hello hello!!!! I'm thinking about rewriting the earlier chapters...I think I've grown a lot when it comes to writing, also chapter 1 specifically sucks butt...I think that a few scenes feel a little ooc... (out of character) especially rob in that lunchroom scene in chapter 5. Also I had a lot of fun writing him! At first I didn't like writing rob much, but recently I had a lot of fun writing him in chapter 7!