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Honest opinion on my own fanfics (repost from Satan's Notebook)

HEYO MY SEXY POTATOES

I'm here to give my honest opinions on ALL of my fanfics, if you haven't read some them I'm just warning - SPOILERS.

P.S I'll write this in order of when the fics were completed.

anyway let's go.

1. Eternal Love (IwaOi One-Shot)

My very first published story. When I was writing it I was just trying out how everything here works. Before that I had read a super short oneshot so I wrote only around 600 words I think.

It's.. Not that bad. Honestly for my first work it is not that bad, it has a weird ending, sure, but people seem to like it, so why not?

I'll give it a 7/10

2. Please Don't Go (IwaOi One-Shot)

Yeah so this is much worse. It was the first time I tried writing something with a nice and good ending and I sucked at it.

It's too fastpaced! And honestly I feel like I could have done a better job, and why the hell didn't Oikawa shower???!!!!

A 4/10

3. Stalker (BokuAka One-Shot)

KILL IT WITH FIRE

the only reason I'm not unpublishing it because readers seem to enjoy it. But in all honesty I hate it, I hate it so much I haven't read the comments on it in months.

It's bad!!! It was supposed to be a fanfic but I couldn't think of a long plot so here I was, somehow turning Akaashi into a coldblooded killer...

-8272822726626272/10 get it out of here

4. Blank (IwaOi)

It was my second fanfic that I published, and till this day it is one of my favs. It really helped me figure out the style of my fanfics and the lenght of them.

I think it's good, even though it's plot is a bit cliche, it's still nice. Readers seem to like it too, which makes me really happy. I think I could have done a better job at the dialogue.

7/10

5. Our Crazy Love Story (AsaNoya)

No. Just no.

It's my very first attempt at comedy and also my first fanfic in first person - it's shit. I suggest you stay away from it.

It's so fastpaced and full of unnecessary dialogue, they moved in together so quickly???????? Why?????, I have a whole lot of questions concerning it.

1/10 would not read again

6. The Library (TsukkiYama)

Something went wrong along the way. It wasn't supposed to end like that.

The beginning was quite nice,I guess, but the whole thing with Akiteru and Tsukki leaving home at such a young age to live with Yama in a middle of nowhere????what the fuck??

I don't think it's good, but not terrible either,I'll give it a 3/10

7. The Cafe of Dreams (IwaOi, DaiSuga, BokuAka, KuroKen)

As much as I don't like this fanfic, I'm proud of it. This fanfic helped me evolve as a writer, through out the whole fanfic you can see how much my writing style changed.

This fanfic is the one who brought me many of my loyal readers, so I'm thankful for it. It's the first full lenght fanfic I ever published and by the time it was finished it had reached 93k reads.

I'll still give it a 3/10 could have done better

8. Our Last Ride (DaiSuga)

Okay now this is another deal.

I like it, I like it a lot. I didn't have a proper plot for it and some chapters are just plain boring (plus that poor written smut), but on the whole it's a pretty decent fanfic.

The idea to make the prologue a shorter version of epilogue was born only when I started writing the actual epilogue, I think it was a pretty good move.

I'll give it a 6/10

9. Rain (IwaOi)

This one's weird and was my breaking point.

This fanfic was a result of my terrible emotional state and the fact that I actually considered suicide at that point. It's also a fanfic which helped me realize how to pick my titles and realize how easy it is to fool the readers (referring to the Epilogue where many thought Iwaizumi was marrying Oikawa SYKE)

It could be better. Longer chapters. 5/10.

10. Remind Me To Never (KuroKen One-Shot)

The result of the break-up.

The whole oneshot is based on my love story, I told this many times. I'm Kenma, she was my Kuroo, but I guess we weren't meant to be together.

Again, I broke the "remind me to never look for love again" as a year later I was in a relationship again, however just like the first time it didn't last that long. Fortunately, this time it was a mutual understanding.

Anyway, it's my favorite oneshot out of the ones I have written, it expresses the trouble of dating in the 21st century. I'll give it a 7.5/10.

11. Christmas Miracle (IwaOi Oneshot)

It's decent???? I guess????

It's not half bad, okay? I'm unsatisfied with the way I ended it. I think I could have ended it better, but overall it's good. Just good.

It was a gift for the readers for something, I don't remember. Maybe just a Christmas gift. But lmao k sure.

5/10 needs for Christmas

12. Finding You (BokuAka)

It wasn't supposed to end that way, it was supposed to end in a tragic and angsty way.

Akaashi wasn't supposed to be a mangaka, but a simply depressed person who couldn't bear it anymore and was supposed to die but somehow I changed it.

I don't know why, I don't like it 0.8/10

13. Sinner (TsukkiYama)

Yes. I approve of this one.

I turned out the way I sort of wanted it to, I guess I could have worked more on character development, but it's not bad! It was hard to write and turned to be a challenge.

What I like the most is the ending. I always create the ending first and only then think of a plot, and Sinner is a perfect example of it.

It's a good fanfic, I recommend it to those who haven't read it. A 8/10

14. Chimerical (KuroKen) (first book in -cal series)

I. Love. It.

It's in my top 5, most definitely. I somehow managed to keep the tension and mystery through out the whole fanfic, most readers didn't even suspect what was truly going on with Kuroo. The fanfic is tied with Sinner and should be read first.

