monu , and Amritha makes a deal
Hai ..
Hello ..
Happy reading ..
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Monami and Amritha were in a coffee shop ..
Waiter came to take order ..
Mo : a coffee with extra sugar , with a spoon of butter , a pinch of salt , with extra cream and with a cube of icecream floating on the top ..and a pinch of vanilla essence..
Ammu : ek kadak chai , dood kum aur decoction zyada , aur two spoons of sugar , aur haan do ilaichi and ek chota sa tudka adrak ..
The waiter scratched his head and left inside to get their orders ..
Monu and ammu : so ..
Mo : tum bathav ..
Ammu : nahi tum pehle bathav ..
Mo : it's ok aap badi hai so you can carry on ..
Ammu : nahi twins hai , Deepak sir yehi bole the na ..
Mo : haan lekin aap mujhse 5 second badi ..
Ammu : monu tum mujhe tum hi bulalo , ajeeb lagra hai mujhe , balki yeh sab jo hora hai sab ajeeb lagra hai , mein apni family ko chod ke Mahajan family apna nahi sakthi ..
Mo : mein tumhare family ko chodne ko kabhi bulungi bhi nahi , but humara family koi buri parawar nahi hai , i hope tumhe bhi dher Sara pyaar mili hogi but ek mouka mummy papa ko bi dedo na , unke pyaar mein hissa banne ki ..
Ammu : tumne kabhi woh puzzle dekha hai ?? Woh kya kehte hai , wahi jo bacche log khelte hai , sare tukdon ko jhod kar ek picture banate hai ..
Mo : ( by holding her hand ) jigsaw puzzle didi ..
Ammu : haa wahi , uss puzzle mein na koi bhi dusri peice fit nahi hothi hai , uss puzzle mein wahi ukde fit hote hai jo unn puzzle ko belong karte hai , aur mein uss puzzle ki extra peice hunn jo kabhi fit nahi...
Mo : ( cut off her ) nahi di kabhi nahi , tum humare maa baap ka hissa ho , hai aur humesha rahegi , you are not an extra peice , waise bhi tum khud ko ayise kyu samajte ho ?? Kya hi jaante ho humare pariwaar ke baremein ..
Ammu : haan nahi jaanthi par ..
Mo : par war kuch nahi , tum jo bhi decision lo I will respect your decision but jaldi baazi mein kuch math lena , ek kaam karte hai tum pehle jano tumhare baremein mummy papa kya sochte hai , uske baad bhi tum nahi chahthi toh i promise life mein kabhi mein tumhe disturb nahi karungi ..
Ammu : mein samji nahi ..
Mo : i mean , tum Monami banke kuch din mummy papa ke saath raho aur unke pyaar dekho , fhir bhi tumhe lagta hai ki your are mis fit in our family , mein tumhe pressure nahi karungi ..
Ammu : aur tum kaha rahogi ??
Mo : simple mein ammu banke tumhari Ghar mein rahungi , waise bhi mujhe aadat hai , mein kisi ke saath bhi kuch hi minutes mein comfortable hojathi hunn , isiliye toh mere dono families aaj ek chat ke neeche hai ..
Ammu : ( with a smile ) sach mein koi bhi tumse chahkar bhi dhoor nahi reh sakte ( in mind ) par tumhara pati tumhe cheat kar raha hai ,
Aur woh uss party ko yaad karthi hai ..
Ammu : ithni acchi biwi ko chod kar party mein kisi aur ki muhh lagaraha ,mein apni choti behen ke saath kaise galat hone detha ?? Yehi mouka hai karan ka parda fash karne ka ..
Ammu : teek hai mein mummy papa ke saath rahungi kuch din lekin , tum yeh baat kisi se bhi nahi bologi , apne pati se bhi nahi , promise Karo mujhe
Mo : promise , mein kisi se bhi yeh baat nahi bolungi ..
Just then waiter comes with Their order ..
