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First of all, thank you judgesย novahsnow , enslavedreader and kissesnmartinis for spending your precious time on judging. We really are grateful to youโฅ๏ธ๐.
Coming to the results, here you go!
Judge: kissesnmartinis
Name: Perfectly Unexpected
Author: MiniMoxx
Title- 4.5/5
There are plethora of books carrying similar titles, like, unexpected year, unexpected meeting, etc ; however I feel the title is appropriate and perfectly matches the storyline.
Cover- 4.75/5
I loved the cover. I have seen similar covers before; this takes a toll over originality but the cover suits the book.
Blurb- 9.75/10
The blurb is good. The author might wanna try some structural changes in future.
Characters- 9.75/10
Characters are well plotted and well descripted.
Flow- 10/10
The flow is fine. No error there.
Plot- 9.5/10
The plot is well written, I've seen similar beginning and storyline before but it is well presented.
Grammar- 9.5/10
No grammar issues.
Overall enjoyment- 10/10
Definitely an enjoyable book!
Total: 67.75/70
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Book 2: Shattered
Author: Calista_Evangeline
Title- 3.75/5
Title is intriguing. But such titles like broken, damaged, killed etc are being overused lately.
Cover- 4/5
The cover is beautiful, it is attracting attention. I'd expect a little bit of more creativity. :)
Blurb- 8.5/5
Blurb is really good. It can be made better by enhancing the vocabulary and maybe tuning in at least one question since the cover and title both radiate the hint of mystery.
Characters- 9/10
Characters are well plotted and further in the story the description gets better.
Flow- 9/10
Flow is a little bit fast. Only a tiny bit; or else no other flaw.
Plot- 9/10
Mainstream concept. But really well written plot. There's room for vocabulary improvement.
Grammar- 9/10
No major grammar issues. Some punctuation and as previously stated vocabulary improvement can help.
Overall enjoyment- 9/10
Definitely enjoyed reading. It's a really good book.
Total โ 61.25/70
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Book 3: Stranger Connection
Author: wanderedwriter
Title-4.5/5
I think the title is appropriate but then again, there are several such titles.
Cover- 4.75/5
Loved the cover. There's a good cinematic hint to it.
Blurb- 9.75/10
The structure is good. The hint of two different scenarios has made it intriguing.
Characters- 9/10
Characters are interesting and hold distinct personalities.
Flow- 10/10
No holes in flow.
Plot- 9/10
Plot is interesting. Although it lacks uniqueness.
Grammar- 9/10
Some tiny grammatical errors but I LOVED the vocabulary.
Overall enjoyment- 9/10
Loved the storyline!
Total- 65/70
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Book 4: Keep Bleeding Love
Author: EastCoastPinay
Title-4.75/5
I loved the title. It is unique and romantic.
Cover- 4.5/5
The cover is bright and lovely, I won't fault it but I'd just suggest author to bring a little bit more creativity.
Blurb- 9/10
There is no problem with blurb but the repetition of same question "can love endure..." has made a negative effect.
Characters- 9/10
The character description is slow. It's good since it doesn't detangle everything at once.The characters are well plotted.
Flow- 10/10
Couldn't fault the flow.
Plot- 9/10
No grammar issues or structural problem. Minute punctuation mistakes at some places. Extremely interesting plot!
Grammar- 9.5/10
No serious errors. Just punctuations should be revisited.
Overall enjoyment- 9/10
Very enjoyable book; the small suggested changes can make it better.
Total- 63.75/70
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Book 5: To make him smile
Author: Always_Manyata
Title-4.75/5
The title is romantic and emotional. Not extremely unique but really good.
Cover- 3.75/5
The cover is actually very good but it would be a great help if the font of author's name on it, be changed.
Blurb- 7.75/10
There are some unavoidable grammatical errors. Also I'd suggest the author to not make an "author's note" in blurb.
Characters- 8/10
Characters are well plotted but they need more description.
Flow- 8.5/10
The flow is a tiny bit slow but it eventually gets better.
