𝐇𝐢𝐬𝐭𝐨𝐫𝐢𝐜𝐚𝐥 𝐅𝐢𝐜𝐭𝐢𝐨𝐧 𝐖𝐢𝐧𝐧𝐞𝐫𝐬
First of all, thank you judges khushi_sri and kinalhariya for spending your precious time in taking part in judging. We really are very grateful towards your work😁♥️.
So, dear participants here are your results😁.
Judge: kinalhariya
Book:Leeward
Author: empiresofwater
Title:5/5
Cover:5/5
Blurb:9/10
Character:10/10
Flow:10/10
Plot:10/10
Grammar:9/10
Enjoyment:10/10
Total:68/70
Review: Title is perfect: Short and relatable. Cover was attractive and it clearly depicted the storyline. A strong opening; you managed to set the mood within first para itself. Characterization was done really well- I especially loved how you also showed ships and sea as the characters. Your really have a strong hold on the language. Apart from minor errors with commas, everything was written perfectly. Descriptions were so awesome that I could visualize the scenes. Your book is really captivating.
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Book: The Usurper's Queen
Author: shazzarra
Title: 5/5
Cover:5/5
Blurb:10/10
Character:10/10
Flow:10/10
Plot:10/10
Grammar:7/10
Enjoyment:10/10
Total:67/70
Review: Title is suitable. I absolutely adore your cover. It's simply gorgeous. Blurb was written so well that it made me excited to read your story. Characterization was done fantastically. Characters were unique yet relatable. Plot was so good. The political aspect was shown really well. The entire time I was ready, I was on the edge to see what would happen next. Look out for fluctuating tenses [they switched at many places] and capitalization of letter (i)[it didn't happen many times, but still check it out while editing]. There was a problem of spacing between paragraphs in few chapters[Paragraphs were changed at proper intervals but there was lack of space between them and it made it look shaby]. Overall, the book was unique and intriguing. I enjoyed reading it.
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Book:Yoon hi koi mil gaya tha
Author: daydreamingatnight19
Title:5/5
Cover:3/5
Blurb:9/10
Character:10/10
Flow:10/10
Plot:10/10
Grammar:7/10
Enjoyment:10/10
Total:64/70
Review: Title was nice. I loved the sub title in the cover. Blurb was attractive enough to pull the readers in. A great start. By reading it, I really felt that I was hearing a radio jockey. Characterization was done nicely. Even with similar names, they were easy to distinguish. Look out for missing Inverted commas and missing commas around the names of characters. The name Kalyani was used once instead of Urvi, so look out for that. It was an unique story and very nicely written. It was a simple, short and heart touching story.
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Book:Chalo ek baar phir ajnabee ban jaaye hum
Author: daydreamingatnight19
Title:5/5
Cover:4/5
Blurb:2/10
Character:10/10
Flow:9/10
Plot:8/10
Grammar:8/10
Enjoyment:9/10
Total:55/70
Review: Title is long but still interesting. Cover is nice. I would suggest writing something more in the blurb. I loved the way your sentences flow. They just melt into the heart. Look out for missing inverted commas and unnecessary capitalization of few words. Story was nice but it has potential to improve more.
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Book:Reaper in love
Author: gracemariyageorge
Title: 5/5
Cover:4/5
Blurb:7/10
Character:5/10
Flow:8/10
Plot:7/10
Grammar:2/10
Enjoyment:5/10
Total:43/70
Review: Title is eye-catching. Cover is nice too. Blurb was interesting, but it needs some editing because of grammatical mistakes. Plot was interesting, the past you have shown resembled one of the korean drama, I had watched. Along with punctuation, fluctuating tenses, you would need to work on sentences l structure. Your book has potential but needs thorough editing.
Judge: khushi_sri
The Silver Bloom BhumikaBV
Title: 4/5
Cover: 4/5
Blurb: 9/10
Characters: 7/10
Flow:8/10
Plot: 8/10
Grammar: 6/10
Overall enjoyment: 8/10
The title is unique, no doubt. I liked the cover, though I'd say that the tiara was not really needed. The blurb is carefully structured. Though I found one-two mistakes in it- a word or two were missing in the sentences, making them sound incomplete. The characters are well portrayed, but I would have liked to read about them in a more detailed manner. If the emotions they felt were described in more detail, I feel it would have been better. The flow is constant but fast paced. The plot is nice; the mix of historical fiction and fantasy blended really well. The grammar is where I feel that more effort can be put into it. At some places, the tenses kept changing, and endearments/titles like 'Papa' and 'Pitashree' were used interchangeably, though it happened only once. There wasn't any major error, but at places there were words that could be replaced with some other word, which makes the sentence sound phonetically correct. A very wonderful read!
