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Werewolf/Vampire Results

First of all, thank you judges kinalhariya , enslavedreader and diamond--ice for spending your precious time in taking part in judging. We really are very grateful towards your work😁♥️.

So, dear participants here are your results😁.

Judge: kinalhariya

Book: PALINGENESIS

Author: Lovatic_HarryHook

Scores-

Title:5/5

Cover:3/5

Blurb:9/10

Characters:9/10

Flow:9/10

Plot:10/10

Grammar:8/10

Overall Enjoyment:9/10

Total=62/70

Review: Powerful start. I was hooked from the starting sentence itself. There were few wrong words used. Look out for them along with punctuation errors. Blurb was truly amazing though few words seemed missing. The chapters were really interesting. The biased behavior was nicely portrayed. I enjoyed the meet of both the leads. A small suggestion- Break the chapter when the scene changes towards the other lead as it seems abrupt.

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Book: A Shadow In The Reaping

Author: brynneweaver

Scores-

Title:5/5

Cover:3/5

Blurb:9/10

Characters:10/10

Flow:10/10

Plot:10/10

Grammar:8/10

Overall Enjoyment:10/10

Total=65/70

Review: Title is nice. Blurb is truly intriguing. First chapter was hooking to say the least. I had so much fun while reading the lead's narrative. Her thoughts, sass; everything was enjoyable. The punch lines used were awesome. Just look out of spelling mistakes and fluctuating tenses.

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Book: Call of the Wolves

Author: InsanityIntrovert

Scores-

Title:5/5

Cover:5/5

Blurb:8/10

Characters:10/10

Flow:10/10

Plot:10/10

Grammar:8/10

Overall Enjoyment:10/10

Total=66/70

Review: I was drawn to the story just by reading the Blurb, it was really hooking. I found the cover attractive. A great start. It was one of the best prologues, I have ever read. I loved how your story flows. Emotions of the main lead are nicely portrayed. The nightmares were really intriguing. Lookout for fluctuating tenses, missing quotation mark. Few sentences were structured differently but overall the book was nicely written

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Book: Not What you Expected

Author: dallas1213

Scores-

Cover:5/5

Blurb:7/10

Characters:10/10

Flow:7/10

Plot:8/10

Grammar:4/10

Overall Enjoyment:7/10

Total=53/70

Review: Cover is beautiful and Title is intriguing too. Blurb is nice but I would suggest adding something more to it. Lookout for missing commas, missing words, fluctuating tenses and minor plot holes. Story takes an interesting turn after fifth chapter. The dreams brought a new and amazing twist to the story.

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Judge: enslavedreader

Book: Flight 118

Author: EmaBeresh

Title : 4/5

Cover : 3/5

Blurb : 8/10

Characters : 8/10

Flow : 7/10

Plot : 9/10

Grammar : 8/10

Overall Enjoyment : 8/10

Total = 63

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Book: Forbidden Love

Author: Rinuesha

Title : 2/5

Cover : 2/5

Blurb : 9/10

Characters : 8/10

Flow : 7/10

Plot : 9/10

Grammar: 7/10

Enjoyment: 8/10

Total : 52

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Book: Tribrid War

Author: AndiRich

Title : 2/5

Cover: 2/5

Blurb : 4/10

Characters: 5/10

Flow: 6/10

Plot: 6/10

Grammar: 5/10

Enjoyment: 4/10

Total: 34

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Book: Daffodil

Author: bored_mama

Title : 5/5

Cover : 5/5

Blurb: 7/10

Characters: 7/10

Flow: 6/10

Plot: 9/10

Grammar: 9/10

Enjoyment: 6/10

Total score: 54

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Judges: diamond--ice

Book: Once hungry twice bitten

Author: ChloeLeia561

Title: 5/5
(I like it. I haven't seen it before and I do think that it matches the theme of the story whilst leaving mystery as to what it could mean.)

Cover: 3/5
(It's interesting but I'm not sure if that's a good thing. I can't see how it links to the title or the story from first look; it just doesn't relate. There are some other covers I've noticed that would suit your story much better than this one.)

Blurb: 4/5
(This blurb is informative and gives a lot on the story without giving the story away. I feel there could be more but it is fine the way that it is and it's intriguing.)

Characters: 8/10
(Characters are okay. The highlight of flaws and growth would make it even better to see them work on even something small but other than that it's a great story.)

Flow: 9/10
(I think it flowed well. I didn't want to stop reading. It was a perfect pace and it developed well.)

Plot: 9/10
(Very original. I haven't seen one like it before. It keeps the reader entertained and wanting to find out what happens next so well done with that. When reading I felt like I was right there with them in the story.)

Grammar: 10/10
(From what I can see your grammar is spot on, which is something hard to perfect when writing, not sure if I missed anything but if I did then it must be unnoticeable.)