Mo : ( by passing her coffee to ammu ) ab tum Monami ho toh yeh coffee tumhari ..
And she takes ammu's tea and drink ..
Ammu : ( by taking a sip ) ithna bhi werid nahi hai jithna maine socha tha ..
Monu : well feeling are mutual ..
Monu and ammu : ( unison ) ek baat puchni hai ( seeing each other ) haan pucho ( again unison ) pehle tum pucho ..
They sees each and smile a little ..
Mo : tumne mujhe ithni asani se maaf kyu kiya ??
Ammu : pata nahi , tum se ek alag sa lagav hogayi thi , hum jab bhi jagada karte hai , mujhe pata nahi accha lagta tha , Riya meri choti behen hai par kabhi ayise haq ladti nahi hunn , shayad uskeliye over protective hunn pat , tumse ayise ladthi hunn jaise meri choti behen ho , aur jab mujhe pata chala ki tum sach mein choti behen ho toh choti samaj kar maaf kardiya ..
Mo : thank you..
Ammu : par tum toh ayisi ladki nahi ho , matlab meri photos dekh kar ayisa badak gayi kyu ki , tum toh ayise nahi ho ..
Mo : sorry for that , ( in mind ) ab woh sab nahi batha sakthi. Sorry di ..
And they two pass a smile ..
( So point has to be noted , mujhe party mein misunderstanding creat karne ka yehi reason hai ,taki apne liye na sahi apni behen keliye Amritha Sherghil mansion ajaye )
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Amritha, Monami ki tarah ready hokar Sherghil mansion agayi hai , jo iss wakth sabhi log yehi par rehte hai ..
Sabhi log sirf monu ka hi inthazaar kar rahe hai , amritha ko dekh kar juhi ko bhi monu hi lagthi hai ..
Juhi : ( by checking amritha ) monu tu teek hai , kayi chot vot toh nahi lagi na ??
Amritha: nahi maa mein teek hun. ..
Juhi : aur Amritha, woh teek hai na ??
Khud ke baremein sunke ammu ki aankhey bhar aayi , lekin woh khud ko rokhi ..
Deepak : kya jarurat hai tum dono ko fight karne ki ?? Papa hai na , mujhe bol dete ki mein uss kapadia ka laash bhi kayi dikhayi nahi detha. .
Juhi : aap chup rahiye , humare betiya jo bhi kiya bahut sahi kiya , woh khud ki problems khud hand karna jaante hai ..
Ammu ko yeh apna pann aur humare betiya ki words sunke ek pal keliye bhi ayisa nahi laga ki yeh Ghar uske liye nayi hai ..
Woh aakar karan ke bagal mein bhait gayi ..
Karan : ( in her ear ) sab teek hai na rani sahiba ?? Amritha se baat huyi ..
Ammu : ( by gulping in mind ) yeh ithna pass kyu aara hai ..
Ammu : ( seeing here and there ) haan hogayi hai baat ..
Karan ek dum se dhoor hojatha hai aur dusri sofa mein jaake bhait jatha hai ..
Thodi der sab idhar udhar ke baatein karte hai , fhir amritha ko Monami samaj kar juhi bahut laad pyaar karthi hai un dono ki bach pann ki ( jab woh dono 6 months babies the) kaise ek dusre se khud ki bhasha mein baat karte the haste , rote the , sab kuch bathane lagthi hai aur juhi ki aankhon mein Khushi chupayi nahi chup raho thi ..
Deepak : bus ek baar tum dono mein common thi beta , agar ammu rothi toh tum bhi rothi thi , aur tum rithi toh ammu bhi rona shuru kardethi , isiliye do chaar baar astha bhabhi ko bhi thoda doubt hone laga isiliye maan Bhai saab India wapas agaya hai ..
Last line bolte huye Deepak ki aankh bhi bhar agaye aur unhe ayise dekh kar ammu ki aankh mein bhi paani aane lagi ..