Plot- 8/10
Plot is interesting but needs editing. Specifically, a lot of editing in dialogue writing.
Grammar- 7/10
Some serious grammatical errors. Author might wanna use commas more , inside the dialogues as well as in plot. The verb forms of words are not matching tenses in many sentences.
Overall enjoyment- 8/10
The book is enjoyable. No complains with the plot's concept , just editing and resolving grammar issues will make the book better.
Total- 55.75/70
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Judge: novahsnow
Name:Black dress weddingย
By: oliviarose436
Title - 4/5
The title was definitely unique and something very intriguing.
Cover - 3/5
The cover was nice, but the picture and the font could be improvised so as to make it seem more engaging for drawing readers in.
Blurb - 8/10
The blurb was intriguing and it does help draw a reader in, although it could be improvised a little.
Character - 9/10
The characters were described really nicely and they did invoke feelings, I loved the development as they proceeded through the chapters.
Flow - 8/10
The flow does go on smoothly, there could be a break taking in, and adding a little bit more description or dialogue to a particular scene in between could help.
Plot - 9/10
The plot was unique, something definitely well thought of. The plot holes in between kept me going and I couldn't stop reading.
Grammar - 9/10
The grammar was really up to the mark, there were a few spelling mistakes here and there but that could be edited while editing the book.
Overall Enjoyment - 10/10
It was a very engaging read, and I wanted to keep reading more. It's a recommendable read and something others should devote their time to reading as well.
Total - 60
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Name:Rose and Venom
By: Siya_Stark3000
Title - 4/5
The title relates to the story and sounds unique as well as something that people would love to check out after seeing.
Cover - 5/5
There was a great job done on the cover, it related to the story. The picture and the font used were really good and overall it does draw readers in.
Blurb - 8/10
The blurb does make one curious and intrigued to read more, the fonts used could be changed and instead styled in a different manner with symbols or anything else.
Characters - 6/10
The characters in the story were described to be very complex and not many people could actually relate to, but they could be cheered on. The reactions of the characters could be more elaborated so as to show a particular scene or setting to be a bit more realistic.
Flow - 7/10
The story moves at a normal pace, although sometimes it seems to be moving a bit faster. It could also be due to the lack of character reactions.
Plot - 8/10
The plot was something unique and something people would like to read. It did engage me to read on.
Grammar - 6/10
The grammar needs loads of improvements, there are many spelling mistakes that have to be corrected. Overall, editing can help a great deal in correcting all the mistakes.
Overall Enjoyment - 6/10
It was definitely a gripping read and something that I enjoy as well, but the font is a bit hard to get used to and it was a bit off in terms of reading. It was really distracting and something that many people wont like to read in.
Total - 50
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Name: Passion in Venus
By:ย la-femme-de-fer
Title - 3/5
The title does not relate to the story, then again maybe it could be introduced later in the story how it relates.
Cover - 2/5
The cover does not seem appealing and would not draw a reader in, changing to a better picture and a font could be something that should be done first to make it look more appealing and relatable to the story.
Blurb - 6/10
The one thing that a blurb of a story is supposed to do is to draw more readers in, so more people can read the story and it could grip a reader to actually read the story, the blurb needs more improvement. It could be made more intriguing and gripping.
Characters - 7/10
The characters did feel real but their reactions could be emphasized a bit more so they don't seem confusing and actually keep the plot going.
Flow - 6/10
The flow of the story was smooth at some parts, but the other parts need a little more description or explanation so as not to be so confusing. It diverts the mind of the readers and actually confuses them enabling them to forget what they started reading with.
Plot - 8/10
The plot is something unique and a bit refreshing to read in a way, it's worth giving a read.
Grammar - 5/10
There were a lot of grammatical mistakes, missing punctuations was something crucial and the spelling mistakes need to be corrected. The grammar that is not written nicely would put readers off from reading.
Overall Enjoyment - 5/10
The starting for me is really important, and the way it was described and narrated. It was confusing, it couldn't get the point across and it was something that didn't want me reading more.
