but still relatable and cute!
.・。six / ten

book covers | some of these are really great, but it's really annoying that none of them match. they need a bit of work and definitely need to match.
.・。five / ten

reading lists | cute! you've got a great taste in books hehe. but these are cute, kinda basic and could be spiced up if you changed the font or added some symbols???
.・。six / ten

overall! — overall your account needs some work, but has a lot of potential! ofc you don't have to take my advice but i'd really like to see you change things up because your account is kinda messy. it's still nice and with touch ups can be so much better. i also suggest choosing a theme because that adds to the messiness if it's all over the place and nothing matches.
.・。forty / eighty

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book title | oof very interesting. i like the title it's intriguing.
.・。seven / ten

book cover | pretty cute! i like the editing and it was done by my good friend holly so obviously it'll be amazing. this is cute but it annoys me that it doesn't match anything else in your account.
.・。six / ten

story description | okay there's already a few grammar mistakes and the description isn't great. i recommend changing it up but it's actually pretty good. i suggest putting your description before the cover credit tho.
.・。five / ten

first impression | okay so it's a pretty good plot but needs a bit of grammar work. i like the idea of vengeance for your main character. the chapter seems a bit rushed and the whole thing needs a nicer structure. i see a lot of potential and think you should keep up the good work and make some changes to your writing to really improve it.

overall! — overall i think your book as a pretty good plot that can be even better with some adjustments. a lot can be done to improve your writing and story overall. i like what you're doing but i think you should follow some of my advice ( only if you want to ofc ) to make your account and story as perfect as they can be!

— thankyou! for requesting and enjoy your rate!