account rate thirty three!

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@-salvafern

.・。.・゜✭・.・✫・゜・。.

❝ 𝘪 𝘯𝘦𝘷𝘦𝘳 𝘸𝘢𝘯𝘵𝘦𝘥 𝘵𝘰 𝘣𝘦
𝘺𝘰𝘶𝘳 𝘸𝘦𝘦𝘬𝘦𝘯𝘥 𝘭𝘰𝘷𝘦𝘳. 𝘪
𝘰𝘯𝘭𝘺 𝘸𝘢𝘯𝘵𝘦𝘥 𝘵𝘰 𝘣𝘦 𝘴𝘰𝘮𝘦
𝘬𝘪𝘯𝘥 𝘰𝘧 𝘧𝘳𝘪𝘦𝘯𝘥. 𝘣𝘢𝘣𝘺, 𝘪
𝘤𝘰𝘶𝘭𝘥 𝘯𝘦𝘷𝘦𝘳 𝘴𝘵𝘦𝘢𝘭 𝘺𝘰𝘶
𝘧𝘳𝘰𝘮 𝘢𝘯𝘰𝘵𝘩𝘦𝘳. 𝘪𝘵'𝘴 𝘴𝘶𝘤𝘩 𝘢
𝘴𝘩𝘢𝘮𝘦 𝘰𝘶𝘳 𝘧𝘳𝘪𝘦𝘯𝘥𝘴𝘩𝘪𝘱
𝘩𝘢𝘥 𝘵𝘰 𝘦𝘯𝘥 ❞

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user | oo cute cute, i love users that start with a dash so points for you! i think it's a really cool name and play on your name too!
.・。eight / ten

name | pretty ! i like the font and it's appealing to the eye !
.・。nine / ten

profile pic | simple but cute, the colouring isn't my favourite but it's still nice.
.・。seven / ten

banner | plain but nice. i like the simplicity of it and find that solid coloured banners always look best so well done! it's a little dark but it matches the theme of your account so we all good sis!
.・。nine / ten

bio | short n sweet. i like the change in font but often find the one you've used is just a little hard to read. i feel like your bio could be lengthened and you could do more with it, like adding other facts or a quote possible just to change it all up.
.・。seven / ten

location | n / a

book covers | not to bad, it's kind of off putting considering none match. i took a look at two of the covers not in this screenshot && they were pretty good and they matched which was great. if these ones matched the others i suppose they would have been better so i recommend changing these ones to match or changing them all.
.・。six / ten

reading lists | simple and cool. i feel like you could change them to be a little unique and spice them up. you could use some symbols or a different font just anything else i suppose.
.・。five / ten

overall! — overall i think your account has a lot of potential. it's a bit messy in a few spots but mostly it's really great. your bio is nice but could use lengthening and your book covers will be great once they all match!
.・。fifty one / eighty

( supernatural )

( jack khline )

book title | so so smart! based on the theme and plot of your book i think it was a pretty cool name choice. i think it suits the book and is really intriguing.
.・。eight / ten

book cover | not bad, the colouring is nice but the photo is just a little squished and as i said before it doesn't match the others which is disappointing but easily fixed!
.・。six / ten

story description | i like the quote it's funny and tells a bit about the book itself which is nice. the bit beneath it is alright but could be neater i suppose.
.・。seven / ten

first impression | so i like your writing style itself although i have to admit it was still a bit confusing and there were parts i didn't understand but that's probably because i've never seen the show before. your writing is well done but there were bits i wasn't sure what was going on but again i suppose that's because i haven't seen it.
.・。seven / ten

overall! — overall your book is pretty cool, i think the whole pregnancy thing is a smart plot with a catchy and understandable title. i like your description however the cover could use upgrading. keep up the good work!
.・。twenty eight / forty

— thank you! for requesting && enjoy your rate!