Sooraj : ( Deepak ko console karte huye ) dekh yaar Deepak , agar tum ayise kamzhor pad gaye toh bacchon ko koun sambhql lega ?? Dekhna amritha bitiya bhi humare pass ayegi woh bhi bahut jald .
Ithna Sara pyaar ko dekh kar ammu ko bhi acche lagne lagi ..
Sab dinner keliye bhait jate hai , karan amritha ke bagal mein nahi bhait tha hai , woh dusri jagah bhait jatha hai ..
Suhani : karan tum waha kyu bhaite ho ?? Don't tell me ki tum dono abhi bhi lad rahe ho ..arey Tum dono toh din mein dus baat ladte ho fhir ek dusre ko Bina manaye hi ek dusre se Maan jate ho , fhir aaj kya hua ??
Karan : nahi maa hum lad nahi rahe the , it's like Monami ko thoda space chahiye ,isiliye .
Everyone was like , " really "
Karan : ab koi mujhe khana dega , ek toh mein subha se kaam kar raha hunn ab bhuk bhi ithna hai ki , plates and spoons bhi kha javunga ..
Su : teek hai teek hai ,
And she serves food to everyone including her and they ate and left to their respective room ..
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Ammu : ( to himself) ek ghar mein rehne Tak teek hai lekin ek kamrein mein kaise ?? It's ok ammu , karan ko expose karna hai toh Jana hi padega ..
She reluctantly wents into the room but she sees karan was taking a pillow and a blanket ..
Ammu : aap , i mean tum ..
Karan : it's ok aap mere saamney monu banne ki acting karne ki jarurat nahi hai , mein tabhi samaj Gaya tha jab aap mere saath bhaite the ..
Ammu : what ?? Par ka..kaise ..
Karan : meri Monami mujhse nazrein milake baat karthi hai nazrein churake nahi. .
Ammu gulps and sees karan ..
Karan : aapke baremein toh pata nahi lekin mein kisi aur ladki ke saath room share nahi kartha so ..
Showing the bed ..
Karan : please make yourself comfortable..
Woh jate jate Rukh Gaya aur wapas aakar ek drawers se ek pendrive nikaalke amritha ko Diya aur bola ..
Karan : iss pendrive mein faizi ki shadhi ka raw footage hai , edit nahi kiya hai abhi tak , aur puri party mein camera work chal rahi thi so shayad isse aapki misunderstanding dhoor hojayegi ,
Woh door ke paas Gaya aur bola ..
Karan : mein kabhi pyaar mein aur saath janmom mein kabhi belive nahi , lekin agar sach mein saath janam hote ?? Toh har Janam mein sirf Monami se pyaar karunga , kisi aur keliye koi place nahi hogi mere life mein , i can assure you that ..
He about to go outside but amrutha stops him
Amritha :jiju rukhiye ,,
She comes near him and gives back the pendrive to him ..
Amritha: jab aapne bina bathaye samaj gaye ki mein Monami nahi hunn , toh apne aapko prove karne ki jarurat nahi hai ..
Karan nods ..
Amritha : aap apne room mein hi rahiye , mein mummy papa ke pass chali javungi ..
Aur woh Deepak aur juhi ke pass chali gayi , aur sari raat juhi usko laad pyaar karthi rahi ..
Bhale hi brar pariwaar usko bahut pyaar karte hai lekin ek maa ke pyaar ke saamney sab kuch pheeka pad jata hai ..
Aur yaha yeh kahani jahi rahi thi dusri taraf brar house mein ..
Sabhi log dinning table par bhaite huye the aur monu ko hi dekh rahe hai , jo apni hi andaaz mein kha rahi thi ..
Monu sense kiya ki sab ussi ko dekh rahe hai ..
Mo : ( smiling sheepily) kya hua , ayise kyu dekh rahe ho ..
Riya : di aapko kabse bindi acchi lagne lagi , aap meri di hi hona ??
Immediately monu choked he food and started caughing..
