
𝐀𝐜𝐭𝐢𝐨𝐧 𝐚𝐧𝐝 𝐀𝐝𝐯𝐞𝐧𝐭𝐮𝐫𝐞 𝐑𝐞𝐬𝐮𝐥𝐭𝐬
First of all, thank you judge simranandani50 for spending your precious time in taking part in judging. We are really are very grateful towards your work 😁❤.
Here are the results dear participants😃
Name: King Eden
By: RowanCarver
Title: 4
Cover: 3
Blurb: 7
Characters:9
Flow: 8
Plot: 10
Grammar: 10
Overall Enjoyment:68%
The title is alright though it is confusing.The cover doesn't match no more words. There is so much happening in the blurb, which makes you want to read more. The characters are there although, in the beginning they were confusing. The flow is moving along but again, it's slightly confusing. The plot is interesting, i feel so happy that it was about a lady who isn't a damsel in distress,but a queen who deserves respect. The grammar is perfect with how much I've read. I enjoyed reading though there are some parts that are confusing but that's no issue.
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Name: Adventure In a different world
By: Lilylotus9002
Title :4
Cover:5
Blurb:3
Characters: 7
Flow:6
Plot:5
Grammar: 3
Overall Enjoyment:50%
I found the title relevant to the story. The cover is beautiful and also relevant. The blurb is not that intriguing really but its there if your patient mostly from the 3rd chapter..its makes you feel things. The characters were well described but they were also slightly confusing..and there are so many emotions everywhere. The flow seems rushed somehow but in some chapters it's smooth. The plot needs revision but it's well explained from chapter three onwards. The grammar needs alot of correction to make it perfect. It was worthy for a try and it was so brave of the author to write such a piece.Needs alot correction to make it perfect..
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Name: Syanic Earth:Worldwide cataclysm Book 1, Eclipser conflict}!"
By: PhilipHShen
Title-5
Cover-4
Blurb-5
Characters-9
Flow-9
Plot -8
Grammar -9
Overall Enjoyment -67 %
The title is interesting. The cover is beautiful. The blurb is so nice. I felt like I'm playing a video game. The names are wow. Oh felt sad when the android whose the friend of shien was insulted which was mean. The flow is perfect if you take you take your time. The plot is unique and intriguing It was so creative of the authors to separate the two world's. The grammar had a few mistakes. I give it all of that because some parts are confusing but other than that I enjoyed it a lot mostly the pictures they are so pretty...one worthy piece of work.
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Name:Aragons
By: earlfangs
Title -5
Cover-5
Blurb-9
Characters -9
Flow-10
Plot-9
Grammar-10
Overall Enjoyment:70%
The title is unique. The cover is related and beautiful. The blurb has so much happening that wants you reading and a lot of tension to find out...The characters feel unrealistic but wow. So many emotions mostly pride and excitement when those dark sports are defeated. The flow is perfect. The plot is unique and intriguing..her sacrifice is what makes her so brave. The grammar is perfect. It's an interesting and exciting piece. I loved this one so much because I learnt something from it.
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Name: The Green Guardian
By: CroodsGirl
Title-5
Cover-5
Blurb-10
Characters- 9
Flow-9
Plot-10
Grammar-9
Overall Enjoyment:70%
The title is unique and rare. The cover is lovely and related. I liked the blurb a lot...the beginning is quite sad though, when the the gurdian is harmed.But she is a fighter whose brave to save the young boy. The characters, wow..here there so many emotions going on but it worthy. The flow is interestingly going smoothly..so perfect.The plot is well explained and makes you curious. There are only two or one grammatical mistakes from what I've read. I give it all because it my first time to read this it so well written and I'm so grateful that I'm judging search a great piece.
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Name:Ocean Storm
By: VictoriaLachac
Title-4
Cover-4
Blurb-8
Characters-10
Flow-9
Plot-8
Grammar-9
Overall Enjoyment-60%
The title is alright and yes relatable. The cover is simple and perfect. The blurb is confusing at first but when you go deep then things make sense..which is interesting. The characters are well put and there is so much pain I felt for the young girl.Its sad that she is unloved by her mom. The flow is perfect. The plot is interesting and mostly most events feel real,where some chapters make you feel the pain of the young girl. There are just a few grammatical errors but it's perfect mostly. I give it that because it was worthy reading and one wonderful piece..go girl..
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3rd place goes to
Kind Eden by RowanCarver
2nd place goes to
Aragons by earlfangs
1st place goes to
The Green Guardian by CroodsGirl
Congratulations to all the winners!
We hope you go even higher and higher in the future!
Now participants don't feel low, you only didn't win this time. Take this as an opportunity to improve yourself and never give up!
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