Total - 42
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Name: Metanoia
By: urjapan
Title - 3/5
It was something unique and does relate to the story.
Cover - 3/5
The cover was nice and unique, but not relatable to the story.
Blurb - 4/10
The blurb needs a lot of improvement, it isn't intriguing and there are lots of grammatical mistakes which could turn the reader away at first glance.
Characters - 6/10
The characters did feel real, it was easy to imagine them but the way they were described, they did not invoke any feelings.
Flow - 6/10
As the plot is moving slowly, there could be more descriptions. Preferably, characters could be described more and their surroundings which will help readers visualize.
Plot - 7/10
There is something similar to a plot like this that I have read before. There are lots of things that make it more intriguing to read, and also it does make one curious about what will happen next.
Grammar - 4/10
There were lots of grammatical errors, specifically: the spellings, punctuations weren't present in some sentences and dialogues at all, and the use of ellipses is done incorrectly. Ellipses can be defined as a pause someone takes and it includes three dots instead of two or more that were present in the story. Editing is crucial for the story to gain more reads.
Overall Enjoyment - 5/10
Sometimes while reading a book, the grammatical errors can be ignored when the plot is gripping and the story is going well. But the grammar needs a lot of improvement, it's something that set me off on reading more.
Total - 38
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Name:Sweet Hearts Forever
By:ย AmaPriscilla7
Title - 3/5
The title was relatable to the story and made sense after reading a few chapters of the story, the word sweetheart could be written as one.
Cover - 2/5
The picture does look good, though the font could be placed a bit more accurately and also could be used accordingly to the picture.
Blurb - 6/10
The blurb had lots of capitalized words and some grammatical errors that need attention, it could be made more intriguing.
Character - 6/10
There wasn't time given to characters to be introduced well, it was something sudden and no development was noticeable.
Flow - 6/10
The flow was too fast yet at some parts, it would suddenly go back to being normal. It was weird to understand, as the events were too fast at one moment and weirdly slow at the other.
Plot - 6/10
The plot is something that has been common but this was a bit intriguing, there were more factors added to make it unique and gripping making the readers want to read more, to not get reminded that they have read something like that before.
Grammar - 4/10
The spellings are wrong in many places and the text needs to be read again, as there are misplaced punctuations as well, the dialogues don't have any quotations at all which could be off-putting.
Overall Enjoyment - 4/10
The misplaced quotations made it hard to distinguish between dialogues and descriptions and it was pretty hard to read through, and it ruined the enjoyment of the whole first chapters.
Total - 37
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Judge: enslavedreader
Name: A Little Harmony
By:ย SkullantacySmith
Title:5
Cover: 4
Blurb : 8
Characters: 10
Flow: 10
Plot: 6
Grammar: 8
Enjoyment 10 total : 61
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Name:Tempting The Fates
By: brennaiswriting
Title : 5
Cover : 3
Blurb : 7
Characters : 6
Flow : 7
Plot : 7
Grammar : 6
Enjoyment: 9 Total : 50
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Prejudice Pyaar
By:ย inlovewsleep
Title : 4
Cover : 4
Blurb : 8
Characters : 6
Flow: 5
Plot: 5
Grammar : 9
Enjoyment: 8 Total : 49
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Name: Until Then Japan
By: happysnowfeet
Title : 4
Cover : 2
Blurb : 9
Characters : 7
Flow: 6
Plot: 8
Grammar : 4
Enjoyment: 5 Total : 45
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Name: Love and Lies
By: -nikethsivani-
Title : 3
Cover : 5
Blurb : 9
Characters : 8
Flow: 7
Plot: 8
Grammar : 4
Enjoyment: 5 Total : 49
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3rd place goes to
Keep Bleeding Love by EastCoastPinay
2nd place goes to
Stranger Connection by wanderedwriter
1st place goes to
Perfectly Unexpected by MiniMoxx
We do not want to disappoint the participants, so here is a sticker for you too!
Congatulations to all the winners!! We hope you go higher and higher in the future....and the others who didn't get the top three, don't worry... show your best next time.๐Thank you for participatingโค
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