Mo : woh bahut bhook lagi toh dyaan nahi diya , chalo ek baar keliye kha hi lethi hunn ..
Tabhi karan monu ko call kartha ..
Mo : ( seeing the number ) shayad pata chal gaya hoga ..
Nimrit : kya pata chal gaya aur kisko ??
Monu cuts the call and says to nimrit ..
Mo : kuch nahi chachi bus ayise ..
Again her phone rings and this time also she cuts the call ..
Nimrit : dekh rahe ho bhauji , iss ladki lakshan kuch teek nahi lagra hai , pata nahi kiska phone hai yeh ..
Mo : yeh Chachi ithna chik Chik kyu karti hai ..
Monu dekthi hai Chachi ki duppata coincidentally chair ke pass thi , woh spoon ko neeche gira ke , utane ke banane nimrit ki duppata ko chair mein fasa dethi hai , fhir nimrit jab utt thi toh tab daddam se neeche gir jathi hai , sabhi log has padte hai aur chachu nimrit ko utakar kamrein mein le jata hai ..
Monu : badi aayi meri di ko bolne wali ..
Woh room mein aakar karan ko call karthi hai ..
Karan : ( without lifting the call ) jab maine call Kiya tab toh utayi nahi , ab mein bhi baat nahi karunga ,
Nd he cuts the call ..
Mo : mere call kaat liya ?? Ab dekho mein bhi phone utavungi nahi ..
Do minute baad fhir dono ek dusre ko call karte hai iss baar busy aati hai , fhir dono rukte hai , fhirse karan call kartha hai iss baar monu call lift karthi hai ..
Karan : missing you rani sahiba ..
Mo : na hai na hello , seedha miss you ??
Karan : pehle answer do , do you missing me ??
Mo : nahi ..
Karan : nahi ????
Aur monu jor jor se hasne lagthi aur same dono apne hi duniya mein mast ghum hojate hai .
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Next day
Veer amritha se milne uska Ghar aata hai aur monu office keliye ready hothi hai ..woh window se dekthi hai ki veer bahar hai .
Mo : yeh mujhe pehchaan liya toh ?? Nahi nahi mein bhi monu hunn , acting mein mujhe Oscar mil sakthi hai ..
Here veer ander bahar khel Raha tha , i mean unhe samaj nahi aata ki ander jaye ya bahar wait kare , finally himmat jutake door bell press karke bhaag jatha hai ,monu yeh dekh kar jhor jhor se hasti hai ..
Aur woh bhi bahar aathi hai , veer ko ignore karke chali jathi hai ..
Veer : amritha stop ..
Mo : aap yaha kyu aaye veer sir , mein toh aap se baat bhi nahi kar rahi hunn na ..
Veer : ( by gulping ) lagta hai abhi Tak gussa kum nahi huva hai par , mein bhi office jaraha hunn , mein tumhe drop kardunga ,
Mo : nahi , mein auto rikshaw se javungi ..
Veer : plz amritha tumse kuch important baat karni hai plz , car mein bhaito ..
Mo : ( in mind ) chalo monu dekhte hai yeh kya baat karne wala hai ..
She sat in passenger seat and veer sat in driving seat and starts the car ..
Mo : bolo kya bolna hai ??
Veer : amritha , isse pehle mein apni Dil ki baat kehdu ..
Mo : dil ki baat ??
Veer : see mujhe beech mein math rokho plz ..
Mo : ( in mind ) arey gadhe , tum wrong number ko dial kiya hai , cross connection hogaya hai ..
Veer : amritha , jab mein college mein tha , i fallen for a girl , but hum dono ke beech compatibility nahi hai , so we broke up ..
Mo : ( in mind ) accha yeh baat toh mujhe bhi nahi pata ..
Veer : fhir i loved monu I mean mein Monami se pyaar kartha tha , ab nahi , tum samaj Rahi hona pyaar karta tha past tense, lekin i know monu kabhi mujhse pyaar nahi Karthi thi , maybe she is not my soulmate, woh kisi aur keliye bani huyi thi.
