account rate thirty six!

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@utqpia

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❝ 𝘴𝘩𝘦 𝘦𝘺𝘦𝘴 𝘮𝘦 𝘭𝘪𝘬𝘦 𝘢 𝘱𝘪𝘴𝘤𝘦𝘴
𝘸𝘩𝘦𝘯 𝘪 𝘢𝘮 𝘸𝘦𝘢𝘬. 𝘪'𝘷𝘦 𝘣𝘦𝘦𝘯
𝘭𝘰𝘤𝘬𝘦𝘥 𝘪𝘯𝘴𝘪𝘥𝘦 𝘺𝘰𝘶𝘳 𝘩𝘦𝘢𝘳𝘵 -
𝘴𝘩𝘢𝘱𝘦𝘥 𝘣𝘰𝘹 𝘧𝘰𝘳 𝘸𝘦𝘦𝘬𝘴. 𝘪'𝘷𝘦
𝘣𝘦𝘦𝘯 𝘥𝘳𝘢𝘸𝘯 𝘪𝘯𝘵𝘰 𝘺𝘰𝘶𝘳
𝘮𝘢𝘨𝘯𝘦𝘵𝘢𝘳 𝘱𝘪𝘵 𝘵𝘳𝘢𝘱 𝘵𝘳𝘢𝘱. 𝘪
𝘸𝘪𝘴𝘩 𝘪 𝘤𝘰𝘶𝘭𝘥 𝘦𝘢𝘵 𝘺𝘰𝘶𝘳
𝘤𝘢𝘯𝘤𝘦𝘳 𝘸𝘩𝘦𝘯 𝘺𝘰𝘶 𝘵𝘶𝘳𝘯 𝘣𝘭𝘢𝘤𝘬 ❞

:･ﾟ✧*:･ﾟ✧

user | ooh pretty! i love misspelled users they're stunning and i adore them if you couldn't tell from my own user. i think it's a cute user n simply lovely!
.・。eight / ten

name | super cute! i love the moon symbol so so aesthetic and i love the font you've used for your name. justine is such a lovely name btw n i love how it looks!
.・。ten / ten

profile pic | yES JAKE MY LOVE. the picture is hilarious n beautiful. i love the colouring & it matches your banner so well!
.・。nine / ten

banner | a tad too dark?? it's beautiful but like i said just a little bit on the dark side ( lmao star wars. ) nevertheless it looks fine and matches everything so
.・。eight / ten

bio | ugh amazing layout! i love the quote in that font ( one of my favs ) n the paragraph is amazing. i adore the symbols they look great besides the heart which looks a little out of place to me. i love the description too, i love reading and learning about the account owner from their bio, that's what they're for! we share a few interests which is hella cool, i wanna be an actress too! and omg tom n dylan literally own my heart.
.・。ten / ten

location | simple but lovely
.・。nine / ten

covers | stunning! again kinda dark but lovely nonetheless. i like the simplicity n the minimal theme it's very nice. i like the graphics they're well done.
.・。eight / ten

reading lists | love it! the title is simple but i love the font. the symbols look cool too
.・。nine / ten

overall! — overall your account is great! i love your name and your bio is stunning! your covers and banner are a bit dark but honestly they still look great. you've got a lovely account.
.・。sixty nine / eighty

(        the maze runner      )

(        thomas          )

title | lovely! it fits the genre of writing well and i love the bold in the name itself. it matches the fandom and makes sense.
.・。eight / ten

cover | like i said before it's pretty cool despite being a little dark. i think it'd be nice to have the faceclaim's in the cover somewhere but i understand it isn't always easy and sometimes the plain looks better.
.・。seven / ten

description | the spacing is a little off. i like that there's a quote despite being short. the bit beneath it is okay. the simplicity works.
.・。eight / ten

first impression | okay well i was really hoping to have some sort of a synopsis or prologue or cast list or playlist any of that really. it was hard to get excited and ready to read it without anything to start it off. i feel as though the things mentioned above are what help make a story especially cast lists and an extended summary. there was no context as to the theme or plot or anything regarding the book it kinda just threw you right in. as for the book itself the writing was pretty good though it felt rushed and all over the place. i think for a fandom like the maze runner and especially that first chapter when the oc arrives it's so important to have a good foundation where the character and description are heavily implied it can make or break a fic like this and i hope this response helps you to make it! i think with practice and extra thought into your character your writing will definitely improve.
.・。five / ten

overall! — overall i think there's a lot you can do with your fic i hope you take my suggestions into consideration because your book has a lot of potential! with some extra work i can really see it blossoming!
.・。twenty eight / forty

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