𝐈𝐧𝐝𝐢𝐚𝐧 𝐅𝐚𝐧𝐟𝐢𝐜𝐭𝐢𝐨𝐧 𝐑𝐞𝐬𝐮𝐥𝐭𝐬
First of all, thank you judges love_at_first and little_birdie_ for taking part in judging. We really are very grateful to you♥️😁.
So, here are your results dear participants.
1. So far, yet so near by Fantastiasco
Title: 5 ( The title is perfect!)
Cover: 5 ( The cover is also perfect! It matches the title )
Blurb: 10 ( The blurb is written wonderfully... the characters pov was presented with a good quote and a few lines about the main plot. It's amazing)
Characters: 9 ( I love the way you depicted the male protagonist ... I could relate him a lot! This might be weird but I commet to Mallika a little too... lol... god! I love the way you represented the characters whom we actually feel. But a little introduction about them along with others in the starting is required. Rest all, it's perfect!)
Flow: 8 ( The flow is good, but in the fourth chapter I felt that it is dragged a little... but again, you're back in the sixth chapter. Also, the chapters are a little lengthy.)
Plot: 10 ( It is not a routine plot in wattpad. We only find rich guy , middle class girl bla bla... but this, is really different. It connects to the real world!)
Grammar: 10 ( Are you kidding me? Your grammar is absolutley wonderful!!! No mistakes at all!)
Overall enjoyment: 8 ( I really like the way you compared the protagonist's mood with the weather. I found it really special and unique. But, the problem that the chapters are a little lengthy... otherwise it's perfect! Usually I don't like ITV fanfictions.... but yours, intrigued me a lot!)
Total: 65/70
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2. Ideal World Isn't Real by @simifanfic
Title: 5 ( I really love the title and agree with it... It suits the story perfectly!)
Cover: 2 (The size of the cover is wrong. The author's name is not mentioned. Thought the editing is good, it needs a few elements related to the story.)
Blurb: 6 ( The backgrounds of both the protagonists is mentioned clearly. But a quote and a few more lines about the story should be added to make it look more attractive.)
Characters: 10 (The character development is amazing!! I also like that you introduced all your characters clearly at once.)
Flow: 8 (The first two chapters are really good! But the third chapter was rushed a little. I really love how you depicted the flashback and the main story at once.)
Plot: 7 (It's a routine wattpad ITV plot with some realistic elements. There is a little uniqueness in the male protagonist's story... but the female one is a usual one.)
Grammar: 5 (There are a lot of spelling errors and a few grammatical mistakes too... the book needs major editing.)
Overal enjoyment: 7
Total: 50/70
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3.The Broken Angel by Darshika13
Title: 5 (It's perfect)
Cover: 3.5 ( since the title is about broken angel, it would be nice if she's highlighted)
Blurb: 7 ( Addition of a few quotes and lines about the story should be added)
Characters: 10 ( Everything is perfectly presented)
Flow: 10 ( The flow is perfect! Never I felt it was off track)
Plot: 8 (I felt that it was a routine plot)
Grammar: 5
Overall: 8
Total: 56.5
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4. Thirst for Revenge by UfitinemaYvette
Title: 4 (The title is good, but something related to the college life would make it good I think.)
Cover: 3.5 (The words are not clear enough. The editing is amazing!)
Blurb: 6 (You only mentioned questions related to the story...
I would suggest you to add more details about the story in it.)
Characters: 10 ( I really like you portrayed the characters neatly.)
Flow: 10 ( I love the cliffhangers you used in the end of each chapter!)
Plot: 7 (I felt that this is a routine plot with a slight suspense )
Grammar: 5 ( Rather than using "u" I suggest you to use the full word "you". It's not only about this single word, many are like that.
Overall: 7
Total: 52.5
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5. Manan ff: searching my star in whole darkness by Sharmiteddy25
Title: 4 (The title is good, but I think you should keep a title which would relate to the actual point.)
Cover: 2.5(The text isn't matching the cover and the background too is not matching it.)
Blurb: 10 (Everything is mentioned perfectly )
Characters: 10 ( They are represented neatly!)
Flow: 10 (Nowhere I felt I missed the track)
Plot: 8 ( I found your plot very cute.... but still I found it routine from 3rd chapter)
Grammar: 7 (There are a few grammatical errors like using capitals in between. Other than that, there are none.)
Overall: 8 (I would really recommend you to read this cute tale)
Total: 59.5/70
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6.True love never exists by AeturnusMaNan
Title : 5 (It's perfect!!!)
Cover: 5 (God! I love it!)
Blurb: 6(There isn't much of blurb. I recommend you to add more content in it.)
Characters: 10
Flow: 10 (It's really beautiful!!)
Plot: 9 (The cutest and beautiful plot ever!! But I think the drama part is routine)
Grammar: 7 (I suggest you to use full words like "I am or I'm " instead of "M")
Overall: 9 (Come on, the story is good but the only down point is the grammar)
Total: 61/70
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7. Hamsa Naava by jaanu612
Title: 5 (It's perfect!)
Cover: 4 (I think the blue is little dominating)
Blurb: 10(Everything is mentioned perfectly and it's attractive)
Characters: 10 (Ofcourse it's a 10 because come on it's Bahubali characters and who won't love them?)
Flow: 9(Nowhere I felt it's out of track! Everything is perfect but I felt you rushed a little after their marriage)
Plot: 10 (I am a big fan of Bahubali and I love this plot a lot! )
Grammar: 10
Overall: 10 ( I strongly recommend evryone to read this beautiful tale)
Total: 68/70
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8.The mysterious wedding by KakaliMitra4
Title: 5
Cover: 3 (I think it should be more attractive)
Blurb: 8 (I think you should add a few more elements like a quote or a dialogue)
Characters: 9 (I know you introduced everything in the starting but I found it a little confusing further)
Flow: 10
Plot: 7 (Though it's a routine plot I really like a few intriguing elements you added.)