Total: 54/70
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Fearless: book 1 of the Rajkumari Trilogy Riptideinker007
Title: 4/5
Cover: 3/5
Blurb: 8/10
Characters: 8/10
Flow: 8/10
Plot: 9/10
Grammar: 9/10
Overall enjoyment: 9/10
The title is okay, a little common though. The cover is fine, but it can be a little more eye-catching with another font. The blurb was well written. The characterization is beautiful, though there was some confusion in the beginning. The descriptions were thoughtfully designed. I liked the start of the story; it was gripping. The flow was nice, and was smooth throughout. The plot was wonderful, it was a page-turner. The grammar is very good, though there were a few typographical errors here and there. The glossary at the end of each chapter is very helpful, though the length of the chapters can be reduced a bit. Overall it is a nice book, and makes for a good read.
Total: 57/70
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Karn's Realization _Historywriter_
Title: 3/5
Cover: 4/5
Blurb: 9/10
Characters: 5/10
Flow: 5/10
Plot: 5/10
Grammar: 4/10
Overall enjoyment: 7/10
I couldn't understand the relevance of the title much, maybe because it wasn't explained in great detail. The cover is okay, but the font used for the author's name and graphic designer's name doesn't suit. Also, it doesn't really match the theme character of the story, that is, Karn. The blurb is good, I must say. It did pique my interest. About the characters, it would have been better if some depth was shown in them. What they're feeling at a moment, their reactions, all that was missing. The flow is very fast. The plot is fine, I would like to see it develop further. The grammar can be improved. Titles and names like Guru, Karn start with a capitalized letter, and take care of punctuations, which were missing at places. Overall it can be a good read if more descriptions are added and scenes are described in detail. Try not to use images to describe someone or something, instead show it with words.
Total: 43/70
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Surya Putra Karn Siya_Stark3000
Title: 4/5
Cover: 3/5
Blurb: 8/10
Characters: 8/10
Flow: 5/10
Plot: 7/10
Grammar: 5/10
Overall enjoyment: 6/10
The title is true to the theme of the story. The cover is fine, but it can be improved. The blurb was intriguing. Characters can be a little more described, that depth in the flaws and description is missing. The flow is a little fast, you can slow it down a little. You need to work upon the grammar. Starting letters of titles and names like Karn should be capitalized in between the sentences too. There were changes in tenses at some places, correct them. There were a number of spelling mistakes too, edit them. Try adding more descriptions of the surroundings, and the characters too, show what is happening, not just tell the readers, give them pointers to imagine the scene. The story is nice, but I would have enjoyed it a little more if extra care was taken of the grammar and some depth was given to the characters.
Total: 46/70
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Stalemate: Rise to Power (@-sunsett)
Title: 5/5
Cover: 4/5
Blurb: 9/10
Characters: 8/10
Flow: 8/10
Plot: 8/10
Grammar: 9/10
Overall enjoyment: 9/10
The title is apt to the story. The cover looks fine, giving the feels of the story and quite relevant to it, but somehow the patterns on the red background distract a bit. The blurb was beautifully structured. About the characters, they felt real, and were able to invoke emotions. The flow varied- first it was a bit slow, but later it caught pace. I won't say that the plot was unique, but it was definitely worth a read. The mix of time periods gave the necessary space to imagine. When talking about grammar, it's beautiful. There were no spelling or grammatical mistakes, and did not give any major hiccups throughout the story, though there were some punctuation errors and a word or two missing too. The descriptions provided were apt, and painted a picture of the scene that was taking place, though the chapters seemed a bit long. Overall it is a wonderful story.
Total: 60/70
RESULTS!!!
3rd place goes to....
Yoon hi koi mil gaya tha
By daydreamingatnight19
2nd place goes to
The Userper's Queen
By shazzarra
1st place goes to
Leeward
We do not want to disappoint the participants, so here is a sticker for you too!
Congratulations to all the winners!! We hope you get higher and higher in the future... and the others who didn't get the top three, don't worry... show your best next time 😁
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