Ab monu guilt trip par Jane lagi ..
Veer : and woh humesha meri best friend rahegi , kyuki usse bhale hi pyaar ka rishta nahi hai lekin woh mere liye special hai ..
Monu ki aankey bhar aaye ..
Veer : bhale hi mein sabke saamney usse chod ke tumhe support Kiya hai , lekin she will remain my bestfriend forever , sari duniya kuch bhi bole I don't care but I want you to understand, tum hum dono ke baremein kya sochti ho woh mere liye important hai bcoz i realized that I am in love ..
Mo : bus veer , plz stop it ..
Veer pushes the break and stops the car ..
Mo : i am sorry ..
Veer : amritha , sorry kyu bol Rahi ho ,
Mo : i am really sorry , woh mein ..
Veer : it's ok tum mujhse pyaar nahi Karthi I understand, but it's okk ..
Mo : nahi ayisa nahi hai ..
Veer : matlab pyaar karthi ho ..
Mo : nahi ,, mujhe bolne doge ya nahi ..
Veer : arey bolo na amritha
Mo : mein amritha nahi hunn , mein Monami hunn ..
Veer : what ??
Monu : haan aur hum dono ke beech ek deal huyi hai so woh Sherghil mansion mein hai aur mein yaha ..
Sab kuch process hone mein veer ko 30 seconds lagi , aur jo woh kal se Jo bhi practice Kiya woh sab chullu bhar ki paani mein doob gaye , aur realise Kiya ki woh kis ke saamney kya kya bol diya hai ..
Veer : ( angryly) tum pehle nahi batha sakthi ??
Monu ek dum se dar gayi thi ..
Veer composed himself and thoda dheere se bola ..
Veer : matlab abhi maine jo kuch bhi bhola woh sab mujhe fhirse bolna padega , ithni himmat jutake jo kuch bhi bola tha sab waste hogaya ??
Mo : i am really sorry mujhe pehle hi bathana chahiye tha lekin ..
Veer : lekin kya ..
Mo : mujhe ek aur baat bathani hai ..
Veer : ab kya reh gaya hai ??
Mo : mein bahut pehle se jaanthi hunn , amrutha meri twin sister hai ..
Veer : ( after few seconds ) what ??
Mo : haan mein aur karan dono hi jaante hai ki amritha meri sagi behen hai ..
After 30 seconds veer kar sar steering par padi aur woh behosh hogaya ..
Mo : isse kya hogaya ??
She takes a water bottle and split some water on his face ..
Mo : veer utto, veer .
She taps on his cheeks ..
And finally he opens his eyes ..
Mo : dekho tumhe maane mein thoda time lagega but abhi uthna time nahi hai mere pass so sach ko jaldi maan jao .
Veer : kya hora hai , aur yeh sab mere saath hi kyu hora hai ?? Tum in sab mein mujhe kyu fasaya ??
Mo : dekho plz sadmein mat chale jao , pehle kisi resturant ya coffee shop pe chalo , aur thoda juice ya coffee peelo , dimaag shaant hojayega ,, fhir sab samjadungi tumhe ..
Veer takes a deep breath and starts the car ..
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So guys it's already 3500 words , isse zyada likhungi toh padne mein aap bore hojayengey , aur likhne mein mei bhi bore hojavungi ..
Point number 1 : maine pehle hi hint Diya ki karan ko ek baar shak hotha hai Deepak ki behaviour dekh kar ..
Point number 2 : maine pehle hi bathayi thi , ek twist aane wali hai story mein ready rehna ..
And this is that twist ..
Point number 3 : story mein aage kya hone wala hai , woh sirf aur sirf ek writer hi jaante hai koi aur nahi ..
And humesha ki tarah cliff hanger mein story ko chod Rahi hunn and aage ki story mein jo bhi doubts hai next chapter mein padlena ..
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