Grammar: 10
Overall: 8 (It's a good read!)
Total: 60/70
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9.My first true love by kayanair
Title (/5) - 4
Cover (/5) - 4
Blurb (/10) - 6
Character (/10) - 6
Plot (/10) - 7
Flow (/10) - 8
Grammar (/10) - 6
Overall enjoyment (/10) - 7
Total (/70) - 48
The cover and title are beautiful; the cover somehow gives vibe of a cliff which then connects me with Mysore. Title can be made a little more interesting though. The blurb is not completely on point, it doesn’t much intrigue one to go peek in and read the book. The characters are good but there is nothing very fascinating about them. There is no specification to any of the characters which makes them similar at a point. The flow is exciting but still lacks punch-lines. Overall the book is a good one and I guess is all about college and teen hormones.
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10. KGF – The History Changes by sharanyashiv7
Title (/5) - 4
Cover (/5) - 5
Blurb (/10) - 6
Character (/10) - 7
Plot (/10) - 7
Flow (/10) - 8
Grammar (/10) - 7
Overall enjoyment (/10) - 7
Total (/70) - 51
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11. A Wedding Investigation by inlovewsleep
Title (/5) - 5
Cover (/5) - 5
Blurb (/10) - 6
Character (/10) - 10
Plot (/10) - 9
Flow (/10) - 10
Grammar (/10) - 9
Overall enjoyment (/10) - 10
Total (/70) - 64
The cover and title are just fabulous; titles itself excites and intrigue one to just peep in and read this book. Blurb is short and simple; I would suggest you to write a solid interesting blurb for it. The characters are just bang on, there description and them as individual…Jesus! Wow!! You did a great job at this; each character is just amazingly portrayed. The plot is interesting and is something that I have never read. Flow is just perfect. There were very rare mistakes; grammatically it is good. Overall it’s a fantabulous book and I had a great time reading it.
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12. Entwined Destiny: Shivika by prachiraiii
Title (/5) - 4
Cover (/5) - 3
Blurb (/10) - 5
Character (/10) - 7
Plot (/10) - 7
Flow (/10) - 6
Grammar (/10) - 6
Overall enjoyment (/10) - 7
Total (/70) - 45
Title is good but can be made a bit stronger. Cover is simple and infact a little blur so I would recommend you to upgrade your book cover. The blurb is perfect. Characters are interesting but can be described more beautifully I guess. Plot is a common one and the flow I guess should be worked on. Also if we talk about grammar, I would suggest to you to focus more on your tenses and avoid the short forms. Overall it’s a good one but I would rather suggest this book to all the Non-Grammar-Nazis.
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13. His Queen by Siya_Stark3000
Title (/5) - 4
Cover (/5) - 5
Blurb (/10) - 7
Character (/10) - 8
Plot (/10) - 8
Flow (/10) - 8
Grammar (/10) - 9
Overall enjoyment (/10) - 10
Total (/70) - 59
The cover is beautiful. But I think the title could be made stronger. Blurb is
intriguing but at the same time is a little confusing. Throughout the story I
would suggest you to put translations in brackets wherever it is required
because I had to literally search all those words, so the foreign language can
sometimes be a turn off for the readers. The characters were interesting but at
the same time were kinda similar like I couldn't point out specifications of them
which made it a little difficult to understand them. The plot was something new
and creative yet confusing at times. The flow was good too but sometimes it
used to feel repetitive. Grammatically it was all good except for a few minor
mistakes. Overall it's an interesting book and can be given a chance to read.
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14. Beyond the ocean of love by urjapan
Title (/5) - 5
Cover (/5) - 5
Blurb (/10) - 6
Character (/10) - 7
Plot (/10) - 7
Flow (/10) - 8
Grammar (/10) - 7
Overall enjoyment (/10) - 7
Total (/70) - 52
Title and cover are just apt and perfect. But I would suggest you to work on your blurb, its less interesting and more confusing, please change that. The characters are interesting I think but then again less descriptive so difficult to imagine. Plot and flow is average, you can make it stronger. For grammar, I would suggest you to stick on one tense; I noticed that you usually switch tenses, that makes reading difficult so please avoid them. Overall it was a good read.
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15.Kyy : Kids (Love and Friendship) by VridheeChaudhry
Title (/5) - 3
Cover (/5) - 3
Blurb (/10) - 5
Character (/10) - 7
Plot (/10) - 7
Flow (/10) - 8
Grammar (/10) - 7
Overall enjoyment (/10) - 7
Total (/70) - 47
Title and cover both are very simple, if possible please change and make it something interesting and beautiful. Blurb has nothing about the story which can fascinate or attract anyone to read it; I would suggest you to write a solid blurb for it. The characters are well written but then there are so many of them which every time makes it very confusing, specially with so many kids and supporting roles, it looks very crowdy. Plot is nothing unique but still is a good one I must say. Flow is good to but can be improved. Grammatically I would suggest you to stick to the tenses and avoid short forms. Overall it’s an happy family show kinda book.
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Results time!!!!
3rd place goes to
A wedding investigation by inlovewsleep
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2nd place goes to
So far, yet so near by Fantastiasco
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The 1st place goes to
Hamsa Naava by jaanu612
Congratulations to all the winners! We hope you get higher and higher in the future!♥️😁
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