PAINT ME IN TRUST
account rate six!
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@STARRYHAOS
.・。.・゜✭・.・✫・゜・。.
paint me in trust
i'll be your best friend
call me the one
this night just can't end
oh oh
user | heaps cute, love the starry part !
.・。nine / ten
name | love the quotation mark symbols! im assuming a.j stands for something ??? luv this tho uwu
.・。ten / ten
profile pic | hehe cute, no idea who it is but overall matches the theme which is vv nice.
.・。nine / ten
banner | simple n clean, matches everything
.・。ten / ten
bio | nice n neat. love the layout. the symbols r also adorable. im assuming you're a kpop fan lmao. also adore the quote at the end
.・。ten / ten
location | cute cute no idea who that is tho
.・。ten / ten
book covers | so so cute, love the floral aspect n all the matching text. the colour scheme is perfect n they all correlate really nicely with one another
.・。 ten / ten
reading lists | heaps cute. nice n minimalistic. i love the emojis however the text after it isn't my favourite
.・。eight / ten
overall! — overall your account is so so aesthetic. i love the layout n matching colour schemes. definitely a pleasing account which i think is so so stunning !
.・。seventy six / eighty
( au )
( p.jm )
book title | loooove it omg. so storytime im a ballerina myself n i adore pas de deux but we can never get enough boys to do it :(((( but anyways i love the name it's so cute n is perfect for the description n book theme!
.・。ten / ten
book cover | adorable, like i said before matches the theme n your whole account
.・。ten / ten
story description | heaps cute, nice n short. although maybe more info would be nice.
.・。 nine / ten
first chapter impression | i thought it was very well written although some of the grammar needs work. for example spacing between dialogue. the ideas were very clear and introduced the book theme straight away. the main character was relatable however for a story such as yours i would prefer if it wasn't written in the readers p.o.v and you instead made your own oc. this does not mean you have to change it or listen to my advice but with such a great storyline i feel likes it a waste to write it in that perspective when you could develop a really interesting and unique oc.
.・。eight / ten
overall! — overall i love the themes of your book, it's vv interesting. keep up the good work you've got some really amazing ideas.
.・。thirty seven / forty
— thankyou for requesting! sorry it took so long to post!
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