It's a good fanfic which I like very much so 8.5/10 for it.

15. Sax (BokuAka)

Didn't turn out the way I wanted it to. I'm sorry but it didn't and I'm not particularly fond of it.

Everything happens so quickly???? Though the comedic points are quite great I thinks.

Still. There's not much to say about it 4/10

15. The Hall Of Broken Hearts (multiship)

Till this day I cannot figure out why I wrote this shitty ass sequel. Like whyYYY?????

The plot is terrible, I forgot half of their actual stories as I stayed away from TCOD at that time, I don't know why I even bothered to write it

It's bad, it's boring and shall be put in the traaaaaash 2/10

16. Fallen Angel (IwaOi)

Boy oh boy, It's in my top 5 list.

I personally really like this fanfic, I tried worked really hard on Iwaizumi's development as a character. I think I could have added a bit more romance into it.

The fanfic was supposed to contain smut, but I decided to not write it, and the ending was planned first. I planned the ending before even writing the prologue so yeah.

8.5/10

17. Paradise (IwaOi) (Fallen Angel Sequel)

Hmmmmm naaaaaah, I'm not the biggest fan of it.

It didn't turn out the way I wanted it to, it was supposed to be much longer, but I couldn't think of a proper plot. It ended up being rushed and weird.

There isn't much to say about it so 3/10

18. Thunderstorm (BokuAka)

I'm not the biggest fan of it, but I don't hate it. It's weird, it is, but it's something new.

It was a completely different approach, I wanted to try new things to see if maybe readers like something more or less, and yeah - it turned out that a fanfic like Thunderstorm isn't that much liked.

Now I know that I shouldn't write fics like that, and I honestly don't wanna. I can't write properly in first person.

4/10 needed more dialogue

19. Enigmatical (DaiSuga) (second book in -cal series)

?????¿¿¿¿¿it's so weird??????

-3/10

20. Prince (LevYaku)

In my top 5 definitely, I loved writing it and you guys seemed to enjoy it too, which made me really happy. I always wanted to write something like that but I was afraid of the cliche "Prince falls in love with a servant or smth and runs away" stuff, so instead I made it two princes, a bunch of gay kings and a salty boiiiii

Either way, I love it a lot 9/10

21. Atlantis (multiship)

???????what was that ending?????

The fanfic was absolutely fine until the ending, I don't know why I made it so rushed. I think I could have written more about DaiSuga as it mainly focused on IwaOi which is my favorite ship if you haven't guessed yet.

And yeah, it was still pretty good, it gained a lot of reads so 7/10. It's also in my top 5.

22. King (BokuAka) (Prince's spin-off)

Die. It's shit. I hate it. Too fastpaced. No proper plot. A fourth grader could have written better.

0/10

23. Creamy Memey (MatsuHana OneShot)

Sure, I'll allow it. I wrote it as a gift and also because I hadn't written a oneshot in a while, it turned out pretty great. I didn't have a big goal set for it, I just wanted to show that Mattsun loves Makki and Makki is an oblivious shit who doesn't understand.

It worked. 8/10 the cover is great.

24. Begin (KuroKen)

Yes! YES YES YES YES!

I love it okay???? It's my first texting fic and it's turning out great, you guys seemed to enjoy it too. Since it's still ongoing I can't say much apart from that it's not gonna be super long and my goal for it is 25k reads.

8.5/10 needs more reaction pictures.

25. Honey, I Think I'm Gay (IwaOi) (Hatari's no.1 pick)

YAS BITCH I LOVE IT SO MUCH I WANT TO PRINT IT AND SEND IT TO MY READERS. but seriously this fanfic showed my other side. My readers were used to angst and so on, but this time I decided on a strictly comedy-romance fic and IT TURNED OUT GREAT I LOVE IT

I think I could add more memes and more smutty scenes just for the heck of it, also I'm not gonna do a sequel for it because I would ruin it.
My goal for it originally was 50k reads and now look at it.

10/10 would read again

26. Satan's Notebook (rant book)

Ha ha. It's weird and personal.

Bees/10 🐝🐝🐝🐝🐝🐝

27. To Annoy The Grim Reaper (KuroKen)

Only the prologue is out but I have a general idea of what I wanna write there and so far it's good. I'll give it a 4/7 so far.

Edit: it's on hold right now till I figure out what to write next, if I don't this fanfic will die.

28. Lip Bite [IwaOi] SOON.

Mmmmmmmmmm angst town.

?/10

29. Satan's Scribbles

What the actual fuck is this.

🐍/10

30. Under the mistletoe (Kagehina)

It wasnt bad, it wasn't that great either. It was just something to quickly read and then forget the next day.

6/10

31. Crooked Man (BokuAka)

Basically Stalker 2.0 but it's better. It's based on one of my favorite games ever and I think I did a pretty good job! Honestly it's a little fastpaced but whatever

7/10

32. UNKNOWN YET

b o I

10/10

So yeah that's my opinion. My top five (if you're wondering) is:

1. Honey, I Think I'm Gay
2. Prince
3. Fallen Angel
4. Chimerical
5. Atlantis

SEE YA NEXT TIME

-hatari

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