account rate re-do!

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-lovelybarnes

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❝ 𝘪'𝘮 𝘢𝘭𝘸𝘢𝘺𝘴 𝘴𝘢𝘥 𝘢𝘯𝘥 𝘪'𝘮
𝘢𝘭𝘸𝘢𝘺𝘴 𝘭𝘰𝘯𝘦𝘭𝘺 𝘣𝘶𝘵 𝘪
𝘤𝘢𝘯'𝘵 𝘵𝘦𝘭𝘭 𝘺𝘰𝘶 𝘵𝘩𝘢𝘵 𝘪'𝘮
𝘣𝘳𝘦𝘢𝘬𝘪𝘯𝘨 𝘴𝘭𝘰𝘸𝘭𝘺 ❞

user | just stunning ! love the dash before it, it's simple and cute but really nice.
.・。eight / ten

name | love the symbols, although it'd be nice to have your name in there somewhere. it's still really nice tho
.・。seven / ten

profile pic | cute cute, tangled is such a great movie and i love that it's matching with another account that's such a great idea. i love the colouring and love what it does for your account!
.・。nine / ten

banner | simple but cute, nice colouring
.・。eight / ten

bio | love the quotes, although it would be nice to have a different font for the quotes. the symbol is cute but feel like the spacing could be nicer. and nothings changed since the last time i rated your account.
.・。seven / ten

location | cute cute
.・。 seven / ten

book covers | cute cute, love the font on them but wish they weren't so dark, if the rest of your account was it wouldn't be a problem but since the other half of your account is green and sorta pink the grey and blacks don't exactly match.
.・。seven / ten

reading lists | really simple but still nice, i recommend adding in some symbols or emojis just to spice it up???
.・。seven / ten

overall! — overall not a lot has changed since i last rated your account. the changes you have made are great and i love them all but there are still things that need work like your bio and reading lists. still a lovely account with a lot of great aspects!
.・。sixty / eighty

(    mcu    )

(     peter parker    )

book title | freakin love it, the song is so great and i've listed to it so much, it's always been a favourite of mine and when i saw your book title i got just a lil bit excited hehe. i think it's really cuteee
.・。nine / ten

book cover | stunning like i said before but still a lil dark for your overall theme. it's nice and done by holly ( a freakin legend ) so it's bound to be good hehe but yeah, i like the cartoon in the back!
.・。seven / ten

story description | cute cute, i love the idea this is something with so much potential. i like the quote obviously bc it's from the song but i would like to see it in a different font just to change it up. there is a bit of missing punctuation in the description but overall really cute
.・。seven / ten

first impression | so, it's a very interesting plot with some ideas that have so much potential. your oc is intriguing and i feel as though she will develop a great bond with peter. the grammar wasn't perfect and dialogue needs to be separated. every time a new person is speaking there needs to be a new paragraph. the punctuation could use some work and the structure could improve but the plot and ideas themselves are well thought out. definitely an improvement.
.・。six / ten

overall! — overall there are some really great ideas. the cover and title are pretty cool and the description is nice. the grammar and punctuation need work but other than that i see a great potential. keep up the good work and i'm sure with time your writing will improve!
.・。twenty nine / forty

— thankyou! for requesting, enjoy your rate!