
𝐎𝐧𝐞 𝐒𝐡𝐨𝐭/ 𝐓𝐰𝐨 𝐒𝐡𝐨𝐭 𝐑𝐞𝐬𝐮𝐥𝐭𝐬
First of all, thank you judge Kritix_love and -sarcasticchica- for spending your precious time on judging. We really are grateful to you♥️.
Here are your results participants!
Judge’s note-
Please don't be disheartened seeing the results and do remember that each and every one of you is a winner, despite what the following content says. It's totally my perspective. - Kriti.
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Reversed by Jim-mania
Title- 3/5
The title definitely relates to the story, but it’s not unique. Wattpad has many stories with the title ‘reversed’, so try thinking out of the box.
Cover- 4.5/5
Good work with the cover. The blending is perfect, but try and work with the font. The text written under reversed isn’t clearly readable.
Blurb- 7.5/10
I loved the small poetry which you have started the blurb with, and it is intriguing, but to let you know, readers usually reach out for books which provide at least a partial idea about the story, in clear words. Add a few lines after the poetry kinda thing and shift the -Written for Coffee And Crime Contest- at the last.
Characters- 8/10
I felt that the characters could have been described in more detail, as I didn’t feel any such connection with them. Other than that, it was good.
Flow- 9/10
It could have been a bit more longer, and scenes well described, as I felt it a bit rushed, but this one totally depends on peep’s viewpoints.
Plot- 9/10
The thing which you showed between Ida and Claire was amazing and I loved it!
Grammar- 9/10
I didn’t find many errors, but there were a few, which can be removed by editing.
Overall enjoyment- 9/10
Total- 59/70
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Tales from a sea by its_JuiShah
Title- 4.5/5
I absolutely loved the title. It’s unique and as far as I know, none of the books goes up with the same title on wattpad.
Cover- 3/5
Firstly, the pure product of the cover isn't the exact size that a wattpad cover should be. 512 x 800 pixels is what it should be. Secondly, the text could be improved, so that it gets more catchy.
Blurb- 7/10
To let you know, the blurb of a story is what ‘that’ book is all about, not what your other books are or other things as such. Asking for votes and reads on your other books, is not what is appreciable, as the readers would like to know what the book (in this case, tales from a sea) is.
Characters- 8/10
The character felt like a usual next door girl, and I could relate to her.
Flow- 8/10
I felt that the story was rushed. Try to explain scenes in detail, so that the readers can relate to them.
Plot- 8/10
The plot was greatly thought of, but implementation could have been much better.
Grammar- 9/10
I didn’t find many errors, just few here and there, that too of placement of punctuations and minor errors.
Overall enjoyment- 10/10
I absolutely enjoyed reading it!
Total- 57.5/70
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MY IMPERIOUS CEO by Gurin_04
Title- 5/5
The title goes pretty well with your story and compliments it well.
Cover- 2/5
The cover does not go with the story track, nor justifies what the plot is. The font of the title is too simple and the subtitle is not clearly readable. Maybe a picture of the CEO or any other ‘image’ would be good with proper font choice.
Blurb- 9/10
The blurb tells you what the book is all about and it is intriguing. Just do its editing and remove the minor grammatical errors.
Characters- 8/10
The female protagonist very much feels real to me and it is relatable. But, the male one felt a bit exaggerated.
Flow- 8/10
You should have explained the emotions invoking and scenes in detail, so that readers can relate.
Plot- 7/10
To start with, I have read many books of clumsy female protagonists and arrogant (imperious CEO) male protagonists. So, it was nothing new.
Grammar- 9/10
There are minor errors, not major ones, but try to add the dialogues in quotation marks instead of doing this thing (-----) or writing in caps.
Overall enjoyment- 8/10
I enjoyed reading it.
Total- 56/70
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Biblioklept by AlfionaLia
Please note that I have judged this book only by considering the first 2 parts, ‘cause apparently it’s a Oneshot/ two shot category.
Title- 5/5
I absolutely loved the title, honestly speaking. Great choice.
Cover- 5/5
It is simple, yes, but catchy and attractive. Font colour and choice too is awesome.
Blurb- 2/10
There is apparently no proper blurb, other than- ꧁ Sʜᴏʀᴛ Sᴛᴏʀɪᴇs ꧂Blurb plays a major part in catching reader’s attention. So do work on it.
Characters- 8/10
I could feel the female protagonist in the first two parts. Her doubts if she is special or not are relatable to me.
Flow- 6/10
I felt it was rushed, to say the least. Story means having some kind of ‘plot’ but it wasn’t. It felt like thoughts.
Plot- 7/10
The plot is intriguing, no doubt, but it’s not unique.
Grammar- 10/10
I didn't find any grammatical errors as such. Great job.
Overall enjoyment- 9/10
It was a good read and I enjoyed every bit of it.
Total- 52/70
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Home Free | All in One by Rachel_MercuryHolmes
• Title : 3.5/5
• Cover : 2/5
• Blurb : 2.5/10
• Characters : 4/10
• Flow : 3/10
• Plot : 5/10
• Grammar : 6/10
Overall Enjoyment : 7/10
Total : 33/70
The title made sense, because they were one shot collections of the band. But I would ask you to go for something more unique and exciting. The cover was quite common, I would ask you to get one better suited. The blurb told me nothing about what I was going to read, I would ask you to maybe add some dialogues and a short summary. The characters were okay but there was literally no mention of how they are, what they are like etc. For a person who has no idea about the band, it would be really weird reading it. All the stories were too short and fast paced. I would say, make them longer and more informative. I felt the plot was just an XReader kind of thing with a lot of fluff. The grammar was okay-ish, but please focus on grammar and punctuation. Overall, the story was fine for someone who knows the band well, but I have never heard of it, so I had no interest in reading the book.
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Conveniently Yours by Rinuesha
• Title : 4/5
• Cover : 2.5/5
• Blurb : 5/10
• Characters : 9.5/10
• Flow : 8/10
• Plot : 9/10
• Grammar : 8/10
Overall Enjoyment : 9/10
Total : 55/70
The title was perfect. But I would ask you to change the cover into something more elegant and relatable. The blurb could have quotes, dialogues and a brief summary of each story. I really loved the characters and they were developed quite well. The flow was good, but fast paced at times. The plot was great and eye-catching. There were a few typos and grammatical errors. Overall, I enjoyed the story and felt it has potential!
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Timeless by kakolisingha
• Title : 4.5/5
• Cover : 4.5/5
• Blurb : 9/10
• Characters : 9.5/10
• Flow : 9.5/10
• Plot : 10/10
• Grammar : 9/10
Overall Enjoyment : 10/10
Total : 66/70
The cover was beautiful and I really loved it! The title seemed perfect for the story. The blurb was good, but I would ask you to make it a tad bit more flowery with dialogues and also dividers and headers. The characters were amazing and I really fell in love with them. The plot of mostly all the one shots were exquisite and eye catchy. There were almost no grammatical errors or typos. Kudos on that, author! Overall the book was really great and I really loved it!
Results time!!
3rd place goes to
Tales from a sea by @its_JuiShah


2nd place goes to
Reversed by Jim-mania


1st place goes to
Timeless by kakolisingha


Congratulations all the winners!!! May you go higher and higher in the future!
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