account rate ten!
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@JeonParkGolden

.・。.・゜✭・.・✫・゜・。.

❝ 눈을 뜬다 어둠 속 나
심장이 뛰는 소리 낯설 때
마주 본다 거울 속 너
겁먹은 눈빛 해묵은 질문 ❞

user | cute cute, not a fan of the upper case letters i find users often look better if they're all lower case or all upper case rather than both. still adorable tho
.・。seven / ten

name | so cuteeee uwu. such a cute nickname for your full name! i also like the spacing in letters
.・。nine / ten

profile pic | so aesthetic broooo i love it so much
.・。ten / ten

banner | simple n cute but kinda distracting banners often look better with a simple colouring. still nice tho!
.・。eight / ten

bio | cute lil facts ab you wishing i like. the symbols and emojis are heaps nice butttttt it needs structure. perhaps you could clean it up and separate the content making it easier to read. it's just a bit messy n cluttered.
.・。six / ten

location | nice n neat. i like the star symbol before the writing.
.・。nine / ten

book covers | aestheticcccc wowoowow. the gold theme is very nice n i like the font. the graphics are well done.
.・。eight / ten

reading lists | love the names, and the symbols go well with them. nice n neat which i love!
.・。nine / ten

overall! — overall i think your account is vv nice. i like the gold theme but think it should be combined with a white to even it out. i like your theme but there are things that need cleaning like the bio and banner. but other than that i do really like your account!
.・。sixty six / eighty

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book title | vv nice, not sure what it has to do with the actual book but im sure it'll come up later.
.・。eight / ten

book cover | nice graphics, i like the writing and the regal look is nice not my favourite tho
.・。eight / ten

story description | nice structure but the whole 'in which' thing is kinda overused. i think an extended summary inside would have been nice.
.・。seven / ten

first chapter impression | the opening was nice and the storyline was easy to read. i wasn't a huge fan of the 'y/n' perspective especially because you've also given the protagonist a name; sunhee. the setting was nice but could be further explained and the plot is still very unclear. although there was a lot of potential and some great ideas.
.・。seven / ten

overall! — overall i see a lot of potential here, with tweaking and grammar changes it could be improved but I think the important thing that needs cleaning is the descriptions of the story, it should be clearer what the main ideas are tho.
.・。thirty / forty

— thankyou so much for requesting, pleas don't take any offence to this and enjoy your rate!