Overall Enjoyment: 8/10

Total: 61/70

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Book:The Vampire Queen

Author: MoonDahliaWrites

Title: 4/5
(Simple but effective and it lets you know a bit about the story. It does lack originality but it works.)

Cover: 4/5
(Attention to detail is everything. The little drops of blood signifies the presence of the vampire. It's a simple cover but it works.)

Blurb: 10/10
(This blurb is short however it does exactly what it needs to do. It adds just enough information to tell you what the story is about without giving away anything and it adds mystery with questions leading you to want to read on and to know more.)

Characters: 9/10
(Your characters are all unique and different. I enjoyed getting to know them and learning more about them. They have their flaws which we all have and it's nice to read a story that can highlight them. It's relatable and I feel the reader will enjoy it.)

Flow: 9/10
(Apart from the long paragraphs it has a very nice flow and it isn't too fast, it's detailed and a nice read.)

Plot: 9/10
(Very interesting plot with great potential to be an amazing story. The plot develops nicely and is very intriguing and well written. When reading I didn't want to stop.)

Grammar: 9/10
(Some paragraphs are too long and throw off the flow of the chapters making it a harder read. Apart from that everything else seems to be in good order.)

Overall Enjoyment: 9/10

Total: 63/70

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Book: Betas unwanted wife and the curse

Author: Niki_p367

Title: 4/5
(Informative you know there is definitely something behind this name and it pulls you in with many questions. Like what is the curse? Why is the wife unwanted? However, it does lack originality but there is nothing wrong with using something that everyone loves.)

Cover: 4/5
(The cover is magical and gives off a sense that there is more to this unwanted wife than it seems. From the cover I get she is powerful and that leads to more questions as to why she's unwanted.)

Blurb: 8/10
(Very descriptive with a lot of information. I like the start opening with an actual part of the chapter. Reading this blurb invites you in and makes you want to read more, however in some parts it's quite repetitive and it loses its flow. Maybe changing or taking out some of these parts will help it read better.)

Characters: 7/10
(They are interesting and you can tell which character is meant for what part, like who is funny and who is strict. They can be relatable at times but sometimes it's a little too excessive but it's not so noticeable.)

Flow: 6/10
(The storyline flows well and connects, however it can be hard to keep the flow of the story as some words and letters are missing and some of the word placements throw off the sentences.)

Plot: 7/10
(The initial plot is interesting and definitely something that would keep the reader entertained. It does move quite quickly as the story starts with her moving to her sister. I would give this story points for originality as I haven't seen one like it. Usually, the female is linked to the Alpha.)

Grammar: 4/10
(There are some letters missing or words missing in some places. Punctuation is missing at the end of some sentences and there is incorrect use of paragraphs. Sentences are hard to read because of some mistakes within them and can be a little bit off putting.)

Overall Enjoyment: 6/10

Total: 46/70

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Book: Huntington

Author: DreamingAlexis

Title: 3/5
(It's short and sweet which is good but it tells me nothing interesting about it and I feel it could use more creativity.)

Cover: 4/5
(The cover is fascinating, it's simple yet effective. Matching the blurb and the vibe of a strong she wolf. I like the use of the female standing before the wolf even though it is effective it still lacks creativity.)

Blurb: 6/10
(Sometimes short isn't always better. Your blurb doesn't pull me in, however it does give context into the story and spikes my curiosity. There is some creativity to it as I've never seen a story come close to this kind of description.)

Characters: 9/10
(You have very different yet interesting characters. Your characters feel as real as they could get with emotions that most of us can relate to. I could feel the fear of the young wolves and the relief when they were let go almost as if I were actually there. However, I do feel some characters could be given a bit more to add their purpose to the story.)

Flow: 9/10
(Your flow is at a really good pace. I think each scene so far has been executed smoothly. The only thing I would say is that in some parts there is a lot of description around things that could cause the reader to become withdrawn other than that it's perfect.)

Plot: 9/10
(I think your plot is very original and it runs well and is different from other stories I've read. It is not very predictable which is good as it keeps the readers guessing and pulls them in. I feel it is as real as it can be for a werewolf story and honestly it is really intriguing.)

Grammar: 10/10
(From what I can see there aren't any mistakes, the structure is great. The use of paragraphs is efficient and the use of writing devices such as pathetic fallacy and metaphors are all executed excellently well done.)

Overall enjoyment: 7/10

Total 57/70

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3rd place goes to....

The Vampire Queen by MoonDahliaWrites
And
Flight 118 by EmaBeresh

2nd place goes to

A shadow in Reaping by brynneweaver

1st place goes to

Call of the Wolves by InsanityIntrovert

We do not want to disappoint the participants, so here is a sticker for you too!




Congratulations to all the winner! We hope you get higher and higher in the future... and the others who didn't get the top three, don't worry... show your best next time 😁


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